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I Want To Leave

I want to leave The next world holds more hope As this life seems lost in circles Both worlds filled with virgins Untouched I want to leave And escape the daily routines Of strangers who say hello Then walk away forever I am to be crucified On the alter of love And rise not ever again No one will treasure my shroud I want to leave For I am human Shrouded in the coldness Of being always alone I want to feel the kiss of a lover A warmth to blanket my soul How sweet would this be? Poetic words however are not real I want to leave The illusions of the heart How? Reality sends a cold chill down my spine Words are the arrows of poets Blood soaked in verse I return to fantasy In the moon light night From the beginning of time Where dreams were considered divine Here I rest a heavy heart An unfinished painting Collecting dust Inspired by Eileen Ghali who wrote a poem with the same title.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/28/2013 2:50:00 PM
- Yes, I read Eileen's poem .... this is deep emotions! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 4:03:00 AM
Forgot the 7...silly silly me!
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Date: 9/28/2013 3:59:00 AM
Arthur....another one inspired by my work??? That in itself is the GREATEST compliment, my dear! ...I'm very touched and spellbound by this piece. YOU are a poet extraordinaire...Look at you...already over 200 views whereas my little piece....Oh well, Yes...I will fav this, naturally...Such beauty and eloquence...Such...I'm floored. Anyway...A 7 and a fav...Thanks for mentioning my name at the bottom. That is very sweet of you, Arthur. Shoukran! I won't be leaving, just yet... :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/29/2013 12:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, your piece was truly wonderful, you have such great style!!

Book: Shattered Sighs