Whispered Melodies - First Place Contest Winner

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In the twilight's golden glow, Where the sighing breeze does blow, A hushed song fills the tranquil air. A melody that's beyond compare. The trees sway in a graceful dance. As the wind weaves its whispered romance, Leaves rustling in rhythm, so serene, Nature's orchestra, a living dream, keen. The moonlight bathes the world in silver. As stars twinkle, a celestial quiver "The silent song of the sighing breeze" Of love and longing across the seas, Through valleys and mountains, it softly glides, Bringing solace to hearts that have cried In the stillness of the night's embrace, The breeze's song paints a picture of grace. Whispered melodies, gentle and true, They speak of love, of hopes anew, Of dreams that blossom under the moon, And the promises whispered in lovers' tune. In every rustle, in every sigh, The breeze tells stories of days gone by. Of lovers' kisses under starlit skies, Of stolen moments and passionate ties. It carries secrets from distant lands. Whispered melodies from afar-off sands. The hushed song of the sighing breeze, Brings peace and comfort and puts hearts at ease.
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Date: 7/12/2023 2:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sotto, Very nicely done
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Date: 7/10/2023 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Whispered Melodies" is a lovely write/picture. Have a great day writing away.....................
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Date: 6/29/2023 1:26:00 PM
So beautiful!!
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Date: 6/29/2023 10:32:00 AM
Ten years from now when you read this you will still if not more be proud of this piece. I know where it comes from. It's something inside. You have it, I get it sometimes. It's not just intelegence it's something Divine.
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Date: 6/28/2023 10:14:00 AM
Eloquent imagery. Whispering melodies enchant your dreams. Nice poem.
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Date: 6/28/2023 8:30:00 AM
Such a beautiful scene. A utopia, so enchanting, and you have brought it to life in a poetic paradice . An amazinging poem A definite favourite for me.
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Date: 6/28/2023 5:57:00 AM
You are simply amazing. A master at rhyming verse. Poems are always at your finger tips. Your felicity with words is enviable. Into my FAVE
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Date: 6/28/2023 5:52:00 AM
Whispered melodies enchant your poem, my friend. Splendid vibes throughout you weaved from the given theme. For sure a winner, Lasaad.
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Date: 6/28/2023 5:48:00 AM
Just love this. It's beautiful and the language is breathtaking, brilliant, breathless... it is a true inspiration and I am in awe. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/27/2023 9:59:00 PM
Elegant imagery. I wish I can hear such melodies.
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