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"Exegesis"
At 7 he was
thrown to the wolves
Bede marked his territory
hidden secrets
kept in the abbey
he escaped
went to war
where the unwanted trod
First regiment,
Vietnam
he took with him
like a comfort blanket
his Nicene creed and God
and on returning
from Hell
which never
really left him
any peace,
the burning extraction came
the loss of the comfort
long longed for and missed
love and the Golden Fleece
torn to bits,
a wife
and what little he knew of love
stolen too soon, way before time
he turned to poetry and
the comfort of stories
through fable and Rhyme
he considered
ditching it all
somewhere inside
there came another call -
army transitioned
khaki to blue Air
flight lieutenant
wings and all
another climb
rolling a rock
like Sisyphus
up the god-damned stairs
where that thing
called God
called from its seat,
"Have you considered theology
becoming a Jesuit priest?"
He sought it out
commenced it
then followed a retreat...
Another discipline for
himself and the three
Evensong and Sundays
without missing a beat, regularly
like a flagellant
whipping the loss of life
the lack of sins
ridiculously repenting for
nothing he'd ever done wrong
a very good man,
with a mother who really didn't care
and a father, totally unknown and long gone
He kicked himself as a failure
when in fact he was
courageous and strong
He was just
caught in Life's sticky net
Exegesis
St James
Anglo Catholic
never Anglican
he would heartily insist
close to the pulpit
Row 6, kneeling in prayer
with his three
confirmed innocents
He considered the evening menu
store bought from the local
Fish 'n Chips for a treat,
Coleridge, an Ancient Mariner
stopping one of three
and an Albatross
will see the little heathens through -
just for good measure,
he'll teach them
the Nicene too
Exegesis
the envelope pushed forward
Eisegesis
grey sky or blue
they will make up their own minds
on which god to hold space for
he reasons
what is false
what is true
(Ladylabyrinth / 2020)
for my father
much missed and much loved -
the closest I've ever been to God
llb - klb - mlb
"Miserere mei" / Agnus Dei Volumes 1 & 2 / Edward Higginbottom
https://youtu.be/rs5bc_P1kKo
"At first it seemed a little speck,
And then it seemed a mist;
It moved and moved, and took at last
A certain shape, I wist"
1. Exegesis
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Exegesis
2. Eisegesis
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eisegesis
3. The Venerable Bede
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bede
4. Australian Royal Commission into Child Sexual Abuse within Religion
https://www.childabuseroyalcommission.gov.au/case-studies/case-study-05-salvation-army-boys-homes-australia-eastern-territory
5. Vietnam War
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vietnam_War
6. First Australian Regiment into Vietnam
https://www.awm.gov.au/collection/U53496
7. LUX VITAE/ Latin translation.
7.a. Nicene Creed
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nicene_Creed
7.b. "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner" / Samuel Taylor Coleridge
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/43997/the-rime-of-the-ancient-mariner-text-of-1834
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