Sugar

I would breathe you in Like oxygen Hyper with no ventilation , Asphyxiation A mellow mush Together dried Crystallized and surprise! A lightning bolt Electric jolt for the Lady of the Labyrinth Rainbow omniscience Blinding bliss Kissing the iris Vision of the prism Versicolor mix created Fixated on the electromagnetic spectrum Divine strumming Every atom humming Phonetic reverberations Arcane incantations Salamander songs Of long ago Pyromantic pixies Generative divinities And the evolutionary imperative Applestarseed naturalism

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2009 4:04:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Anastacio. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2009 2:41:00 AM

Welcome to our site,Welcome Home:)."Sugar" the title in itself is sweet,the poem seems to be addressed to the "Lady Of the Labyrinth",The Rainbow,and much more..The Salamander Songs make me think of a Siren,Maybe She is a Siren too,The Pyromantic pixies..She lives in fantasies maybe?The grotesque end,:AppleSTARseed:,This Sugar of yours is many things,A Mellow Mush without Marshmallow:)Sweet poem ,Hope She gets to read this and of course acknowledge You,and answer with Honey resposne-C