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I.Jesus Spoke to His Father

Jesus spoke to His Heavenly Father
Raising up to heaven His ardent pray’r
With deep bleeding wounds that he’d all endured,
Still hang on the cross to make our soul pure.
Words He uttered were for world forgiveness
"They don’t know what they’re doing," His confess
Through heaven signs, God was a listener
Pouring His grace – we behold His power
Jesus spoke to God on behalf of us
Great messiah, our savior…we must trust
Giving himself to stoic suffering 
Unparalleled to all, God’s so Loving
First word on the cross heals souls of the throng
Praise Him! Let’s all sing our thanksgiving songs!          Luke 23:34   
   
II.Jesus and the Criminal

Praise Him!  Let’s all sing our thanksgiving songs
In His Glory, He wants us to belong
With contrite heart, if we truly repent
Divine Light spurts from His heart: life ‘s pure vent.
Like the criminals on sides of His cross
One spoke to Him, asked favor in remorse
"I tell you the truth,"  His precious surprise
"Today you’ll be with me in paradise."
Tis epitome of passion and mercy
In vast ocean of love and boundless sea
An invitation for eternal life
Offered at His cross, priceless cost was rife.
His second word will trawl wicked spirits,
Lure discipleship so we’ll never drift!                        Luke 23:43

III.Jesus’ Mother

Lure discipleship so we’ll never drift
From Father to His child, a snuggling lift
His third word addressed to Mary and John
He then said, "Dear woman here is your son."
To the disciple, "here is your mother"
As John was His most faithful follower.
For love and faith reside in God’s children
Each one belongs to each other ‘til  end.
A grateful child looks back to where he’d come
Thanking his parents’ love beyond realm
So much as the love of God the Father 
Which will remain forever and ever.
Father All-Source is mighty for each child
Gifting him birth, back to Christ to abide!                  John 19: 26-27            

IV.Jesus’ Cry

Gifting him birth, back to Christ to abide,
The reason why His son turned to Him, cried:
Eli, Eli lama sabachthani?
My God, my God why’ve you forsaken me?
Not a complain, just clinging while in pain,
Calling His Father- His Love’s sweet refrain!
On that very day in the dark of noon,
After three hours, His Saving Grace shone! 
Jesus’  fourth word on the cross had revealed
His heart of faith, shook the earth to rebuild
Calling our Father who cannot endure
Seeing  His Son’s wounds--- His scorching love pours!
Yet, Jesus showed obedience, sacrifice…
Through Him, our deliverance has no price .                    Mathew 27:46                           

V.Jesus’  Thirst

Through Him, our deliverance has no price
As Jesus did what the scripture implied
Fifth word on the cross: a man’s needs entice
Longed for water, “I’m thirsty,” He cried.
A thirst of forgiveness from our Father
For man’s deep contrition without struggle
Holding God’s love relieves thirst and hunger
His words also wash doubts and troubles.
For water is life, flows to purify
Pow’red by Holy Spirit since we’re baptized
Crave being cleansed, in His spirit we rely
Seek God first then our happiness comes thrice.
His prolonged lamentation was so blessed,
Jesus’ word on the cross is my life’s vest!                   John  19:  28                                                 

VI.It is Finished

Jesus’ word on the cross is my life’s vest
Safest roost in my soul, it will create 
My sweet refuge,  soft adobe for my rest
Giving strength, when my wheels of hope deflate.
Sixth word on the cross showed His fulfillment
By conquering darkness, His glorious reigned!
"It’s finished," Christ expressed with endearment,
World redemption has sent—our precious gain.
These words commenced our new life, our rebirth,
Bringing back the lost souls and wanderers
By His precious blood shed throughout the earth
Now in our heart we shall feel His wonder!
It’s finished: words of Divine Deity,
When His cross stood tall at Mount Calvary.                     John 19:30                                                      


VII. Jesus’ Spirit

When His cross stood tall at Mount Calvary
Sun ceased shining, the sky veiled by darkness
Temple curtain torn, Christ cried out loudly
Self-offering cry to the Great Highness!
"Father! In your hands I place my spirit!"
His tune of rendition, scattered all seeds
Upon these words  He died for our merit
Now, on Lent, Forever--- Hail Christ’s Good Deeds!
Upon these words  God and Son became one,
Wreath of Trinity in His obedience
Jesus Christ was certainly a good man
As Acclaimed near His cross ‘til  far distance!
Christ’s seventh word  gives full strength, great relief
Like Him,  raise ourselves to God-so our grief .                    Luke 23:46                                     


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May  21, 2016     10.15pm

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Date: 5/4/2017 10:53:00 PM
This is worth the long read :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/13/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for your time to read my long poem and other poems my dear friend, Debbie. Your kind visit is highly appreciated however, I'm sorry for my reply comes only now coz of so many concerns in my life up to this moment: my family esp. my brother, my load of work and esp. my health. I'll be coming back to visit everyone hopefully after I've gone all through these. Again, my profound thanks. God bless.
Date: 12/25/2016 10:17:00 PM
Magnificent work.. Have to fav this inspiring gem! Such depth of beauty and inspirational verses!A7
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Date: 12/25/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Rob. It's an honor to know you fav this poem of mine. Thanks for the 7! May God bless you and your family! Merry Christmas once again! Hugs!
Date: 10/13/2016 11:33:00 AM
Beautifully written.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/16/2016 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Carol. I appreciate so much taking your time to read this religious poem of mine. I wrote this just to remind myself about the order of Jesus' 7 last words on the cross. I just read your soup mail reply. Sorry it took time to reply coz I just came back home from a trip. I am happy for you that many people benefit a lot on your fantastic stories. May I share some also to my students if you don't mind pls.? Thank you so much.I'll give you soupmail soon. Hugs and God bless!
Date: 8/31/2016 12:02:00 AM
wonderful journey via your inspiration and words. Thank You.It took me back to Israel which I visited in1996.
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/6/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit my dear friend, Michael. I visited also Israel 2013 and it's a great feeling to write something to remind our journey. TYTYSM again. God bless!
Date: 6/19/2016 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet friends for visiting this poem but i decided not to change the rhyme pattern of the 4 sonnets anymore for i found it quite difficult to change already. :( Again, TYTYSM for reading and God bless you! Hugs!
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Date: 6/4/2016 3:10:00 PM
Dear Galeo, As the Father hath love me, so have I loved you: continue ye in my Love....
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/5/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Pashang! Hugs!
Date: 5/31/2016 3:06:00 AM
Hello, sis.... Beautiful sonnets my lovely and talented friend. Overwhelming writes, each one. I imagine you sad and did each one with the greatest part of you. .. a beautiful 7 my sister and Bff... Love always... Linda
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Date: 6/4/2016 4:38:00 AM
Hi, my dearest sis! Thank you so much for coming by to read my poem done for quite a long time. Thank you so much for your inspiring /encouraging accolade, it means a lot to me especially that my aunt (deaconess) asked it for her future use. I wrote this with sadness too esp. during the season. Thanks for the 7 my beloved sis. Sending you my loving hugs and kisses. I came back home from school, but I took a 3 hrs nap and Thanks God I restored some energy so I'm here. Happy and Blessed Wkend to you and your family!
Date: 5/22/2016 4:37:00 PM
ohh, when it comes to divine messages and songs, you truly shine, lory... i hope you publish a devotional book soon... enjoyed our chat!.. huggs and take care!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/29/2016 8:26:00 AM
hugs back at you and take care, too!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/29/2016 8:23:00 AM
thank you so much for your nice compliment/encouraging feedback my dear friend nette. sorry for coming just now because super duper busy till now, weekend but i need to drop by to say thank you so much. i will be back soon to read poems and edit mine. happy weekend!
Date: 5/21/2016 10:02:00 AM
This was a try of a crown of sonnet. I wrote the first four sonnets two years ago,I think by March 2014 before Lent. However, I didn't follow the rhyme pattern abab...I'll change it when I've time and not lazy. I finished the three last sonnets today by following the right rhyme pattern. JUSt A TRY..
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
of crown of sonnet. But I did not enter in the contest.

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