In This Place

I am the weed
Nestled
In a crack in the pavement
Dismantling concrete
Crumbling foundations
In this man made world
Rooted in the earth
Despite the city
I am the seed




11/05/18

Composed for Line Gauthier's
Zen Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Swan Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:53 PM
Love to celebrate the power of the seed and the hope it brings even in destruction.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Me too :))) Forgot about this one, thank you! Have a lovely day, xomo
Kingston Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 8:13 PM
I loved how the weed, who is small, ugly, possibly disrespected, maybe shot sometimes with weed killer, is quietly so strong it can break stone! Don't underestimate the 'weed' There is a mystery in a seed. I love your reference to the seed. Only a seed is so powerful that it eventually moves the earth. Such a great metaphor. One I would read to a fifth-grade class and even a college class for a very interesting discussion. I hope you don't mind my comment. Loved it.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Marikate, so much! I am honoured. xomo
Proust Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poem. In do turn I am paying respects to one of yours, but you have so many great poems. I will try to read more. This poem is perfect; worded and in a way the way it looks on the page. The weed in the beginning comes from the seed at the end; as if this poem grew from the ground up. Plus the single word line "Nestled" suggests the weed in some ways is hiding. But the best is that you wrote "man made world"; that's why Nature is a Woman; a Mother. Blessed be.
Foster Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 11:16 AM
This had loads of POWER... I loved it. Makes me think of the mustard seed. So small, yet Faith... moves mountains...
Schumacker Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 4:29 PM
Hi Maureen, There is greatness in the simplicity of this one. It is very charming and to the point. Nicely done. Earl
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April 11, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Thank you my friend :) xomo
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 11:49 PM
Awesome Maureen. That's a favorite
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Thank you so much Allen! :) xomo
Brereton Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 11:55 AM
I love this one! Great work!
Schiavina Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Excellent!
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Back with more congrats for climbing the best poem chart, Maureen.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Vijay! A wonderful surprise :) xomo!
Yerman Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 5:11 AM
This planter a seed of thought in my head and so many others...no telling how far it will grow...thanks.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Sweet! Thank You! xomo
Nair Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Packs so much life within, like a seed.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 12:39 PM
Thank you! :) xomo
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Hello Maureen, every plant starts with a seed, even a weed that is not wanted. have a nice evening my friend. Hugs.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Darlene :) xomo
Brewer Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 12:11 AM
This is striking in its simplicity and very Zen. I am very impressed. Well done, Maureen
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you so much Geoffrey! :)) xomo
Knowlton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 12:18 PM
What a great original poem
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November 28, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Charlie! :) xomo!
Asbury Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 8:26 PM
Wonderful!! I have always been fascinated by the power of a seed. Very wel-written.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Sherry! :) xomo
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Such power in so few words, Maureen. Nature never gives up! Lovely poem, and congratulations on your fine win. A Fave for me! Hugs, Sandra
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November 20, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much Sandra :) xomo! Hugs
Hopper Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Excellence!
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November 20, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thank you Anna! :) xomo
May Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Congrats on your win Mo
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November 16, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Thank you Joseph, xomo
Marc Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Well said. Beautiful. A FAV.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Thank you P.M. :) xomo
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Back to give you congratulations on your second placement Mo. You know I loved this one! xxoo : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Thank you lovely! :) xomo
Gaul Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Really interesting. Thought provoking and image provoking. Congratulations.
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November 16, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Greg :) xomo
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November 15, 2018 at 8:26 PM
Congrats on your most deserving win, Maureen. With few words you captured the struggle of daily life perfectly as well as our ability to conquer our challenges. Love your poem. A FAVE.
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November 16, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thank you so much Line! I am thrilled and honoured. An extra special thank you for the prompt, this piece would not otherwise be :) A lovely day to you <3 xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations, Line, on POTD!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 7:36 AM
;) thank you Kim! xomo
Smith Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Keep these great thoughts Maureen, belated congratulations....
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Thank you Charlie :) xomo
Ashley Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Your poem is beautifully potent, Maureen. I love the spirit of it! Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Lovely! xomo <3
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