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Our World

Our World

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Our world, comprised of differing blends
of silence and activity
among strangers and friends,
who practice in our domes
to smooth and to mend
rough edges and splintered ends,
offer a twice daily blessing
for who do, and who do not,
cling to the Lord's breast,
(we yoke ourselves to a life that Living Itself deems best)
with a grip that grows stronger every day

Premium Member AFRICAN QUEEN

Eccentric
Journey of the Black Woman
Life and Times of African Queens
Sheer beauty, Wit and Strength
Destiny comprised
Eyes propel truth
African Queens know what they want
Turning negative approaches into opportunity
Tribal Accent
Tribal Heritage
African tribute
Essence from the skies
Standing alone
Enterprising paths through the branches of success
Mercy and Grace that follow
Determinations showing courageous and no fear
Through the airs of assurance
Action of preserver
Mission to transform
Transitional Spirit
Permission granted
Impact from detail
Sunshine casting the spotlight
Charm every step of the way
Golden treasure
Committed to tomorrow in agenda to complete
Not thinking defeat nor will retreat
Standing firm on affirmative
African Queen walks in the sunsets in what accomplishments that were done
Challenges through the objectives
Walking in what destiny calls
Falls but gets up
No time for pity having everything to gain
Helping a world to understand a African Queen’s value
Commodity assured
Pursue in succeed
African Queens developing a creed.

Premium Member The Greatest Plan

Can we still be recognized
Who would give a damn
We are documents, comprised 
Nowhere woman, nowhere man
It turns out to be the same
About other people
Some of whom are quite insane
Voices loud, minds feeble
They can’t speak for me, I bet
But they do, regardless
It’s the greatest plan been set 
To eliminate us.


Premium Member No Idea

No idea just what they’re for –
But when I’m held, they touch the floor;
Dad then moves them each in turn
As if there’s something I should learn.
 
They certainly have a lot of toes,
When I can count, I’ll let you know;
But I can reach them each to wiggle,
Tickling me enough to giggle.
 
And though I’m chillin’ on my back,
I sense there’s something that I lack,
Can’t wait for whatever may come next –
As life’s comprised of tiny steps.

Premium Member The first days of winter

Indian summer come and gone
the winds have turned cold
the trees now almost bare.
Reaching for our warmer coats,
there’s no denying fall’s arrived.

The first snow has fallen.
The forecasts had warned us,
still it was a shock to all.
As for me I had a strategy.
I locked my door and stayed inside,
I planned to let my system adjust
no matter how long it would take.

A couple days of stubbornness,
I start to finally see the light.
I remember things I like
about the period gearing up to Christmas.
The happiness within begins again to stir ~



Lineku: 3 lines of 5-7-5 each line comprised of 5 or 7 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member Call going out to all

Focus on my passion
Oasis in the dark  Go ahead
Hear me now  As stories might start
Life and love foretell   Of celestial dreams 

The bluest  Incursion of death
From dream to full passion
Standing alone  Seeking solace  
Peace felt  Caressing the eternal

Stare deep into  The music beyond 
Not such a thing  Under a ladder
Tread gently  Like nothing before
Hidden  Find it all  More resilient  

What’s worse  Worse than the evil shown
Fallen apart  Finally away from them
Creature of the night  As from the ashes
Depleted I’ve seen nothing new

Heard your voice  From the start
Quite a ride  Let the dance continue
Darkened streets  All that’s seen  
Imagine now  With more to come

Walking with white butterflies
For a mere ounce  Sensing the same 
Once viewed different  Don’t even try
Only if to direct  Dying in the dark

All I See  More than just  Darkest of dreams
Willing or not  Have no choice  Calling Hades
Only seeing the dark  Fragments of hell  
Day finally come  Beware the Windigo ~

(Comprised totally of titles of poems written by poet Flipsider)



AP: Honorable Mention 2025


Gazing Outward I Look Within

The manifold stars that blanket the sky
draw our eyes up in awe of the depths within sight
while turning us inward
to reflect upon God and His heavenly might.

As I gaze out at this starry expanse
and imagine all the work that it comprised
I realize that it could never have been just chance
that created the wonder now filling my eyes.

How amazing that God could create
this vast creation within our sight
and yet with that same mighty hand
gently opens our hearts to His heavenly light.

03/05/14

Premium Member The Wizard of Oz

Dorothy's friends comprised a quite motley lot
Wanted Wizard to fix things that were shot.
         Thought Wizard surely must know
          best fixes for poor ego
 Instead he said "These guys the best you've got?"

forward thinking drive

never afraid to ask many a question
never afraid to undertake a suggestion
are those with forward thinking drive
as they reach out further so they strive

steering away far from the hive like mind
and the blindness eyes of most humankind
 not becoming lost inside the vast mind invasion
or falling for the tricks of one true great salesman

they don`t want to lose what they freely own
rather bled blood then be another duplicate clone
so they live their lives risking to be ostracized
never being the ones to become totally comprised

listening to both sides before making a decision
something we`ve lost with this new world vision
because they have different views and opinions
 they are told they are societies biggest villains

Premium Member On a vellum page

There's no fiction within love far as the feeling is comprised
Don't know for certain, but it seems a true fairytale (surprised?)
Wrapped in this cocoon, two notes pressed on a vellum page
The finest to compose couldn't play our song; for a kings wage
In keys, so somber you flow throughout my melodies 
A duet we are of the souls simple subliminal memories 
Every moment of you, I find in time is this, now so comforting
When we meet in the next life, I hope you'll be my everything

Premium Member Cheery Church Committee

Our
Hostess
Committee,
comprised mostly
of women, makes sure
the kitchen is stocked with
supplies, arranges and serves
meals for major church events and 
bereaved families. Last, we clean up.
We serve cheerfully, for we feel honored.

Dusk

When you’re on an endless highway 
is there any hope at all
that a destination will be reached, 
and you can finally fall
back in the arms of the one you lost, 
in the home you left behind?
For despite the years spent traveling, 
more highway’s all I find. 

They say that life’s a journey, 
comprised within a dream. 
A quest designed to test the will 
and faith in things unseen. 

So each day when the sun sinks low 
and the highway fades to dusk,
I look and see you standing there 
and know I that can trust.
Thus, I keep traveling on and on 
and fight this empty stare, 
and fill the time with dreams of when… 
I’ll finally reach you there.

Premium Member A gem worthy of a crown

Happiness is easily found in a multitude of the sweetest components 
Grateful for you, often swept from the feats, of our hours, sharring meaningful moments 
Your citrines comprised burning bright; scorching everywhere
As an orbited sphere; willed they are a perfect solar flare
Climbing a summit inside my thoughts; that is all you
Beside me, you wrap me up while we both enjoy the view
One could mine for eternity; excavating nothing valued; seeking a gem worthy of a crown
But, I would stop digging at the surface of the earth; if it matched your eyes, superfluous shade of brown

GOD SEEKER

You carried HIS THRONE
...I should have my own
You worshiped HIS NAME
...I should be the flame
You did your duty, as commanded
...I will never be reprimanded

...by that MAN

The moment you saw
You could not un-know
How physics would let out
How life would flow

Plans and schemes
Then the declaration
In between it all
A valid accusation

I would be a better GOD
I am setting myself against Spirit
Don't try to send me help or TRUTH
I refuse to give ear to hear it

I will sit up a system for man
Comprised of honor and reward
God and country, served
With promise to shield from famine and sword

I will have an industry
Built on entertainment and pleasure
Creating a feeling of entitlement
For entering in at leisure

I've covered all the basis
With knowledge on its throne
I will harvest souls as payment
For humanity thinking they could own

....MY WORLD

Written by Trudy Schrader on 11-18-2024

Premium Member Fifty Years Ago Today - 1973

Fifty years ago today
     an attack was well underway
     On Yom Kippur, October 6
       Israel was in a fix

     Egypt had invaded the Sinai
     Syrians climbed down the Golan Heights
     Arabs sought to recapture land
       which they regarded as theirs 'by rights'

     Three weeks later, Israel was up off her heels
     at the gates of Cairo and Damascus
     troops ready to seal the deal

     But the US said No! Israel had to go
     back to the preexisting status quo

     2,400 died in defense of their nation
     as Israel began to grow impatient
     with their supposed Allies in the West

     When on your holiest day, your enemies attack
     Why should you give what you captured back



     ______________________________________
     The 2,412 soldiers who died comprised 1% of
     Israel's Jewish population in 1973. A comparable
     figure would be 300,000 American soldiers dying
     in a four-week war in 1973.

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