His Blue Palette - Anacreontic Verse

HIS BLUE PALETTE ~anacreonti verse~ Lonely moon shed yellow light in month of June falling, falling are the tears carrying sad tunes. Palette of blue is the pigment spilled to his ink eversince the day red, colored their den at the lush grass is his wife, sprawled gasping, gasping for some breaths a deep hole seen under her chin. Her lips bit open as if to shout, eyes mirroring fear was it too late? They got her first.. There are questions bugging, lurking into his mind... Answers he longs. justice he craves two years gone but 'til now It is unknown, no one knows ... _______________________________ 9:33 pm, January 07, 2015

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White Sage

Date: 1/7/2016 4:58:00 PM

excellent write Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/21/2016 3:43:00 AM

thanks much white Sage.. =`)

James Fraser

Date: 1/7/2016 12:51:00 PM

Sad deep poetry Olive. Reading it again and again it's as if it's written about someone. To me the imagery feels so so realistic. If for a contets, I'm sure it would have done well ~~ hugs//James ~~ xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/14/2016 7:41:00 AM

JAmes, im not really sure what to enter but imad emy mind.. thanks for your generous comment.. =`) tight hugs and smiles, olive eloisa =`)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/7/2016 11:00:00 AM

delighted by the dramatic pacing of this verse, eloi... great storyteller you are.. you go, grreat pinay!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 2:49:00 AM

thanks much NEtte, I am actually torn which to enter.. =`) I didn't expect how i ended this.. =`)