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Despair

Bore after bore fell silent eventually Abhor I do feel through my eyes Gore and sore now abundantly plenty Tore through clouds, wondrous skies Despair in abundance appears all around Where in the world has all our love gone Stare into our abyss, and see it abound There is no tomorrow, there is no dawn <*>

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:45:00 AM

    Bore and gore..Sad verse..Sara
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 10:07:00 AM

    A beautiful poem
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 4:54:00 PM

    been a while, my king of the highlands... you bring raw images into your lines; writing from the heart and spirit has been given to you so freely... princess delights in this sullen yet beautiful work... well done!.:) huggs
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:23:00 PM

    I have been picking up a few wins in some contest.I haven't thought of an animal one yet.I wrote one just for the 5 minute contest called STRONG WILLED I think you will like.Hope all is going well for you lately.take care
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 12:31:00 PM

    So full of emotion and negative energy, is this James; it must have taken a lot from you to put this out.. pleased to see you are back posting hope you are well; Joe..)
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 5:30:00 PM

    I love your beginning and end rhymes. Must have taken some doing. Well done, James. :)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 9:37:00 PM

    Deep James...there is no .promised. tomorrow or dawn...as you say...brings to mind Boston and Texas for me tonight...closing my eyes thankful for today...lovely write.....
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 11:39:00 AM

    my daughter signed up on here the other day.Megan Devon.Hope your days are good lately.take care.
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:14:00 AM

    Hi James, well you write it as it is, and with in it you create wonderful poetry as usual, and i for one, feel privilege to have read this...
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 6:41:00 AM

    This seems very sad james..it gets deep to the core..lets pray for sunrise.Hope to see more of your poetry...Charma
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 9:17:00 PM

    I wrote one for PD.take a look when you can.take care.
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:51:00 AM

    I thought I would take a trip to a land of shadows.well done. Thanks for your comments. I find it interesting you write about dark topics but with a hint of playfulness. I do not sense the darkness in your personality.
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 5:15:00 PM

    yes, I have been feeling this sometimes in my own life,James. Sad about the whole world. I know it is not good to moan about one's own woes with all the horrors in this world. But bad times just drag one down!! I sure liked how you did beginning rhyme as well as ending.
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 7:27:00 AM

    I love the way you wrote this.
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 1:27:00 AM

    My words exactly, my feelings, my sincere congratulations on this thoughful and provocative quatrain.
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 6:48:00 PM

    Nice even in it's darkness there are wondrous skies. Thanks for reading my Spider Haikus today. You have found your familiar paths. SuZ
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 11:50:00 AM

    do you remember the poem you wrote for me?consider the contest of a souper worth a tribute.it is on page 22 of your poems.Live for Tomorrow.you all have helped keep me around whether you know it or not.thanks for everything.
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 11:21:00 AM

    this one makes you think a little.haven't heard from you yet.take care.

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