Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

An Idea Sprouts

An idea sprouts
  a heterodox notion
Sweeps 'cross my radar ~
  atavistic wave on the ocean...

Can there really be
  in this metaverse evolved
A concept so novel, so fresh
  it gets people involved...

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Geoffrey Brewer January 5, 2022 at 8:25 PM An idea can penetrate armour plated steel. You speak sooth my Jewish friend. Have a blessed year, and maintain your own (un)orthodoxy. Gershon Wolf January 7, 2022 at 1:27 PM Thank you, Geoffrey. I'll continue on my unorthodox Orthodox path. Happy 2022!

Caren Krutsinger January 5, 2022 at 11:27 AM I hope so! I truly do! Gershon Wolf January 5, 2022 at 3:05 PM Gosh, I hope so too!! Thanks, Caren.

Jennifer Proxenos January 5, 2022 at 11:01 AM Unorthodox poetic ideas are always so welcome for me, as i enjoy being controversial, it makes for good written topics or debatable conversation - love this write, Hugs, blessings, Jenifer. Gershon Wolf January 5, 2022 at 3:04 PM Good for you, Jennifer! Looking at things with a 'fresh eye' is what helps make you a poet... As for me, some here in Chicago call me the 'unorthodox Orthodox Jew.' lol. As long as we're all laughing... :) gw