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I wrote since my elementary days, but I stopped..Just lately, maybe brought about by challenging situations and so much free time, I started to write, again....Most of my compositions talk about my day to day thoughts, my reflections, my experiences with the world and with God, events and whatever  crosses my mind....It is a transparent "me" and I hope to whoever will read , they will be inspired one way or another..

Most of my compositions are triggered by contests sponsored by the Premium Soup Members,  probably joining time to time from these, it developed and enhanced my writing in a way. Anyhow, I always managed to put myself within these poems. I can say that writing poems is now one of my fave hobbies.

I am a learner of poetry. This is definitely shown in my poems, different types and different subjects... I am a Filipina, born August 13, 1986.  English is not my native tongue. I render care with all kinds of people regardless of creed, age, religion and race.

Instead of speaking up, I intend to burst it all to poetry and by just singing........................... :) some will criticize as it is full of emotions or its "emo" but it is alright.. :) all I want to do is to express the things, I can't seem to say.

my compositions are my "hide outs", my fantasies,, my dreams and so long yearnings. I don't collect material things as like shoes, books, cds, paintings or so. however, these are my collections: MY POEMS. :)!

SWEATS AND SWEETS

Blog Posted:5/25/2015 8:39:00 AM

Fellow Soupers,

After a playful, youthful, exciting and fragrant theme: BLOSSOMS and BUBBLES, again I will tickle and challenge your rich creative thinking with another theme:

SWEATS

and

 SWEETS... 

 

enlightenedCompose a new and original version of SWEATS and SWEETS. 14-20 lines maximum. choose from these forms only: sonnet, sicilian/english quintain, ottava rima ,  triolet. Include the date. No names. Use SWEATS and SWEETS as the title.enlightened

James Fraser and I did a version on this theme. I challenged him. I enumerated three possible interpretations I have in mind regarding this theme then gave him the freedom to choose which we will write on.

Our collaborated version: 

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/sweats_and_sweets___collab_with_james_fraser_676905

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/sweats_and_sweets__a_collab_with_olive_eloisa_guillermo_676688

the contest link: 

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/member_contest_details.aspx?ContestID=6315

James Fraser and I will do the judging.

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THANK YOU and Have fun writing!smileyenlightenedwink

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thank you for all the inspiring comments I received despite me not returning back  comments or even a thank you. though from time to time, I look and see what contest I can join or comment also. I'll make sure that when all alright, I'll visit them. Thank you for the virtual hugs and the prayers.. God bless us all, always.. :)! smiley



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Andrea
Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2015 6:35:00 PM
oh my gosh, I had not seen the rule on forms. I am so glad I did it right!!(not posted yet but it was a fun one to try!)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 8:42:00 PM
sorry Andie.. the forms me and James proposed as these we both tried and tested to be both challenging and limiting.. :)!!
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Date: 5/25/2015 5:25:00 PM
sounds like fun... LINDA
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 8:40:00 PM
Lollie Linda thanks much for the suppprt aLways.. hugs tight.. --olive eloisa
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James
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:58:00 PM
I loved our collab Olive, it was fun writing it with you. Looking forward to assisting you with your second contest - smiles, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 8:37:00 PM
Weeee Huge James.... I sure welcome you in this and his my simple gesture to thank you for your gift... :)! trying to be better always and maximizing all that there is... im only brave cause of the thrill knowing other versions.... :)!
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Constance
La France
Date: 5/25/2015 9:59:00 AM
Oh my goodness, this is quite the challenge but I am going to give it a whirl
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 2:28:00 PM
Yes it is the challenge Constance.. :)hehehe i enjoyed it...

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