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HIGH YELLOW HIGH Fire above soaked under golden sun dancing in sound vim of bright skies and tender breeze then taste some under the tuscan suns, good times warming joy freshness high! ________________________________ ***Waltz Wave with syllables count ***UNDER THE TUSCAN SUN - happiness in a glass. It's a mixed drink: flavored grapes and orange juice. 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1 ***Sponsor Kim Merryman Contest Name Waltzing with Color ~~6th Place~~ O.E. Guillermo 12:45 PM, JULY 03, 2015

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Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 7/24/2015 4:21:00 AM

A bright bouncy write Olive!...and thanks for your comments.. I decided to change the line...best wishes Peter

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2015 12:00:00 AM

Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2015 4:21:00 PM

The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2015 3:46:00 PM

Just saw your message to me. Yes, I have done here alreayd violet, blue, yellow, white. Maybe it's only black I never did. I may have done red, but I picked orange because that is a color I knew I had not done. BIG congrats on your win here.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/5/2015 9:30:00 AM

thanks much Andie.. =`) weeeee!

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 3:26:00 PM

OLIVE, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/24/2015 8:51:00 AM

thank you Skat. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 7/19/2015 5:22:00 AM

such a happyl write Olive many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/24/2015 8:42:00 AM

congratz too JAn.. :D!thanks.. =')

Lee Carter

Date: 7/19/2015 12:04:00 AM

Fun happy yellow poem! Congrats on your win olive! ~lee

Lee Carter

Date: 7/18/2015 11:56:00 PM

Fun happy yellow poem! Congrats on your win olive! ~lee

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/24/2015 8:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Lee.. :)~

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/18/2015 11:51:00 PM

Olive, your poem reflects the happy cheerfulness of yellow. Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/24/2015 8:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim for the placement.. :D!

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/7/2015 9:12:00 PM

What a joyous piece of work! P3eace & Love Matthew Anish

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/9/2015 12:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Matthew.. I want such be radiated and felt within my poem! =") As this also the personality I maintain.. =")!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2015 10:26:00 AM

Lovely! A wave of mellow and joyful feelings under the Tuscan sun. Delightful imagery. gl in the contest Olive_eloi:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/9/2015 12:34:00 AM

Paul, Yellow is a bright happy color..when I made this one I wasn't thinking not only of the color but me also... I put myself in the poem as see I always try to be also happy.. well not bright as yellow but I do have my own light! =")~Olive Eloisa

James Fraser

Date: 7/4/2015 1:58:00 PM

Love this Olive, and it's making me so thirsty. Flavoured Grapes and Orange, mmm, yummy, nice xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/8/2015 9:03:00 AM

Yes taste it..! =")

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/3/2015 5:18:00 PM

This poem comes alive with color so well imposed by the superb imagery. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/8/2015 9:00:00 AM

WEEE i need to stAy on that Emile.. =") I love imagery!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 1:47:00 PM

awesome poem for an awesome color. If I had not already done a yellow poem, I'd have chosen this color, but orange is a color I have never written on, so I have an orange poem waiting in the wings for this contest.Good luck with yours, I know it will do well.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/6/2015 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Andie.. =)! Another try .. !!! I am choosing between blue and yellow... I have a poem already with color blue hence I chose yellow.. :D!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/3/2015 9:49:00 AM

enjoyed the feel-good mood of this one, eloi... keep the spirit; lovely.. saan ka na?.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2015 12:11:00 AM

still here in Phil Nette, I'll contact you soon for a meeting.. =) Hope you are free.. =)! weeeee thanks much on your comment!! ~Olive Eloisa

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 7/3/2015 6:49:00 AM

Nice write Olive and thanks for the comment...Peter

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2015 12:10:00 AM

welcome Peter.. Your poem caught my eye.. =0! Happy Sunday! ~Olive Eloisa =)!

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/3/2015 6:26:00 AM

I don't know how to waltz but I like the poem.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2015 12:07:00 AM

Thank much Milton, this my second try on this form.. =) what I like about the form is that it challenges me and stimulates my attention in choosing write words.. Allowing every word strikes as much as possible.. Not wasting a syllable.. :D!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2015 5:23:00 AM

Wow!! I haven't heard of this one..I don't know if I could try it or not for I might get dizzy..LOL..Thanks for dropping by..I desire to go to the peach packing shed today..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/4/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks much Sara.. I appreciate you dropping by.. =)! weeee that will be enjoyable I love to have such experience also.. ;)!

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/3/2015 4:15:00 AM

High yellow high!!!! Your poem just brightened my day. Good luck in the contest Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/4/2015 8:42:00 AM

Thanks much Njeri... =)!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/3/2015 3:44:00 AM

A waltzing wave of words, a wonderfully woven work that wow the woman in wuv! ehe...in love...whose name is Olive! You went out to the world, my dear kabayan! hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 8:01:00 AM

Kim, thanks much!!! :D! weeeeeee hugs back too! :D!

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 1:34:00 AM

Love the high. :) Olive... it's so bright.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight **SKAT**

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 3:38:00 AM

Hi Skat, I thank you for dropping a comment.. I tried my best let the color yellow appear as much in the poem.. though hard because the syllables are limited.. but I Like it.. I hope the reader will see and feel the liveliness of the color~ ~Olive Eloisa =)