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THE BUTTERFLY AND ME Venus butterflies tiptoe on roses rise playful in pirouette, they tango with the singing voice of a clarinet... Wouldn't this view capture your eyes? Swarm of fragrance fans my cheeks and so my hair, I turn around and see a butterfly so flair. I run, run to chase such butterfly with care but pity, I missed so I just stand and stare... Kissing now, the curves and swells of the hibiscus is a butterfly that dance in ballet hush, tickling the petals, oh! they bend and blush-- won't these two wonders make a sublime meniscus? Tomorrow morning, Do gaze at a butterfly say hello or wave a hi colorful they are but they only live for awhile Blessed, we are given years to live by but as colorful as how butterfly paints the sky Do we also brush the whole world with a rainbow smile? _____________________________________________________________ © O.E. Guillermo 09:57 pm, January30, 2015


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  1. Date: 1/31/2015 7:41:00 PM

    well you do Olive [brush the whole world with a rainbow smile?]How are you little one? Light & Love
  1. Date: 1/31/2015 6:30:00 AM

    This poem is delightful Olive. I love the way you've colored them with such aplomb. Love the way you write :) I love butterflies, the erratic way they fly makes me smile. They are wonderful to write about, and I have done so, even writing Dark Poetry about them, James :) xx :)
  1. Date: 1/30/2015 6:07:00 PM

    Though the time is short the color and dance is supreme . . . you and the butterfly . . . sweet is this image. 7
  1. Date: 1/30/2015 4:11:00 PM

    wow wow wow Olive this is simply divine the image and the imagery - the final stanza is simply sublime - will aim to paint the world with a rainbow smile- a 7 and faves:-) Hugs Jan xxx
  1. Date: 1/30/2015 1:09:00 PM

    I love this beautiful poem, Olive_eloi!! and the rhyme is so lovely. The ending message too is as delightful as the butterflies that you so excellently describe. Well done!!! hugs // paul
  1. Date: 1/30/2015 8:52:00 AM

    - Oh ... Olive this is so sweet and lovely - dance ballet with butterflies ... airy and light you are dancing (7) - Have a nice weekend :) - Rainbow smile // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/30/2015 8:52:00 AM

    Hi Olive, You have great language skills. This is stunning in its simplicity. I imagine this piece in a free verse form also. I think you could make it a masterpiece. Great job. Keep up the good work. I rated it a 7. Earl
  1. Date: 1/30/2015 8:52:00 AM

    + sorry a 7 !!!!