Best Ventilation Poems


Premium Member A House Full of Cats

A house full of cats
Poor ventilation
Doctor says I have hair balls

How mysterious
Our Tab has far -away eyes
UGHH!    It's flatulence

One cat likes to talk
It's the inflection that counts
Feed me, please....................? FEED ME!!!
        (meeeww)                      (MEEOOOWWW!)

Not bothered with mice
Nary a bug in the house
The new 'shredded' style

Fell in the eggnog
Hick    hickory....up he run
Dick    dickory    DOCK!    tick tock

Premium Member - Sound For Deaf Ears -

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
The emotions of everyday life
without words
Impressions through music
Create depth and more mindfulness

~ The wind in the willow trees has settled down ~

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
Listening to the bluebells,
when the whole body screams for rest
An everlasting stream of information
Stress, increased pulse, and muscle tension

~ Small falling feather, the setting is visually beautiful ~

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
Bell sheep and the taste of mountains
Without road traffic noise and ventilation systems
Give me the truth, but protect my ears
40 decibels is a harmful dose

~ The fox is ready for hunting without breaking a twig ~

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
Your body language is a sign of lying
The crystal glass is crushed in stereo
The rattlesnake finely polished rattle
High sky with pure white clouds
Pull the handbrake

~ Swans that majestically float on the water ~
 






01/09/2019
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Premium Member The Blews

head heavy
in hands
squeezing pounding temples

trapped in a trance
seated in this place
of emptiness and despair

the place that has welcomed
all of my fears and fractures

my heart pounds erratically
my eyes swollen and shot

a hypnotic gaze
into the somber gray
stone tile floor

that I’m sure
is hiding the demons
I have chosen to ignore

the ventilation fan
is loud and deafening
please stop, please stop
for God’s sake!

the churning acid
arouses anxiety in my angry pit

my blurry awakening shameful face
is exposed and shunned

a fading illusion 
of my demand
that I’ve had enough

I’m finally done

what does this vicious cycle
have in store

just like yesterdays
just like tomorrows

“bite the hair”
the temptation to escape
always near

addiction is a seductive liar
that manipulates and deceives

not willing to seek restraint
until every sense of self-worth
is destroyed and torched in fire

my mind twists painfully
in a chaotic frenzy

memories that won’t decompose
a persistent clamor

reliving the bowels
of a drained and disappointed past

the blews persist, 
unyielding in their grip

a lifetime,

of dark and ugly people

of dark and ugly decisions

mind drifts,

to even darker uglier thoughts


Spinning the Resort

Spinning the Resort

By Elton Camp

For guests the resort does advertise
So it will be desirable in their eyes

Since the building is old and run down:
“Located in the historical part of town”

The heat and air don’t work very well:
“About the local climate you will tell”

Grounds are shabby and grass knee-high:
“From your room, untamed wilderness spy”

Windows are loose and some are cracked:
“For our hotel, ventilation has never lacked”

All the hotel furniture is faded and worn:
“Antique items from before you were born”

Plumbing is defective with leaks and all:
“As you sleep, you’ll hear the water fall”

We have no phones, television or Internet:
“The most peaceful vacation you can get”

Nowhere will guests an elevator ever see:
“Exercise is always provided to you free”

With so few guests, the daily rate is large:
“You will be astonished at what we charge”

Since the dining room grub isn’t fit to eat:
“Our cuisine, weight loss will complete”

Because nobody returns for a second stay:
“Bustling crowds will never cause dismay”
© Elton Camp  Create an image from this poem.

Big Head

I have a ridiculously large head,
I think I’d opt for a smaller one instead.
Oh, sure, you say that it suits me fine,
That’s because yours isn’t near as big as mine.

I bet that it weights at least thirty pounds,
It looks even bigger than it sounds.
When I lay it down on my waterbed,
A tsunami rises so my wife has said.

When I go to try on winter hats,
The clerk gives me ones with ventilation slats,
That way when it’s not on sitting my dome,
It can be used as a guest room for my home.

My giant head is entirely too big,
Someday archeologists will venture on dig,
They’ll think that I came from the highland,
On the west end of Easter Island.

Little kids stare up at my noggin,
They think it could be used for a toboggan.
Or a shed to hold random hodgepodge,
That clutters things up in their dad’s garage.

Don’t tell me that it’s due to my intellect,
It makes your judgment sound suspect.
It’s because my brain is fashioned like a brick,
And my skull is so very, very  thick.
© Tony Lane  Create an image from this poem.

Acceptation, Part 1

Life, love and communication, this is something for every nation. It started with temptation and verification, but ended in complication. So listen to this declaration.

We gave each other inspiration, but also forced confrontation with our own situation. You have my admiration, but also my exclamation of condemnation. I've been on probation, negation, suspended animation, holding back this accusation of flirtation. My automation, caused the stagnation in our relation. One last conversation, ventilation, would be my liberation of this infestation of indignation. 

But I'm not gonna ask for comfortation, an explanation, a reason for separation. A confirmation of expiration, information or explication. I have my own meditation, salvation, a new foundation of my own creation. My frustration, agitation, my never-ending contemplation, is under restoration. No more manipulation, exaggeration or expectation; I'm done with argumentation, suffocation and speculation, this implication of obligation. This is my adaptation, transformation and reparation, my graduation from irritation. No more hibernation. Only acceptation.

This proclamation needs clarification: it's not a profanation or defamation; you still have all of my adoration and appreciation. I'm just finally taking vacation, with a newfound determination. We don't need justification or vindication, a modification or translation. We only need commemoration, to remember our sensation of elation. It was not a simulation, just pure stimulation, accumulation of exhilaration.


Sugar

I would breathe you in
Like oxygen 
Hyper with no ventilation ,
Asphyxiation
A mellow mush
Together dried 
Crystallized and surprise!
A lightning bolt
Electric jolt for the

Lady of the Labyrinth

Rainbow omniscience 
Blinding bliss
Kissing the iris
Vision of the prism

Versicolor mix created
Fixated on the electromagnetic spectrum
Divine strumming
Every atom humming
Phonetic reverberations
Arcane incantations
Salamander songs
Of long ago

Pyromantic pixies
Generative divinities
And the evolutionary imperative

Applestarseed naturalism

Premium Member Green House of the Sick Man

"Green House of the Sick Man" 
Imagining the lush, trickled and tickled
By spray of light thoughts, my healing possibly
To be that clover in full bloom again 
My body looked more like onion weed

I wished for the irrigation from the botanist
These thoughts, they want to crop up as
He taps on both my knees, offering some advice
"You won't sprout from your bed for a couple days.
Don't forget ventilation, open those windows. "

My cold frame was evidence I had not been taking my pesticides
A fodder for other animals' discussions downstairs 
Not ready yet, but don't put me out to pasture for them
It is my job to sell at the marketplace, rising to full radiance 

Though feelings of worry might crop up, wondering 
About my yield, I might yield, but never concede 
I coughed up less nutrients than yesterday 
Still an arable land I wish to be a legume
And be with my friends again, all peas in a pod.

Breath Control

Control of breathing is quite complex
And if you really check the specs
You find all kinds of balances and checks

Within the medulla, cells playing their role
The DRG, inspirational control
Using cyclic neurons for their goal.

Actions potentials from the DRG
These cells are cyclic and fire intermittently.
Then muscle contract to the best of their ability.

To the external intercostals and diaphragm they talk
And these muscles, at the neurons’ stalk
Follow orders and they do not balk.

And when they stop, the muscles relax.
Air is forced out as muscle slacks.
Volume decreases and Boyle’s Law acts.

So breathing in costs ATP
That means the use of energy
But calm expiration? It’s just free.

But when you need to force air out
Or at something, really shout
The VRG is what it’s all about.

It talks to abdominal muscles as well
As internal intercostals to make pressure swell
And air in the lungs can no longer dwell.

The Apneustic center in the pons is a source
Of a center dealing with force
Of an inspiration’s course.

The pneumotaxic center deals with duration
And both centers talk to each medullary station
And help regulate breathing condition.

The limbic system has some sway
In breathing fast or slow at bay
More than most realize, an important say.

And the hypothalamus, always of import
With its influence never falls short
In aiding ventilation, it lends its support.

For other than limbic, it deals with fever
When it tips the temperature lever
And makes ventilation a greater achiever.

Lastly there’s the cortex of the brain,
Whose job most think, is always to reign.
But when it comes to breathing, it is quite plain.

You can’t stop breathing by your will.
The lower centers always still
Make breathing a reflex, cortex input almost nil.

And just what drives this reflex to ventilate?
From where does the need originate?
From the chemoreceptors, it does emanate.

Receptors monitoring proton concentration.
Then messages sent without cessation
To the brainstem for increasing ventilation.

And hydrogen ions, where are they from?
Carbon dioxide and water, voila, they come.
The magic formula, carbonic acid does succumb.
© LR Waldman  Create an image from this poem.

Africa, My Story

They packed us in ships and boats.
Sardines have more space in their cans as compared to us,
Low ventilation, no water, little food,
Out of our land of abundance, land of riches, land of gold, 
We sailed off to the land unknown,
‘Door of No Return’, that was the last door I saw in my homeland.
With shackles on our necks, ankles and wrists, we were led sheepishly to the ship,  
When we complained, they lashed us, when we rebelled, they killed us, 
And the weak amongst us; they were maltreated.
My sister was force raped yesterday; it’s my fiancée’s turn today, 
We were supposed to get married last Sunday,
“I’ve been shot in one knee”, an Old Norse slang,
I’m married; I was going to tell my friends, 
But the sun sure didn’t smile on me on Sunday,
Now in a new land, new soil, we’re auctioned like some merchandise,
I thought they only wanted our gold, or was it not enough; the additional cocoa,
Now we work on their plantations, from dawn until dusk,
We’re forced to speak the Whiteman’s language,
We’re forced to eat their food and dress like them,
 And the very thing that make us Africans; our pride, It’s been taken from us,
So I wonder the kind of future that lies ahead for our unborn generations,
I wonder if our rich values, our norms, our traditions, 
I wonder if they would be passed down to them,
Africa, my story.

Intent Was Rap

Divinity all empowers me for some dignity 
Through this course of life so to have an entity 
Power flow through my veins ,black faced
Melanin  at its best, perceived as a beast ,
hair puffs and cushioned 
But possesses white finger nails,
Call that race .
Feels safe but not , something I call 
Chaotic tranquillity ... 
 
Calls from here and there 
All from my clan 
For purpose in unity to the grand plan 
All summed up to make up the planet.... 
Round and round the earth feels. 
Yet , it's a 
Chaotic tranquillity 


Man live then die
Life and death seems like the price 
For Earthly experience .
 So we cry into the world 
But we being cried for 
When we leave 
An entity painted 
A life lived, good or bad but lived .
Chaotic tranquillity 

The serenity all set for all race 
But isn't it awkward when races, race with each other 
Battle of an unknown cause but a major curse, through this course 
Of living, so to keep the pulse
 But forces 
Bent on keeping the world a 
Chaotic Tranquillity.......


We all got Vices 
I mean you, you and yeah you! And me.
It's a Vice city 
Humans Co-habitate
And it's humanly. 
 
  .. wrongs, right 
    We either turn left or right on this Journey 
But we choose to go straight 
With a luxurious sweet heart ride, 
Called Hope.
It's just a goal. Faith winning. 
Faith in the Divine. 
Still division in religion 
Chaotic tranquillity legion 


Blue skies Sunny villa 
My family my first nation 
Loves spread across 
And yeah we got ventilation 
 World my neighbour cos I love her  
As myself. 
A rule by the Maker 
Now we got laws 
Cos we break rules 
For the world needs to recognise 
We need love driving us forth 
 Paddling with care 
And accelerating into one'ness !
Bit by bit 
For its still 
Chaotic tranquillity.......
      
                      14/07/2017

To Split the Seconds

In the middle of the universe, I stand
deep in my chamber of death, resurrected
with no recollection of the life before
no memories of past civilizations
          no planets, no comets, no Ra

In this dark vastness, my pyramid is a spaceship 
launched from the Sahara desert, seeking companionship
carrying the hieroglyphics to map the cosmos
pointing to infinity from this epicentre
          guided by an interstellar compass

I peer into the vacuum through the ventilation shaft
into the continuum with no soul insight, no stars right or left
I stand alone, unconscious and omnipresent as a GodKing
surrounded by silence and confusion, 
          I break down the walls with a big bang!

My complexion bares lashes of solar winds and sandstorms
my scarred eye sockets carry two insignificant helium atoms
they split into magnifisance to allow me instant sight, with a profound vision
with time stretching, with no hesitation, 
         from nothing take to the force of gravitation 

To recreate anew, my ultimate universe
to set in motion galaxies and create a new paradise
to start a perfect system based on irrefutable laws of physics 
pouring out light into the empty, dark space, 
          at the speed of light, to split the seconds

Premium Member Green Paradise

A beautiful creation -delighting eyes  for glittering  happiness, 
Impetuously  jives kindred’s  lifelong moments, 
nature’s omnipresent picturesqueness
quiet , resplendent smiles  to us
ventilation whirls,
eXhilarating,
yielding  
zing






March 1, 2013 9am
©2013by Leonora Galinta



Tenth Place
Contest: Go Green
Judged: 3/12/13
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Seventh Place
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Judged: 3/1/13
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© Len Gasun  Create an image from this poem.

The Raven - Resolved

(With apologies to Edgar Allen Poe )  

Finding myself so berated, 
I muttered something syncopated, 
as seething and with burning eyes stormed I forth as on a secret chore. Returning answered well his gall 
for I, with no remorse at all, 
blew his feathered carcase through the wall. 
A wet flannel cleared the gore. 
"That's my trusty Purdey shotgun loaded with lead shot - twelve bore." 
This I said, and nothing more.  

Now when friends, in admiration, 
comment on my ventilation 
which dost somewhat harshly pierce the wall above that door, 
I gift the inspiration deemed 
to one whom talked less than he preened - 
to one whom since has not been seen, 
save in down upon the floor. 
"Visitor," I exclaim, smirking – “blast from the past, quite a bore!" 
This I say and nothing more.

Your Love Is Like Nitric Acid ...

The Metal plunged into the nitric 
acid mix releases  yellow fumes.

Heavy workman's gloves.
Ventilation...

The acid splattering onto the skin
 burns leaving yellow stains.

Apply water.

The image now etched into the metal 
bubbles where the image is left raw.

Ventilation....

Gas mask and eye goggles.

How do you know how long to leave
the metal plate in the acid?

Timer.

Deep etches left in longer, 
create  deeper grooves.

Your Love is like nitric acid
Eating away at my heart.

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