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A beautiful creation -delighting eyes for glittering happiness, Impetuously jives kindred’s lifelong moments, nature’s omnipresent picturesqueness quiet , resplendent smiles to us ventilation whirls, eXhilarating, yielding zing March 1, 2013 9am ©2013by Leonora Galinta Tenth Place Contest: Go Green Judged: 3/12/13 Poet Sponsor: Poet Sandy Ivy D. Seventh Place Contest: 100% Nature Judged: 3/1/13 Poet Sponsor: Greatest Poet PD

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Donna Jones

Date: 3/14/2013 5:14:00 PM

Beautiful Leonora...congratulations...Donna

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/13/2013 7:26:00 PM

Congrats, Leonora. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2013 6:14:00 PM

Hi Leo.. another sweet win... i love the meaning of your green... always~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2013 10:09:00 AM

Congrad's on your win in the Green contest, may Spring come early for you. Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 3/7/2013 11:13:00 AM

Leonora, a nice and beautiful win~Yours truly *SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2013 9:10:00 PM

Leonora, it was great to see you as well today. Why don't you work on an ABC poem like the kind Cyndi is looking for in her contest? I think you could do a really nice one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2013 11:27:00 PM

Hello, Leonora. And now I am hurrying to get to bed!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/4/2013 9:28:00 AM

This is wonderful, Leonora, amazing form, and love the way you have structured this,,

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/3/2013 12:44:00 PM

Oh yes clever girl another correct ABC form and such a good one xx

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/3/2013 8:57:00 AM

I think you did really good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2013 4:40:00 AM

Leonora well done I like it, I posted one the other day..good form....David

Jeremy Martin

Date: 3/3/2013 2:02:00 AM

I like the shape of this poem

Joseph May

Date: 3/2/2013 6:09:00 PM

congrats on your win Leonora

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/2/2013 5:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Leonora. Warm Smiles, Connie

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/2/2013 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win my dear friend Leonora (^_^) so glad to see you again here.....hope you're not as busy as before...well next week I've been away for days coz Its my vacation so I need to be with mother nature for a while. hehehehhe When I come back hope to read again your new great poems. You're my Idol you know. thanks for everything..love you!! mwauh!!! (^_^)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2013 4:54:00 AM

Leonora, Thanks for your visit on my last poem. - And thanks for letting me read your well done poem. - I'm a little trip in Turkey this week, has only little time for P-Soup. - Hope you are doing well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 PM

Hello Sweet sis Leonra, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, you are the sweetest and kindest... love it when I view my winners. It always makes me happy to see you among my winners... always~ PD

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/1/2013 5:41:00 PM

great work!!! my dear sweet Leonora...i love your poems.. always so enjoyed!!! thank your beautiful friend for sharing your wonderful tallent <3 <3 <3 Sk :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2013 8:06:00 AM

well, WAY to GO on your second attempt, Leonora. Did you check out the ABC contest in couplet form? You gotta try that one now!!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 2/28/2013 9:15:00 PM

Great write my dear friend, I haven't done this form yet..maybe i will try it soon :) Is this for the contest? Good luck then..and advance congratulations. are you still busy? well, for me its my grand vacation but still doing a lot of things..enjoy your day my dear Leonora. God bless you always..mwuah!! (^_^)

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/28/2013 9:03:00 PM

Wow, this is totally awesome, you have done so very great with this form! I am extremely impressed with how you did this poem! I enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a timeless write, Excellent Work!!