To Split the Seconds

In the middle of the universe, I stand
deep in my chamber of death, resurrected
with no recollection of the life before
no memories of past civilizations
          no planets, no comets, no Ra

In this dark vastness, my pyramid is a spaceship 
launched from the Sahara desert, seeking companionship
carrying the hieroglyphics to map the cosmos
pointing to infinity from this epicentre
          guided by an interstellar compass

I peer into the vacuum through the ventilation shaft
into the continuum with no soul insight, no stars right or left
I stand alone, unconscious and omnipresent as a GodKing
surrounded by silence and confusion, 
          I break down the walls with a big bang!

My complexion bares lashes of solar winds and sandstorms
my scarred eye sockets carry two insignificant helium atoms
they split into magnifisance to allow me instant sight, with a profound vision
with time stretching, with no hesitation, 
         from nothing take to the force of gravitation 

To recreate anew, my ultimate universe
to set in motion galaxies and create a new paradise
to start a perfect system based on irrefutable laws of physics 
pouring out light into the empty, dark space, 
          at the speed of light, to split the seconds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/15/2015 11:10:00 AM
THABANG, Congratulations on your awesome win. ~Skat~
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 2/17/2015 7:27:00 AM
Hi Skat...thank you so much Skat...I enjoy writing about all things space related and I felt strongly that I should attempt this challenge...take care, rgds, Thabang
Date: 2/7/2015 2:03:00 AM
Wow... great read... n congrats on your win.
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 2/10/2015 6:52:00 AM
Hi Nadiya...many thanks, glad you enjoyed it...rgds, Thabang
Date: 2/4/2015 7:38:00 PM
Awesome title that made me want to read and am glad I did. You've created a great story, Thabang.
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 2/5/2015 3:15:00 PM
Hi David...thanks for taking the time to read this piece, although my work is a work in progress, I'm glad it grabbed your interest...rgds, Thabang
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