Atavistic Poems | Examples

MISUNDERSTANDING







I almost understand, but
but I do not comprehend
nor accept...

That your frozen blood,
fused in silent time,
with pupils painted
with ink of nonsense,
touched with the illusory dust
of an evident negativity,
can rave and enjoy

while watching the noiseless suicide
of my soul that survives
in the midst of a supernatural love
for your fabled figure...

Does nothing bring you
light memories lived,
atavistic happiness, dormant...!
Why do you need so much,
to bite my light that
shines night and day for you,
that bursts for your love,
since the beginning...!

Premium Member Pasta Love

How do I eat thee? Let me count the ways:
sauced, buttered, plain,
sprinkled with Parmigiano Reggiano,
pesto, pancetta, bacon.
Rowdy rigatoni, flamboyant farfalle,
perky penne, funny fusilli, lovely linguini,
spunky spaghetti,
personality abounds.
An atavistic love affair
with semolina goodness
in all shapes, sizes
like my three Aunt Rosas.
Dear pasta,
I count on you
for your depression-lifting goodness,
accepting no impastas!
When you end up in hot water,
you come out better than before.
You’ve stuck with me
through thick and thin,
mostly thick around my hips.
Pasta al dente, the choice
of strong Italian women!


Premium Member Paranoid Eyes

("Untitled", aka "The Crawling Eye", 2018, original encaustic)

Paranoid Eyes

We live in the old part of town
Where the walls have ears 
And the dark, eyes
We have learned to watch
What we say and do
Until mere husks remain
Of former selves

But we are proud
To live in such a world
Where inside is out
And out knows what is in
Where age-old atavistic fears
Have been projected 
Into technological feats

We even like 
That our phones know 
What we want to buy
Before we do
The iron fist of the surveillance state
Now just a velvet glove
On a limp consumer wrist

At least we have our dreams
The place where all lights shine, 
And all eyes turn, on us
The land before time 
Within the prison of our minds
Secure that we, while endlessly watching,
Are at least the only ones

(10/17/23)

Autumn - Constanza

Autumn – Constanza

The season that I like the most;
who cares for callow, shallow youth?
The young know nothing, that’s the truth.

With swallows, on their trip engrossed,
I, too, feel atavistic yearning
to celebrate the season’s turning.

And chestnuts in the fire, to roast,
with rosy apples, ripened sloe,
give off a fragrance old folks know.

That August sun, so swift to boast,
is not so mighty any more;
a wimper which was once a roar.

A feeble and decrepit ghost,
an oak leaf, shrivelled in my hand,
reminds me that I’m not so grand.

The season that I like the most;
with swallows, on their trip engrossed,
and chestnuts in the fire, to roast:
that August sun, so swift to boast,
a feeble and decrepit ghost.

Only By Chance

flashes of atavistic plurality
           saves us timelessly
           and sporadically
           from what we are
           programmed to be
           by the system... !


Premium Member Wrestle With Me

Wrestle with me; the small voice weighs
as does your brother when he prays.
There's much so wrong, but also right
I can council if you invite;
Shepherd your tenet when it strays.

Don't live in atavistic daze;
closed minds the playground where He preys.
Surrender not, put up a fight;
wrestle with me.

You love your pleasure, languid ways;
that sort of life, it soon decays.
As you retire to bed tonight
dreaming of your next day's delight;
think long before your lust obeys,
wrestle with me.

Premium Member A Kiss On the Forehead

A kiss on the forehead
Is a gesture of betrayal
It's not a kiss of love
Filled with joy and humor.

It would be better to kiss a dog
Which is as silent as a wandering
Moron in the Latin quarters.

Oh! Poor are those who smile
To these words emanating from a place
Where everyone has atavistic rights
Despite the silly threats of the accursed.

A kiss on the forehead
Is a sign of punishment
It is an act of treason.

P.S. Translation of ‘ Un Baiser Sur Le Front’ 
By Hébert Logerie.

Copyright © May 2022, Hébert Logerie, All rights reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of several collections of poetry.

Premium Member An Idea Sprouts

An idea sprouts
  a heterodox notion
Sweeps 'cross my radar ~
  atavistic wave on the ocean...

Can there really be
  in this metaverse evolved
A concept so novel, so fresh
  it gets people involved...

Admirable New World An Irony

We came from

modernity for

teach beings

underdeveloped,

we found that

totally unhappy

are these retards

aliens

race scum

human... these

that segregated in

colonies where everything

happens equal to

 the ancient days...

live impure,

dirty,

accumulating garbage...

live persecuted

by bacteria,

infected by

promiscuous contacts:

touches,

hugs,

kisses and

mating...

Practices since

long time banned

in modernity...

these practices

are animal

atavistic fruit

addictions...

copulation and

dual enjoyment...

we all realize

that the enjoyment is

individual...

each one has

 his share of pleasure...

these addictions

prehistorics.

are so filthy

how to eat the

in opened air,..

or how they mix

Ingredients:

carbohydrates,

starches,

fats...

poor things!

unhappy that

survive

in thoughts

Out of reality of

Modern...

poor creatures

who still dare

practice love

 with body

  present...!

Premium Member Activate the Arguement

Activate the Argument
David J Walker

A one-world lonely drop
	One word then two

From a pile of past important papers 
Pinned in the permanent ink of

atavistic fears and instincts 

picking
	three words then four

voices heard
	unseen 
in a perturbed 
rebirth of a past
manuscript 

what has she seen 
	and when did she see it
what did she mean 
	and when did she mean it

	five words
		then six
as thick 
as an August evening 
on a screened-in porch 

You explain
	I am the path 
But not its patron
	I am
The Paterfamilias
And not its Matron 

Eight words then ten
And it’s over enough to
Start again

Easternmost Point of Americas Collapsing

We have atavistic coincidence :
easternmost point
 of the Americas
Cabo Branco, Paraíba 
Brazil

Researcher Bees

atavistic ancient research
                bees scrutinize flowers
                service of serving the queen...

Atavistic Attitudes

I heard a story of a land
Where tolerance was all,
As one they lived together
Whatever creed or call.

Homophobia and misogyny
Xenophobia and distrust,
Those atavistic attitudes
Were crumbled into dust.

Of course 'tis but a fairy tale
But that it could be,
This world would be a pleasant land,
Where empathy runs free.

Premium Member Dog Days Endure

Dog Days Endure

Sirius, rising with late summer sun,
Dog star, your timeless tour has just begun. 
Sweet sultry lazy days beside the lake,
These precious waning days of swimming fun.

How I'll miss the warmth this season bestows
As romance dwells in soft full moon that glows.
I will miss the ducks that soon will fly south,
I'll miss my sandals baring naked toes.

Atavistic admiration will buy
These glorious last latent days from sky
Until autumn breezes in with her chill
And I will welcome hues and will not sigh,

For each season has beauty that's unique
With shades of glory in milieu mystique.
Each a blessing progressing to the next
Till then, let dog days gift the joys I seek.
    
9-29-18

~8th Place Premiere Contest~
Contest judged 12/1/18
(A Rubaiyat is a Quatrain with a rhyme
 scheme of AABA, CCDC, EEFE, etc.).
Sponsor Gregory Richard Barden

Breathing Death

'Breathing Death'


Atavistic air of love entombed
Awake aware of fossils fumed
Dragons breath a fatal fire
Sleeping death poison for hire

Eyes wide shut awaiting dark
Restless rut as demons bark
Descending stench clouds of gore
The reaper shrouds the whore

Now trapped within I sleep
Intoxicating mortal sin I weep.



note..."whore" representing death



March.13.2018
10 lines 5 words III
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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