Premiere Contest WinnerA Place Called Beautiful

There is a place called beautiful nestled deep in my mind's eye
Gingham curtains crisply pressed frame periwinkle summer sky
Brass kettle on the old gas stove reflects cast iron pans
And always at the kitchen sink, I see busy, wrinkled hands.

There is a place called beautiful, I'm transported with a whiff
Of coffee brewing, dark and strong, I long to take a sip.
And in the air a trace of Tollhouse cookies baked this morn
And some perfume that only in this special spot is worn.

There is a place called beautiful I hear in perfect dreams
As Frankie croons and Louis wails all whilst the kettle steams
And as she works, she never tires as she hums and sings along
But the harmony of her lilting laugh is by far my favorite song.

There is a place called beautiful, it tastes like sweetest creams
Made in a bucket with a crank til her arms wore out, it seems
And topped with juicy berries that would burst upon each bite
And juices stained my mouth and clothes most every summer night.

There is a place called beautiful, I long to feel again
The naive sense that everywhere was as safe and free of sin
Where love and peace were daily served with a kiss upon the cheek
And grandma's kitchen always felt like you just found what you seek.

 4/9/2019 / Poetry Marathon Final Placement / Sponsor: Mark Toney
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Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:15 PM
It's great fun going through the winners and seeing a few poems that use themes i once wrote on, and I'm thinking , wow, I should have entered that one of mine. It was so difficult to know what Mark would enjoy seeing, and I see you chose very well with this theme of reminiscense. Bravo. I love this poem! Congrats on the winners' list.
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 11:33 PM
Back with more congrats on this poem (that was a FAVE as soon as I read it) and your high placement in this marathon contest, Cindi.
Toney Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Cindi, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, you have won 12th PLACE overall in my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest!!! Kudos to you for your well-deserved win! ~Mark
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 2:50 PM
this poem is amazing and well deserving of top spot in the contest. Belated congrats to you.
Rockwell Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Johnson Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 9:50 AM
I've seen that very place. This is wonderfully well done. Congratulations.
Rockwell Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Thank you. I wish such places existed today.
Agustin Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:17 PM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Rockwell Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 10:00 PM
Thank you for your feedback! <3 Cindi
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 8:06 PM
Wow an obvious FAVE for me. Bravo and congrats on your gold medal win, Cindi.
Rockwell Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 8:38 PM
Thank you so much!
Toney Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Cindi, nicely done! Congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 17 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Rockwell Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Thank you Mark!
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
Gentry Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Congratulations on your high placement in this contest Cindi and its trophy win too in 2016. An amazing piece! : )
Richards Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:23 AM
So glad to see this beautiful poem again. It is definitely a winner and a beauty !!
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 9:26 AM
The love just oozes between each lovely verse and line of this beautiful poem! I loved it !! Congratulations !
Rockwell Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Thank you!
Turner Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:35 AM
I could smell the cookies and feel the love Mrs Cyndi. A beautiful write about a place we all have somewhere in the back of out minds or lives. A well deserved winner, congratulations.
Rockwell Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thank you!!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:58 AM
I so enjoyed this nostalgic piece. Slice me a piece a pie and I'll join you at the kitchen table.
Rockwell Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thank you. Hope you like apple!
Canerdy Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Wow, Cindi, what a beautiful poem! I was still teared up after reading Richard's; then I read yours. This is truly great poetry. Congrats on your win! Janice
Rockwell Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Thank you!
Krampe Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful tribute to grandma. Agnes
Arnone Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Great word choices and pacing. I love the line, "Gingham curtains crisply pressed frame periwinkle summer sky." It just sounds so good when you say it! Congrats on your placement. :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Well expressed! A double congrats for both contests.
Ninja Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Lovely win, Cyndi.
Arnone Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Perfect for you -- but, what about grandma!? Beautiful write. ;-)
Rockwell Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Every grandma and grandchild knows the world revolves around the latter! Haha!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 3:24 AM
If this poem was written from personal experience I would say you are rich beyond measure. This is so beautiful Cindi. The way your poem flows so seamlessly and melodic. Wow, what talent you have! Congratulations on your well deserved first place! A fave for me. 7 ; )
Rockwell Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 9:09 AM
It's a conglomeration of friends' grandmothers' homes, and some in books and dreams. Thank you!
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations Cindi, well done and well deserved win...
Rockwell Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Thank you Charlie!
Pennell  Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 11:10 AM
yeah Ive just been there after reading this lovely poem stephen congrats
Rockwell Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Thank you.
Daniel Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 8:08 AM
This is simply so beautifully written:) Congratulations on a well deserved win, Cindi:)
Rockwell Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 11:26 AM
Thank you.
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