Best Place Poems


Premium Member In This Place

I am the weed
Nestled
In a crack in the pavement
Dismantling concrete
Crumbling foundations
In this man made world
Rooted in the earth
Despite the city
I am the seed




11/05/18

Composed for Line Gauthier's
Zen Poetry Contest

A Place

I have seen fair lady April
Dance with daffodils;
I have seen the misty dawn
Light moors and windy hills.
Painted in dark shadows
Of a sunlit afternoon
I have smelled the heady scent
Where blue hyacinths commune.

I have heard the curlew's call
As she sailed the wild dark sea;
And seen the sailor guide his ship
In the dream that used to be.
I have known precious moments
In the echoes of a song;
But I never knew the comfort of
A place where I belong.

Premium Member You Took My Place

Amazing love,
Amazing grace,
You gave Your life,
You took my place.
I should have died,
On Calvary's tree,
But You stepped in,
And died for me.

What can I say?
What can I do?
To show my love, 
My gratitude?
To You my Lord,
My Savior King,
For becoming my
Sin offering?

Here is my heart,
Here is my soul,
Come Lord Jesus,
Take control.
The old is gone,
You've made me new.
You died for me,
I'll live for you.

2008


Premium Member Final resting place

Brick by brick I built my walls,
despite fires raging,
I preserved paths that connected
bridges between our breathless existence. 

Now that my heartbeats
have reached a dead end street,
let me rest my jaded head
upon your chest -
for fate has foretold it as my abode to forever sleep.

I was the melatonin to your insomnia,
you the immunity to internal inflictions.
If only I could have drank your infatuation,
as a remedy for my antagonising agony. 

Poetry was only a provisional potion,
yet it distracted from all negative notions.
We weaved a blanket of words,
where you adored the moon in nocturnal notoriety,
whilst I portrayed the beauty of sunrise in your eyes.

I guess nothing illuminates forever.

If this was my last love poem,
would you forgive my silence?
Would you still bless me in your verses,
or let my memories wither
like the petals your promised 
to bloom in our poetic garden?

Would I be your last metaphor,
in your final spill of tears?
Or would you reveal to the world,
the greatest unfinished love story.

In manipulation of manifestation,
I was your willing wordsmith,
protecting you with my shield of sanity -
in the hope I slayed every demon who desired you.

If it was a crime to love you,
then I was content as a criminal,
awaiting my destiny on death row.
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member A Timeless Place

There is an english garden that I visit in a dream,
where trees are full of blossoms and the atmosphere serene. 
A canopy of branches lightly shades a winding lane
and sunlight filters through the trees and warms a gentle rain.

Wild lavender and daisies grow around the willow trees,
and red and yellow daffodils sway gently in the breeze.
Resplendent water lilies on the pond lend gentle grace,
and butterflies in courtship play, then lovingly embrace.

Beyond the lily pond a white thatched cottage stands alone,
with picket fence and climbing vines, I know that it's my home.
The peonies in white and pink are lush and in full bloom,
and as I pass the garden gate I smell their sweet perfume.

My dear cat Elle is waiting for me on the welcome mat,
then follows me inside the house for cuddles on my lap.
The light is slowly fading as the sun begins to sink,
and leaves behind a brilliant glow of crimson, red and pink.

This dream is in a timeless place where visions become form,
and this is where you'll find me, when I'm once again reborn.

Premium Member A Place Called Beautiful

There is a place called beautiful nestled deep in my mind's eye
Gingham curtains crisply pressed frame periwinkle summer sky
Brass kettle on the old gas stove reflects cast iron pans
And always at the kitchen sink, I see busy, wrinkled hands.

There is a place called beautiful, I'm transported with a whiff
Of coffee brewing, dark and strong, I long to take a sip.
And in the air a trace of Tollhouse cookies baked this morn
And some perfume that only in this special spot is worn.

There is a place called beautiful I hear in perfect dreams
As Frankie croons and Louis wails all whilst the kettle steams
And as she works, she never tires as she hums and sings along
But the harmony of her lilting laugh is by far my favorite song.

There is a place called beautiful, it tastes like sweetest creams
Made in a bucket with a crank til her arms wore out, it seems
And topped with juicy berries that would burst upon each bite
And juices stained my mouth and clothes most every summer night.

There is a place called beautiful, I long to feel again
The naive sense that everywhere was as safe and free of sin
Where love and peace were daily served with a kiss upon the cheek
And grandma's kitchen always felt like you just found what you seek.

 4/9/2019 / Poetry Marathon Final Placement / Sponsor: Mark Toney


Place In My Heart

The scent of fresh baked cookies
filling the air
Sounds of Andrea Bocelli 
ringing in my ear
There's a pep in my step
and a feeling unfamiliar
My heart pounding, craving
one night, one taste
one look, one touch
Words dancing off your pages
speaking to my soul
entwined in romance
etched in my heart
tying me in knots

My heart has been opened
welcoming you in
No longer vacant
it longs for your warmth
your kindness
your presence
your whole

Mind blown. heart owned
bringing fantasy into reality
walking hand in hand
to the beat of the band

For tonight in the stars
it has been written
there is a place for you
in my heart
© Tim Smith  Create an image from this poem.

There's a Place

There's a place
a place I so long to go
distanced from the distractions
of the day
tilted and tucked away 
far from the promised road
of yesterday's dream

Where the yellow fragrant flowers 
only speak of love
each lucent petal pulling
at a piece of my heart
and the gentle breezes 
holding me ever close

There's a place
a place I so long to be
where green spacious mountains
sing out towards the heavens
where abundant butterflies float
oh so gallantly 
along crystal clear rivers 
and with my thoughts 
run fast and free

Oh leave that primrose path
and with the wind come along
embrace unknown possibilities
push past predictability 
and live life with a visibility
at a pace that is meant to last
© Tim Smith  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member A Quiet Place That I Sought

 When I was down in the dumps
I longed to be away from the din of the world
And a quiet place I sought

Nature has always been my refuge

Amid the clump of trees where the wind caresses the leaves
Where birds twitter and trill their songs
Like a hermit I sat, my eyes closed, my body lazing
My mind, open to the soft vibrations around
I took a deep breath inhaling the fragrance of flowers
And let the quietude envelop my being

Gliding through the layers of my consciousness
Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony
I let myself swim in the ocean of stillness

I felt the tranquil touch of an unseen presence
I heard a caring voice from somewhere 
A faint voice quite reassuring, so near
Within me the wider Life emerged
And the lesser life finally submerged 

I experienced true joy within
Peace filled, drowning all my tribulations 
And I knew it was heaven sent!

_________________________________

.19.2022

A Quiet Place Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

Premium Member A Place In the Sun-May, 7 --------Potd





A place in the sun shines for me.

Under the acknowledgement tree.

I don't mean from others.

They are too busy to be bothered.

Only from my experiences in life,

I find them full and ripe!

Only you, really can crown your poem.

Put it in your warm heart~

The poem's true home!

 

                    5/5/2021
                      ~3~

Premium Member Whispered Melodies - First Place Contest Winner

In the twilight's golden glow,
Where the sighing breeze does blow,
A hushed song fills the tranquil air.
A melody that's beyond compare.

The trees sway in a graceful dance.
As the wind weaves its whispered romance,
Leaves rustling in rhythm, so serene,
Nature's orchestra, a living dream, keen.

The moonlight bathes the world in silver.
As stars twinkle, a celestial quiver
"The silent song of the sighing breeze" 
Of love and longing across the seas,

Through valleys and mountains, it softly glides,
Bringing solace to hearts that have cried
In the stillness of the night's embrace,
The breeze's song paints a picture of grace.

Whispered melodies, gentle and true,
They speak of love, of hopes anew,
Of dreams that blossom under the moon,
And the promises whispered in lovers' tune.

In every rustle, in every sigh,
The breeze tells stories of days gone by.
Of lovers' kisses under starlit skies,
Of stolen moments and passionate ties.

It carries secrets from distant lands.
Whispered melodies from afar-off sands.
The hushed song of the sighing breeze,
Brings peace and comfort and puts hearts at ease.

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© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member - a Place Where the Soul Rests -

Frail, compact and sad
                             The old chapel needs new paint
                                cold room with stone floor










01.09.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Copyright © All Rights Reserved
5-7-5
https://www.howmanysyllables.com

Senryu: Sadness /third place in the contest

Premium Member In My Place

I have been put in my place many times
Told how to talk
What to think
How I need to look a certain way
Be the way I'm suppose to be
Expectations to be met
I could never be me

That place that almost drove me insane
I kept being placed there
Over and over again
Yet I had no choice but to be true to myself
I couldn't be someone else's book 
Placed on a shelf, in a perfect row, not standing out
No one knowing what I'm about

I ripped out the pages
Inserted my own
Scribbled on the cover
Added my own colors
My pages screamed to be read
Hoping others would hear what I said

As time went on
I often changed my design
Desperately trying to know myself
Unsure what I would find
Never really fitting in
Confused by what I found within
Hard to know where I belong
Listening to notes from others songs
Was my way of thinking right
In a distance I could see a glimmer of light
I dreamed my dreams
I craved the light

Then one day
All the pieces clicked
I fell into place
Joy accompanied by a certain grace
Comfortable with me
I live in the moment
I can just be
Finally, finally 
I am free
I know my place


Dedicated to my Friend Armand who knows 
his place and helps others discover their place. 
You my friend are a true original Happy Birthday!

Premium Member A Place of Timeless Harmony - a Tribute To Connie Marcum Wong

She rides on a sailing ship high in the skies
embracing creation of her wandering star 
cheerfully greeting her guests.
Some pleasant and chatty,
some on occasion she may ask,
            “Please don’t fall over me.”


Hawaii is where her heart lies;
and island of poetry that inspires her soul, 
of orange sunset against sublime radiant blue.

She strolls up and down the tan beach,
enjoying the feel of warm grains of sand between her toes,
breathing in the whole innocence of beauty
as tears of joy blend in with the cool briny sea.

A place of timeless harmony
her peace of heaven  

6/19/2017

A tribute to Connie Marcum Wong
Her poems are inspiring

This was a comment written by a friend;  I know is if a fight breaks out on a plane and I'm your flight attendant please don't fall on me during your altercation  ??
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member - A Place Where Roses and Love Never Die -


Your voice rose gold 
touching deep beauty
If I were a cloud 
I would rain kisses all over you 
It was no secret that she was in love with the rain


Landing on paradise
blown away like a hurricane 
Lifting me of my feet 
floating in your beautiful words
To set sail in strong love storm
Dance with me in grace
If love is gentle like you
Long gentle kiss awaiting warm and soft lips


Holding hands your grace 
joy lights up inside every shadow
Dreaming by candlelight
The obsession tiny diamonds from heaven pour
Take me with you into your dreams 
where I will be happy and free with you forever more 

Within the angel rays of sunlight sparkle
A tantalizing sensation wowed by the gaze
Together we will travel through
the unknown path of rose petals
Twelve red roses softly blush scarlet 
wishing in the heavens for you
we will sing in another world angel
 
Maiden of the ocean whispering waves 
Each one salted with your spices
Let the waves hypnotize us
In Magic moments we shared so much more
Trying to soak everything in, not wasting any time
Dream of a thousand lifetimes beyond compare
Gentle winds kissing you a queen in four corners 
within warm pockets inside fingers of air



Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  10.07.2015 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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