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forward thinking drive

never afraid to ask many a question
never afraid to undertake a suggestion
are those with forward thinking drive
as they reach out further so they strive

steering away far from the hive like mind
and the blindness eyes of most humankind
 not becoming lost inside the vast mind invasion
or falling for the tricks of one true great salesman

they don`t want to lose what they freely own
rather bled blood then be another duplicate clone
so they live their lives risking to be ostracized
never being the ones to become totally comprised

listening to both sides before making a decision
something we`ve lost with this new world vision
because they have different views and opinions
 they are told they are societies biggest villains

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Date: 5/22/2025 9:18:00 AM
Love this Markus. I am not a fan of free verse and dont usually bother to read it. This is exceptional writing and your rhyming ability is spot on. Message came through loud and clear. G'donya. Best wishes from Wen.
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Date: 5/24/2025 4:51:00 AM
thanks for the kind words. It's inspiring when someone connects to my writings, I believe ppl should be able to express their thoughts\feelings freely & I like to express mine though writing. deadset ta

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