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A Quiet Place That I Sought

 When I was down in the dumps
I longed to be away from the din of the world
And a quiet place I sought

Nature has always been my refuge

Amid the clump of trees where the wind caresses the leaves
Where birds twitter and trill their songs
Like a hermit I sat, my eyes closed, my body lazing
My mind, open to the soft vibrations around
I took a deep breath inhaling the fragrance of flowers
And let the quietude envelop my being

Gliding through the layers of my consciousness
Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony
I let myself swim in the ocean of stillness

I felt the tranquil touch of an unseen presence
I heard a caring voice from somewhere 
A faint voice quite reassuring, so near
Within me the wider Life emerged
And the lesser life finally submerged 

I experienced true joy within
Peace filled, drowning all my tribulations 
And I knew it was heaven sent!

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.19.2022

A Quiet Place Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Anitha Jayasankar Date: 7/21/2022 9:27:00 PM What an amazing write dear Valsa... Nature has so much to give for those who genuinely LISTEN to HER!.... Loved reading this inspiring ink that sprinkles true experiences of peace and joy amidst nature... a pathway to spirituality... Sorry for not coming to your page for a long time to read your marvelous poems... not getting enough time, still trying to find time for our Soup family.... Big hugs... ~ Ani Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 7/21/2022 9:41:00 PM Ani, I must thank you for finding time to read and comment on this even in the midst of a busy schedule. Each time I spend too much of my time here, I experience a kind of prick of conscience, for I am a mother and a house wife more than a poet ! I can understand you.... but don't keep away from writing for long as there is a great poet in you seeking to soar high ! Thank you for your lovely comment!

Bill Baker Date: 7/21/2022 2:25:00 PM Lovely, peaceful place to be, Valsa. The mind sometimes wanders, but the spirit brings us back and heals the aches of our souls. I enjoyed reading this poem my friend. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 7/22/2022 3:04:00 AM Thanks a lot dear Bill . Thanks for the wonderful feed back you are giving to man of my poems !

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/20/2022 12:57:00 PM Your poem really shines with spiritual light Valsa. “Gliding through the layers of my consciousness Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony I let myself swim in the ocean of stillness” I really resonate with this stanza especially. This is a Fave for me my friend! Just gorgeous! I am sure it will be honored with a win in the contest. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 7/22/2022 3:07:00 AM I feel so delighted by your beautiful comment dear Connie ! Quite excited to know that you have added this to your FAVE list ! Thanks a lot ! Stay healthy and hale !

Rico Leffanta Date: 7/19/2022 6:28:00 PM The web of life strengthens us when we realise we are not alone, but part of it, as you have so well described! Aloha! Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 7/22/2022 3:10:00 AM Here L am sure you are serious ! When we are surrounded by Nature and when we feel there is a spirit within us, we never feel alone. Thanks a lot Rico !

Robert Gorelick Date: 7/19/2022 5:48:00 PM I experience such moments of grace in times of great turmoil. Rare but healing. Your description sure resonates! Robert Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 7/22/2022 3:11:00 AM Glad you could experience such rare moments ! Thanks a lot dear Robert...

I Am Anaya Date: 7/19/2022 5:21:00 PM a peaceful ending, love "soft vibrations." How keen your words, how vivid your story! Good luck Valsa Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 7/19/2022 4:02:00 PM I can fully relate to this and experienced this too. You have written this so well. A Fave for me. Thanks for sharing :) Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 7/19/2022 10:14:00 AM Reading your poem has sent me into a state of tranquility, dear Valsa. I relish your imagery of a quiet wooded area awash with the gentle sound of birds and the sweet fragrance of flowers. I really like your concept of the lesser life submerging and the wider life emerging, and my favorite line is "Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony". What a beautiful way to begin my day in a heaven sent state of quietude. A fave for me; thank you for sharing. Grace and peace ~ John Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 7/19/2022 9:13:00 AM So serene and spiritual! Good luck for the contest, Valsa Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 7/19/2022 8:29:00 AM Valsa, This is so very beautiful. Nature has always been my refuge as well. Nothing compares. You have so eloquently described some of the soothing elements ...and it is such a lovey feeling. Silence has a special language all is own which is magical. Hugs and blessings to you dear one, Susan :) Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 7/19/2022 6:53:00 AM Valsa, when surrounded by a magnificent landscape, you emanate inner joy and tranquility. This sort of place that you describe is well-known for its abundance of peace and quiet. Please try to take a look at my poem "  Non-dual Awareness " I'm interested to know what you think. Thank you, dear poetess friend. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2022 4:56:00 AM There is so much peace and serenity in the kind of place your describe, Valsa. Tranquility you convey of joy within when amid bliss of nature. Best to you. Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/19/2022 2:15:00 AM This is beautiful.. a serenity, a soothing, a silence... wonderful write. God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/19/2022 1:07:00 AM I have the impression that there is a film about a quiet place, but your poem is completely different. It evokes serenity, a calm that soothes the soul. Login to Reply