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Hiding Out In the Badlands

At last, a refuge from the wind and sand Afraid of the posse that was still on their heels Now they could loose themselves in the badlands Wondering why they had ever decided to steal The horses worn down something terrible Not much left of the beans and the bacon Canteens almost dry since yesterday morn Their resolve to be outlaws severely shaken Now Pete knew the badlands inside out He'll lead them to water in a hidden place Here they'll rest up and wait for a spell For surely they have more trouble to face So they rode down into its deep canyons Seeing the tracks of the lion and sheep Past red rocks and carvings from the past Now the badlands has one more secret to keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/23/2014 10:50:00 PM
An awesome story Barbara, I enjoyed reading it...Sharon G.
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Barbara; enjoyed your entry.
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:40:00 AM
Enjoyed the story, congrats on the win,
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:10:00 AM
Hi Barbara, Nicely told tale of the old west. Solid win. Congratulations. Earl
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:10:00 AM
rexcellent poem - really loved the ending congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2014 10:59:00 PM
Wow good ol beans and bacon, I never thought of them, what is a good western without em. Well written Barbara, congratulations on your win.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/22/2014 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Brenda..I love cowboy stuff..your poem was terrific. BG
Date: 10/21/2014 9:36:00 PM
Amazed by the ending! It is like a finale that ends the poem perfectly. Thanks for your pleasing contribution to my contest.
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Date: 9/20/2014 12:04:00 PM
BG, you wrote a fine one for the contest. Last verse seals the deal and is a zinger for the imagination of the reader!! Bravo!!!
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Date: 9/19/2014 2:15:00 AM
Interesting write on the culture of the cowboy days, Barb
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:12:00 PM
Great entry for this contest.... You should do well... You hit all the right buttons for the contest rules..... I hope to do as well.... Love ya .... Jake
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/18/2014 9:51:00 PM
Good to hear from you! The cowboy thing was fun. I believe I was a cowgirl in a past life...lol.
Date: 9/18/2014 1:31:00 PM
Interesting take as the badlands was a place where many got lost, maybe it's just me but I've read a few of these badland poems and wrote one myself and each time I read one I can't get Marty Robbins out of my head
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