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Captive

held captive his fleshy lips quiver in an oasis of rusted canteens

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Date: 5/10/2024 3:55:00 PM
love the irony in this one Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2024 4:22:00 PM
If I could just sneak in a little oxygen, then I'd have FeO2
Date: 5/10/2024 4:21:00 AM
powerful imagery in this six-liner! Rusted canteens = wow!
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