Len Gasun Poet ABC

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Green Paradise

A beautiful creation -delighting eyes  for glittering  happiness, 
Impetuously  jives kindred’s  lifelong moments, 
nature’s omnipresent picturesqueness
quiet , resplendent smiles  to us
ventilation whirls,
eXhilarating,
yielding  
zing






March 1, 2013 9am
©2013by Leonora Galinta



Tenth Place
Contest: Go Green
Judged: 3/12/13
Poet Sponsor: Poet Sandy Ivy D.

Seventh Place
Contest: 100% Nature
Judged: 3/1/13
Poet Sponsor: Greatest Poet PD

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Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 5:14 PM Beautiful Leonora...congratulations...Donna

Ralph Taylor March 13, 2013 at 7:26 PM Congrats, Leonora. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2013 at 6:14 PM Hi Leo.. another sweet win... i love the meaning of your green... always~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2013 at 10:09 AM Congrad's on your win in the Green contest, may Spring come early for you. Light & Love

Skat A March 7, 2013 at 11:13 AM Leonora, a nice and beautiful win~Yours truly *SKAT

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2013 at 9:10 PM Leonora, it was great to see you as well today. Why don't you work on an ABC poem like the kind Cyndi is looking for in her contest? I think you could do a really nice one!

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2013 at 11:27 PM Hello, Leonora. And now I am hurrying to get to bed!!

Harry Horsman March 4, 2013 at 9:28 AM This is wonderful, Leonora, amazing form, and love the way you have structured this,,

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2013 at 12:44 PM Oh yes clever girl another correct ABC form and such a good one xx

Lucilla Carrillo March 3, 2013 at 8:57 AM I think you did really good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

David Williams March 3, 2013 at 4:40 AM Leonora well done I like it, I posted one the other day..good form....David

Jeremy Martin March 3, 2013 at 2:02 AM I like the shape of this poem

Joseph May March 2, 2013 at 6:09 PM congrats on your win Leonora

Connie Gildersleeve March 2, 2013 at 5:04 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Leonora. Warm Smiles, Connie

Bukang Liwayway March 2, 2013 at 9:57 AM Congratulations on your win my dear friend Leonora (^_^) so glad to see you again here.....hope you're not as busy as before...well next week I've been away for days coz Its my vacation so I need to be with mother nature for a while. hehehehhe When I come back hope to read again your new great poems. You're my Idol you know. thanks for everything..love you!! mwauh!!! (^_^)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2013 at 4:54 AM Leonora, Thanks for your visit on my last poem. - And thanks for letting me read your well done poem. - I'm a little trip in Turkey this week, has only little time for P-Soup. - Hope you are doing well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A March 1, 2013 at 9:09 PM Hello Sweet sis Leonra, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, you are the sweetest and kindest... love it when I view my winners. It always makes me happy to see you among my winners... always~ PD

Sukmawati Komala March 1, 2013 at 5:41 PM great work!!! my dear sweet Leonora...i love your poems.. always so enjoyed!!! thank your beautiful friend for sharing your wonderful tallent <3 <3 <3 Sk :)

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2013 at 8:06 AM well, WAY to GO on your second attempt, Leonora. Did you check out the ABC contest in couplet form? You gotta try that one now!!

Bukang Liwayway February 28, 2013 at 9:15 PM Great write my dear friend, I haven't done this form yet..maybe i will try it soon :) Is this for the contest? Good luck then..and advance congratulations. are you still busy? well, for me its my grand vacation but still doing a lot of things..enjoy your day my dear Leonora. God bless you always..mwuah!! (^_^)

Russell Sivey February 28, 2013 at 9:03 PM Wow, this is totally awesome, you have done so very great with this form! I am extremely impressed with how you did this poem! I enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a timeless write, Excellent Work!!