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Place In My Heart

The scent of fresh baked cookies filling the air Sounds of Andrea Bocelli ringing in my ear There's a pep in my step and a feeling unfamiliar My heart pounding, craving one night, one taste one look, one touch Words dancing off your pages speaking to my soul entwined in romance etched in my heart tying me in knots My heart has been opened welcoming you in No longer vacant it longs for your warmth your kindness your presence your whole Mind blown. heart owned bringing fantasy into reality walking hand in hand to the beat of the band For tonight in the stars it has been written there is a place for you in my heart

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/28/2018 10:53:00 AM

Fine piece Tim, superbly penned and glad you're an Andrea Bocelli fan. Gordon

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/28/2018 4:11:00 AM

My heart has been opened / welcoming you in / No longer vacant ...///// prettiest poem

John Rey Canon

Date: 11/25/2014 2:49:00 AM

It's pretty and sweet, and its simple imagery is wonderful. Love the music

Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 3:47:00 AM

Thank you John....cheers Tim

Beryl A. Ouma

Date: 11/10/2014 3:46:00 AM

Beautiful great piece Tim makes me fall in love to read it over and over again

Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 3:53:00 AM

Thank you Beryl

Rene Chabriere

Date: 11/3/2014 4:44:00 AM

I'm sure the fresh baked cookies are very tasty ! Men are often inspired by cooking...

Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 5:27:00 AM

Oh when I'm happy I love to cook....Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/30/2014 9:35:00 PM

wowowow!! still the sweet romantic you.. :D! love this Tim.. :D!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 5:26:00 AM

Thank you Olive...hugs Tim

Eve Roper

Date: 10/30/2014 12:32:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic write Tim, never get tired of reading your work. hugs :) eve

Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2014 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve...hugs Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/30/2014 8:46:00 AM

If there is a place in your heart, dear Tim, certainly it has been written by the stars! Beautiful, warm and touching poem! I liked it a lot!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2014 3:24:00 PM

Thank you my good friend...cheers Tim

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2014 12:02:00 AM

Wow! You have outdone yourself with this mush romantic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening and exceptional poem here this evening! What a youthful piece, Great Work!!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2014 3:23:00 PM

Thank you Russell my freind....Tim

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/29/2014 7:20:00 PM

Oh that is music to my ears, what a fabulous melody! I love it :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 9:05:00 PM

Thanks Cassie..... You can't beat some fresh baked cookies :) hugs Tim :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/29/2014 6:44:00 PM

wow, you make my heart sing this this lyrical piece, tim.. huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 9:03:00 PM

Thank you nette my sweet friend... Hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 5:14:00 PM

I love your free verse writes you have a real flair for this style. Excellent.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Maurice... They do seem to flow....cheers my dear friend

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/29/2014 4:27:00 PM

'For tonight in the stars had been written/there is a place for you in my heart'.These words are more beautiful than my most favourite song of Boccelli 'Vivo per lei'.Yes each verse a heart grabber :.).Andrea Boccelli is one of tlhe best best singers in my opinion,as you are one of the best best poets.Mmmm those. cookies..I ll be baking some soon : ).To my favoutites.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 4:33:00 PM

Lol...either way it is a beautiful compliment... I will have to send you some of my cookies ..or just come visit and make them there...I heard what happens in Malta stays in Malta....hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/29/2014 4:29:00 PM

Ow gee I got confused and made a typo- favourites I meant : )

Jan Allison

Date: 10/29/2014 4:07:00 PM

oh Tim such a tender romantic poem filled with hope. Andrea Boccelli mmmmmm - what a voice and oh that greying hair lol! I actually have 'Time to say Goodbye' earmarked for my funeral oh aren;t I a cheery one. Well this poem has a place in my heart and is straight into my faves:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2014 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Jan that is a beautiful song...hugs Tim

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/29/2014 3:42:00 PM

Tim My Good Friend . . . A most enchanting write here indeed. I like "The sounds of Andrea Bocelli ringing my ear..." The tone, tempo, and images are right on target -- Perfect!! A "7" from me and I will FAV this one too!! Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary