Sugar

I would breathe you in
Like oxygen 
Hyper with no ventilation ,
Asphyxiation
A mellow mush
Together dried 
Crystallized and surprise!
A lightning bolt
Electric jolt for the

Lady of the Labyrinth

Rainbow omniscience 
Blinding bliss
Kissing the iris
Vision of the prism

Versicolor mix created
Fixated on the electromagnetic spectrum
Divine strumming
Every atom humming
Phonetic reverberations
Arcane incantations
Salamander songs
Of long ago

Pyromantic pixies
Generative divinities
And the evolutionary imperative

Applestarseed naturalism

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2009 4:04:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Anastacio. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2009 2:41:00 AM

Welcome to our site,Welcome Home:)."Sugar" the title in itself is sweet,the poem seems to be addressed to the "Lady Of the Labyrinth",The Rainbow,and much more..The Salamander Songs make me think of a Siren,Maybe She is a Siren too,The Pyromantic pixies..She lives in fantasies maybe?The grotesque end,:AppleSTARseed:,This Sugar of yours is many things,A Mellow Mush without Marshmallow:)Sweet poem ,Hope She gets to read this and of course acknowledge You,and answer with Honey resposne-C