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A Quiet Place That I Sought

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When I was down in the dumps I longed to be away from the din of the world And a quiet place I sought Nature has always been my refuge Amid the clump of trees where the wind caresses the leaves Where birds twitter and trill their songs Like a hermit I sat, my eyes closed, my body lazing My mind, open to the soft vibrations around I took a deep breath inhaling the fragrance of flowers And let the quietude envelop my being Gliding through the layers of my consciousness Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony I let myself swim in the ocean of stillness I felt the tranquil touch of an unseen presence I heard a caring voice from somewhere A faint voice quite reassuring, so near Within me the wider Life emerged And the lesser life finally submerged I experienced true joy within Peace filled, drowning all my tribulations And I knew it was heaven sent! _________________________________ .19.2022 A Quiet Place Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 7/21/2022 9:27:00 PM

What an amazing write dear Valsa... Nature has so much to give for those who genuinely LISTEN to HER!.... Loved reading this inspiring ink that sprinkles true experiences of peace and joy amidst nature... a pathway to spirituality... Sorry for not coming to your page for a long time to read your marvelous poems... not getting enough time, still trying to find time for our Soup family.... Big hugs... ~ Ani

Valsa George
Date: 7/21/2022 9:41:00 PM

Ani, I must thank you for finding time to read and comment on this even in the midst of a busy schedule. Each time I spend too much of my time here, I experience a kind of prick of conscience, for I am a mother and a house wife more than a poet ! I can understand you.... but don't keep away from writing for long as there is a great poet in you seeking to soar high ! Thank you for your lovely comment!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/21/2022 2:25:00 PM

Lovely, peaceful place to be, Valsa. The mind sometimes wanders, but the spirit brings us back and heals the aches of our souls. I enjoyed reading this poem my friend. Hugs, Bill

Valsa George
Date: 7/22/2022 3:04:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Bill . Thanks for the wonderful feed back you are giving to man of my poems !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/20/2022 12:57:00 PM

Your poem really shines with spiritual light Valsa. “Gliding through the layers of my consciousness Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony I let myself swim in the ocean of stillness” I really resonate with this stanza especially. This is a Fave for me my friend! Just gorgeous! I am sure it will be honored with a win in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George
Date: 7/22/2022 3:07:00 AM

I feel so delighted by your beautiful comment dear Connie ! Quite excited to know that you have added this to your FAVE list ! Thanks a lot ! Stay healthy and hale !

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/19/2022 6:28:00 PM

The web of life strengthens us when we realise we are not alone, but part of it, as you have so well described! Aloha!

Valsa George
Date: 7/22/2022 3:10:00 AM

Here L am sure you are serious ! When we are surrounded by Nature and when we feel there is a spirit within us, we never feel alone. Thanks a lot Rico !

Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/19/2022 5:48:00 PM

I experience such moments of grace in times of great turmoil. Rare but healing. Your description sure resonates! Robert

Valsa George
Date: 7/22/2022 3:11:00 AM

Glad you could experience such rare moments ! Thanks a lot dear Robert...

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/19/2022 5:21:00 PM

a peaceful ending, love "soft vibrations." How keen your words, how vivid your story! Good luck Valsa

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/19/2022 4:02:00 PM

I can fully relate to this and experienced this too. You have written this so well. A Fave for me. Thanks for sharing :)

John Watt

Date: 7/19/2022 10:14:00 AM

Reading your poem has sent me into a state of tranquility, dear Valsa. I relish your imagery of a quiet wooded area awash with the gentle sound of birds and the sweet fragrance of flowers. I really like your concept of the lesser life submerging and the wider life emerging, and my favorite line is "Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony". What a beautiful way to begin my day in a heaven sent state of quietude. A fave for me; thank you for sharing. Grace and peace ~ John

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/19/2022 9:13:00 AM

So serene and spiritual! Good luck for the contest, Valsa

Susan Lawrence

Date: 7/19/2022 8:29:00 AM

Valsa, This is so very beautiful. Nature has always been my refuge as well. Nothing compares. You have so eloquently described some of the soothing elements ...and it is such a lovey feeling. Silence has a special language all is own which is magical. Hugs and blessings to you dear one, Susan :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/19/2022 6:53:00 AM

Valsa, when surrounded by a magnificent landscape, you emanate inner joy and tranquility. This sort of place that you describe is well-known for its abundance of peace and quiet. Please try to take a look at my poem " Non-dual Awareness " I'm interested to know what you think. Thank you, dear poetess friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/19/2022 4:56:00 AM

There is so much peace and serenity in the kind of place your describe, Valsa. Tranquility you convey of joy within when amid bliss of nature. Best to you.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/19/2022 2:15:00 AM

This is beautiful.. a serenity, a soothing, a silence... wonderful write. God bless you. Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/19/2022 1:07:00 AM

I have the impression that there is a film about a quiet place, but your poem is completely different. It evokes serenity, a calm that soothes the soul.