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In My Place

I have been put in my place many times Told how to talk What to think How I need to look a certain way Be the way I'm suppose to be Expectations to be met I could never be me That place that almost drove me insane I kept being placed there Over and over again Yet I had no choice but to be true to myself I couldn't be someone else's book Placed on a shelf, in a perfect row, not standing out No one knowing what I'm about I ripped out the pages Inserted my own Scribbled on the cover Added my own colors My pages screamed to be read Hoping others would hear what I said As time went on I often changed my design Desperately trying to know myself Unsure what I would find Never really fitting in Confused by what I found within Hard to know where I belong Listening to notes from others songs Was my way of thinking right In a distance I could see a glimmer of light I dreamed my dreams I craved the light Then one day All the pieces clicked I fell into place Joy accompanied by a certain grace Comfortable with me I live in the moment I can just be Finally, finally I am free I know my place Dedicated to my Friend Armand who knows his place and helps others discover their place. You my friend are a true original Happy Birthday!

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Date: 8/14/2016 6:28:00 PM
I love the "revelations of self" and your words convey the "out of sorts" emotions leading up to the "epiphany" wonderfully. The "writing elements" really add to the overall theme...the double "finally" in the last verse, feels like an exuberant exhalation. Superbly written, a joy to read. blessings, lynn
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2016 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Lynn, this is a write inspired by my experience growing up. It is a personal favourite. I appreciate your positive feedback.
Date: 12/11/2014 7:50:00 PM
Absolutely, positively first-rate. I love it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2014 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate you reading my poem.
Date: 5/5/2014 3:08:00 AM
Beautiful poem Richard....society I feel tries it's best to put and keep us all in our respective places (according to it) the bravest and the stubborn will always shine through....great write...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2014 8:15:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate you taking time to look through my poems.
Date: 9/20/2013 8:35:00 AM
Richard, enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs*SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/20/2013 9:08:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 9/17/2013 2:46:00 PM
Congrats on you being you..Expectations hinder our being and becoming who we were meant to be..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/18/2013 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Sara
Date: 9/15/2013 7:58:00 PM
Congrats - Excellent. Ralph
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/16/2013 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Ralph
Date: 9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM
this goes into my favourite list. . . well thought and done. . . it definitely will be placed top 3 in future contest. . . I put my money where my mouth is. . . honestly the best in this contest with my highest Mark too! Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2013 7:02:00 AM
I am pleased Morgan, thanks.
Date: 9/15/2013 4:29:00 AM
I totally feel the same way, though I think im still at the stage where am ripping out the pages...love the happy ending...congrats on the win!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ Y.L.N
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2013 7:04:00 AM
It is an ongoing process of ripping and rewriting. Thanks for the note.
Date: 9/15/2013 4:12:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Rick
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2013 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram.
Date: 9/14/2013 6:19:00 PM
Richard, Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2013 7:05:00 AM
My pleasure Linda.
Date: 9/13/2013 7:12:00 AM
Hi Richard! Lovely poem - it is a wonderful feeling to find where you belong. Well penned.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2013 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Vicky!
Date: 9/9/2013 1:11:00 PM
An excellent write for the contest....I love how you wrote this, I would definitely pick you to read from all the other books on the shelf : ) Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2013 7:48:00 AM
You are sweet, thanks!
Date: 9/6/2013 5:45:00 PM
Sent you a Soup mail Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 6:34:00 PM
On my way to read it.
Date: 9/6/2013 11:53:00 AM
How can you be comfortable with yourself, if your not the real you? Excellent thoughts here Richard. Glad you found yourself. Write on my friend! :o)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Dan:0)
Date: 9/6/2013 8:50:00 AM
Hey good friend! Drake is a hero of mine and many others I'm sure... one of the top writers here on the Soup! This should give you a good shot at top spot! Kudos!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Jack, I hope you are right.
Date: 9/6/2013 7:06:00 AM
:) WOW! Richard...Beautiful! :) I certainly know your place...A favorite book! :) Was out of internet...Just got reconnected...Have a great day!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 7:13:00 AM
Awww thanks Eileen.

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