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Packing for Camp

The grandkids are heading to sleepaway camp,
Their clothing all labeled and packed,
Plus all of the extras they may or not need -
Way too much, as a matter of fact.

They bring pillows and blankets and flashlights and fans
And shin guards and sandals and cleats 
And towels and bug spray and sunscreen and stamps 
And shampoo, toothbrush, toothpaste and sheets.

They need rain gear and sleeping bags, books and canteens,
A laundry bag, backpack and socks,
Plus sweatshirts and jackets and underwear (lots!)
And their sneakers and rain boots and Crocs.

Of course there are bathing suits, t-shirts and shorts
And sweatpants and PJ’s and fleece,
But there are no iPads or Switches or phones
So some wonders, I guess, never cease.

The days spent at camp will fly quickly until
All that stuff gets repacked to go home,
With some missing or ruined or filthy, but that
Is a topic for some future poem.

Premium Member Jill and Lucille

Jill and Lucille are two very hungry slugs
They often dine out at their local garden food hubs. 
Lettuce, flowers, fruits, sunflowers and beans
These are a few choices from these veggie canteens.

Some clues are noticed from a gardeners view
Slugs are not clever, they often leave one big clue.
Slime trails are generally very clear to see 
When they travel for food that they eat greedily.

Flowers without heads and partially eaten veg
It all looks a mess when a gardeners work has been wrecked.
But hedgehogs love slugs that are plump and juicy
That's when Jill lost her friend, who's nick name was Lucy.

Jill left the garden when her best friend became their snack
Near to a hill, is where she met her new friend Jack.
But as with all stories, they change over time
Snails morphed into humans and birthed the Jack and Jill rhyme.

But that is not the first or last of the Jill and Lucille tales
Many more will be published about their life in the Dales.
These girls will be as famous with modern songs for the young
Feminine nursery rhyme rights will never be outdone.

Premium Member Ft Leonard Wood Mo 1961

Ft Leonard Wood Mo.1961
Combat Engineers
Miracle Man
10/18/2024

Most days we awoke feeling quite asinine,
choice wasn’t to get up or remain supine.
The bugle was telling us rise and shine,
fall in formation “cruits” and ditch the whine.
After a five mile hike you’ll be feeling fine,
with their way of thinking we wouldn’t align.
Our canteens contained water tasting like brine,
with spit shined boots each cleaned his carbine.
K.P. and cleaning grease traps is hard to define,
another duty intended to harass but was benign.
Just one lousy gig got us a barracks confine,
but finally after 9 weeks we were on cloud nine.
All this happened with purpose and by design,
to make men of boys that would toe the line.


Premium Member Captive

   held captive
   his fleshy lips
       quiver
   in an oasis of  
       rusted
      canteens

Nigerian Police Station

Once, I was there to check a tall Zaki
And it became reason to meet khaki,
Very clean but most offices tacky:
A cop could turn one into a lackey!
 
I know The Police is for the Nation
But I shan’t again a Police Station;
A world plainly paramilitary,
Safer, not better than Solitary,
In every station, obvious gyration;
Canteens that could serve one large ration, 
The environment is quite sanitary
But should not clinch The Best Commentary…

Where one runs into AK47,
There holders more than Forty Seven:
Men who could catch rogues but their eyes roguish;
A lot of money make but still languish…

No good guarantee of non-harassment,
A chesty cough attracts embarrassment:
A fat envelope and one reports a case;
A much fatter one to clean and face!

Long Trails

Vibram lugs 2 inches thick
	for edge work back when
	I was so young
	with mountains to climb

the leather uppers
	with mink oil spread
	in the oven baked
	again and again

Mountains I climbed
	and dusty trails walked
	like friends of old
	they still remain

in dark of night
	as I do cry
in fear I tremble
	and wonder why

dreams of youth
	in spring of years
golden sunshine
	that could never and

a orange back pack
	on aluminum frame
	4000 cubes
	that so much held	

Baseball mitts
	and skiing wax
	holstered canteens
	and hammocks of string

wonder I now
	just what it will hold
if the long road
	my feet will find

when does come
	new dawn breaks
	life begins again
	and death flees away

a sleeping bag filled
	with hollofil II
	will it then replace
	my King size bed

nightmares were then
	a distant unfelt thing
words on the news
	unknown to me

if healthy lived
	kept active mind
dreams then could grow
	keep nightmares at bay

yet dreams now do end
	golden sun does set
dark of night will fall
	cannot be held at bay

again take up my staff
	and the backpack fill
	sturdy boots again to wear
	and on the road go away


What If

What if..

What if; it wasn't a lockdown forenoon 
Mommies whisking to kitchenette 
Daddy's out with newspaper headlines 
Little cubs denned in their late quilt and wishing no schooling today 
Rest world racing themselves to indulge in work deadlines 

What if; it wasn't a lockdown noon 
Chefs busy preparing victuals to serve in eateries 
Office canteens loaded with lunch boxes and gossips 
Some heading for evening tales

What if; it wasn't a lockdown evening 
Coffee shops buzzing with bud pairs, roasted coffee beans and whiffs of smoke
Peeps roaming and returning their abodes before the dark was deep
Little cubs falling asleep in their study and no Surf, no Netflix 

What if; it wasn't a lockdown night 
Dinner table would filled with traffic and homework folklore 
Bedtime would doubly the fairy's list- 
Children wishing for no school tomorrow,
Men for hike up his business,
Women emancipation from irons of household chores and society norms

What if; it wasn't a lockdown 
Contemporary would have been so lost in it's own bloods and veins 
June month would have brought us fruity summer of 2020
And I would have written a poetry of love and lust

A Peaceful Army

A PEACEFUL ARMY

Special soldiers went to war
Some being not so young.
Enlisted to do their duty,
But would never fire a gun.

They wore a different uniform,
Which displayed a red shield.
This was the Salvation Army
On the lines of each battlefield.

They were a different army,
And often would work alone.
A band of Christian soldiers
In a war they didn't condone.

Wherever war was taking place,
The Salvo's were always there.
Red Shield huts would appear,
With ?hop in' signs of care.

They had mobile canteens
To supply soldiers in need,
With water, tea and bickies,
Welcome refreshments indeed.

In Melbourne they celebrated,
In the year two thousand and one,
A hundred years of cuppas,
Thankful for a work well done.

The Red Shield's still in action,
Helps returned soldiers to adjust.
Continues in social welfare,
A peaceful army all can trust.

Copyright Vivien Wade 2015

Premium Member Hiding Out In the Badlands

At last, a refuge from the wind and sand
Afraid of the posse that was still on their heels
Now they could loose themselves in the badlands
Wondering why they had ever decided to steal

The horses worn down something terrible
Not much left of the beans and the bacon
Canteens almost dry since yesterday morn
Their resolve to be outlaws severely shaken

Now Pete knew the badlands inside out
He'll lead them to water in a hidden  place
Here they'll rest up and wait for a spell
For surely they have more trouble to face

So they rode down into its deep  canyons 
Seeing the tracks of the lion and sheep
Past red rocks and carvings from the past
Now the badlands has one more secret to keep

Premium Member Haiku 38

as we walk 
pots clink against canteens –
squirrels chatter

Premium Member Army Dependant

Mr and Mrs private first class stationed 
in Augsburg 15th battalion 
second Calvary division canteens and sea rashins 
were being distributed while we had four more 
court martials. lined outside of the jag office 
after a deferred payment plan failed again 
der banke of Munich we settled in the
 chaplains office to speak with der Bishop 
to discuss baq. barracks and housing quarters 
allowance why living on a no payment status 
allowance covered wodka Cognac and three 
kartens of cigarettes food and clothing 
not allowances while preparing the family
 to relocate again to Berlin havoc broke out 
chaos arose thee Iraqi embassy under attack 
der wand was stille covered in graffitii I retrieved 
three stones   as my chanook arrived it read 
apo. new York Kennedy our convoy flew over
Kremlin and the eastern shores

Premium Member Turkish Chant

we gathered our canteens
while coughing up
tar from the hidden gravel
across high terrain

through the mist of Ankara
teal fabric blew in the.breeze
over burnt orange fragments
torn from my temporal

mangled mind of madness
shifting the gates 
of emotional tiredness 
we'd waited above ground 

as the evening roared
past us again in solitude 
miles from Augsburg
I catered to the infamous thunder

beside the housing quarters
beneath the wretchid callings
shattered beyond such graveness 
that beckoned our soul's to port here 

a silence abode within me
amid the character lessons
followed abroad the cold shoulders
hitler had morbidly left behind

Little Brook of Childhood

Little brook of childhood,
your water flowed and stayed always cold, 
I traveled far to reach that scented, steep hill
as winter ended with chill.


And listening to the babbling sound,
mist rose from the rocks and ground...
it seemed to make music without an instrument, 
in fact, I wrote my first hymn at that very moment.
  

Like those travelers who took the same road,
I found it exciting to walk and move forward...
to be amazed at the magnificence and realize
the divine hand that made Nature so very nice.


Little brook of childhood,
you were as precious as a friend's  word;
drooping willows seemed angels descending with wide wings,
offering shade to those who came to fill up their empty canteens.
 

Written by Andrew Crisci
on September 25, 2011
for Francine Robert's contest,
" Flowing Water "

Premium Member A Cowboy Is

A cowboy named Hank joined wagon trails going west on his horse
He rode the outskirts and back trails of cities in search of a home
He would get a piece of land for growing corn near a river’s source
That would ease his restless soul; put an end to all his groans

He recalled the squalor and filth seen in towns he had passed through
So many miles way back when; he had long since lost count
In his mind his plans stayed fresh; persevere was what to do
At each stop he carved the vision while filling his canteens at the fount

As for one regret-he could not read nor could barely write his name
He would teach himself come evenings, from Grandma’s 'Good Book'
Her legacy, tucked in his saddlebag; dusty, yet, still looked the same
She had raised him on her own when his folks passed on, with all it took

To him, success was the only way he could ever pay Grandma back
Vowed he’d find that land near a river, far from the railway tracks 

~*~

For Tirzah Conway's, "A Cowboy is" Contest

Stanza 1917

So let's see what the laddies need
To charge the guns and not impede
The rate of fire to cut them down
And body bags to go all 'round.

Let's give then picks and shovels
And blamket rolls to boot,
And heavy rolls of barbed wire
To carry for the shoot.

And fancy spats and bayonets
And canteens and trenching tools,
And gas masks and radios
And spy glasses too.

All crammed into the pit each man,
His name and rank unknown!
How bodily well he was supplied!
The banker's wealth---it doth abide.

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