Valsa George Poet Free verse

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A Quiet Place That I Sought

 When I was down in the dumps
I longed to be away from the din of the world
And a quiet place I sought

Nature has always been my refuge

Amid the clump of trees where the wind caresses the leaves
Where birds twitter and trill their songs
Like a hermit I sat, my eyes closed, my body lazing
My mind, open to the soft vibrations around
I took a deep breath inhaling the fragrance of flowers
And let the quietude envelop my being

Gliding through the layers of my consciousness
Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony
I let myself swim in the ocean of stillness

I felt the tranquil touch of an unseen presence
I heard a caring voice from somewhere 
A faint voice quite reassuring, so near
Within me the wider Life emerged
And the lesser life finally submerged 

I experienced true joy within
Peace filled, drowning all my tribulations 
And I knew it was heaven sent!

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.19.2022

A Quiet Place Poetry Contest
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Anitha Jayasankar July 21, 2022 at 9:27 PM What an amazing write dear Valsa... Nature has so much to give for those who genuinely LISTEN to HER!.... Loved reading this inspiring ink that sprinkles true experiences of peace and joy amidst nature... a pathway to spirituality... Sorry for not coming to your page for a long time to read your marvelous poems... not getting enough time, still trying to find time for our Soup family.... Big hugs... ~ Ani Valsa George July 21, 2022 at 9:41 PM Ani, I must thank you for finding time to read and comment on this even in the midst of a busy schedule. Each time I spend too much of my time here, I experience a kind of prick of conscience, for I am a mother and a house wife more than a poet ! I can understand you.... but don't keep away from writing for long as there is a great poet in you seeking to soar high ! Thank you for your lovely comment!

Bill Baker July 21, 2022 at 2:25 PM Lovely, peaceful place to be, Valsa. The mind sometimes wanders, but the spirit brings us back and heals the aches of our souls. I enjoyed reading this poem my friend. Hugs, Bill Valsa George July 22, 2022 at 3:04 AM Thanks a lot dear Bill . Thanks for the wonderful feed back you are giving to man of my poems !

Connie Marcum Wong July 20, 2022 at 12:57 PM Your poem really shines with spiritual light Valsa. “Gliding through the layers of my consciousness Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony I let myself swim in the ocean of stillness” I really resonate with this stanza especially. This is a Fave for me my friend! Just gorgeous! I am sure it will be honored with a win in the contest. Blessings xxoo Valsa George July 22, 2022 at 3:07 AM I feel so delighted by your beautiful comment dear Connie ! Quite excited to know that you have added this to your FAVE list ! Thanks a lot ! Stay healthy and hale !

Rico Leffanta July 19, 2022 at 6:28 PM The web of life strengthens us when we realise we are not alone, but part of it, as you have so well described! Aloha! Valsa George July 22, 2022 at 3:10 AM Here L am sure you are serious ! When we are surrounded by Nature and when we feel there is a spirit within us, we never feel alone. Thanks a lot Rico !

Robert Gorelick July 19, 2022 at 5:48 PM I experience such moments of grace in times of great turmoil. Rare but healing. Your description sure resonates! Robert Valsa George July 22, 2022 at 3:11 AM Glad you could experience such rare moments ! Thanks a lot dear Robert...

I Am Anaya July 19, 2022 at 5:21 PM a peaceful ending, love "soft vibrations." How keen your words, how vivid your story! Good luck Valsa

Heidi Sands July 19, 2022 at 4:02 PM I can fully relate to this and experienced this too. You have written this so well. A Fave for me. Thanks for sharing :)

John Watt July 19, 2022 at 10:14 AM Reading your poem has sent me into a state of tranquility, dear Valsa. I relish your imagery of a quiet wooded area awash with the gentle sound of birds and the sweet fragrance of flowers. I really like your concept of the lesser life submerging and the wider life emerging, and my favorite line is "Dancing to the beats of my inner symphony". What a beautiful way to begin my day in a heaven sent state of quietude. A fave for me; thank you for sharing. Grace and peace ~ John

Unseeking Seeker July 19, 2022 at 9:13 AM So serene and spiritual! Good luck for the contest, Valsa

Susan Lawrence July 19, 2022 at 8:29 AM Valsa, This is so very beautiful. Nature has always been my refuge as well. Nothing compares. You have so eloquently described some of the soothing elements ...and it is such a lovey feeling. Silence has a special language all is own which is magical. Hugs and blessings to you dear one, Susan :)

Sotto Poet July 19, 2022 at 6:53 AM Valsa, when surrounded by a magnificent landscape, you emanate inner joy and tranquility. This sort of place that you describe is well-known for its abundance of peace and quiet. Please try to take a look at my poem "  Non-dual Awareness " I'm interested to know what you think. Thank you, dear poetess friend.

Vijay Pandit July 19, 2022 at 4:56 AM There is so much peace and serenity in the kind of place your describe, Valsa. Tranquility you convey of joy within when amid bliss of nature. Best to you.

Regina Mcintosh July 19, 2022 at 2:15 AM This is beautiful.. a serenity, a soothing, a silence... wonderful write. God bless you. Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar July 19, 2022 at 1:07 AM I have the impression that there is a film about a quiet place, but your poem is completely different. It evokes serenity, a calm that soothes the soul.