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forward thinking drive

never afraid to ask many a question never afraid to undertake a suggestion are those with forward thinking drive as they reach out further so they strive steering away far from the hive like mind and the blindness eyes of most humankind not becoming lost inside the vast mind invasion or falling for the tricks of one true great salesman they don`t want to lose what they freely own rather bled blood then be another duplicate clone so they live their lives risking to be ostracized never being the ones to become totally comprised listening to both sides before making a decision something we`ve lost with this new world vision because they have different views and opinions they are told they are societies biggest villains

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Date: 5/22/2025 9:18:00 AM
Love this Markus. I am not a fan of free verse and dont usually bother to read it. This is exceptional writing and your rhyming ability is spot on. Message came through loud and clear. G'donya. Best wishes from Wen.
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Date: 5/24/2025 4:51:00 AM
thanks for the kind words. It's inspiring when someone connects to my writings, I believe ppl should be able to express their thoughts\feelings freely & I like to express mine though writing. deadset ta

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