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For The Premiere Contest, "Winter Sonata"- Sponsor, Jcb Brul, November 24, 2023

Snow falling— Falling. Feathers escaping from the pillow-heaven Confusing the air With the steadiness of a stampede Advancing, clinging, smothering. Snow falling— Settling. White fleecy lambs atop every protrusion Sleek ermine boas Draped upon the naked arms of nature Bare of their green velvet capes. Snow falling— Drifting. The spatula of wind Smoothing mounds of marshmallow frosting Billowy swirls Of whipped immaculate splendor. Snow falling— Burying. Obscuring the drab tired earth Her deep wounds of time Dissolving shadows of other seasons That Spring may arise again.

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 11/16/2020 10:48:00 AM

This is an excellent poem. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message regarding the snow. One can visualize the coming months, which will be snowy. Great job! have an awesome day and blessings always!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/16/2020 9:57:00 AM

its a joy to read this gem again Sandra, so glad you are now a lifetime member I have always loved your graceful poetry style and vivid imagery and have learned so much from reading your work since I started writing and joined PS:-) hugs jan xx

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 2/1/2018 2:00:00 PM

A beautiful descriptive poem in an elegant format.

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:24:00 PM

Thank you very much, Geoffrey! Sandra

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/1/2018 9:11:00 AM

One of your best. Congrats on your win.

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:18:00 PM

Thank you very much, Richard, for your visit supportive comments. Sandra

John Lawless

Date: 1/30/2018 10:49:00 PM

"the spatula of wind"...damn!!! what a beautifully simple expression of winter's wind and the wonder it creates..Congrats on your placement in the contest

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:24:00 PM

Hi, John, thank you so much for your visit and wonderfully supportive comments! Much appreciated! Sandra :)

Bartholomew Williams

Date: 1/29/2018 10:22:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your strong podium finish with this one! I love the imagery you use and the uplifting message, especially the promise of spring at the end. Wonderful!! :) Bartholomew

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:23:00 PM

Bartholomew, thank you for your visit and very supportive comments and congrats. Much appreciated! Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/29/2018 8:13:00 PM

Fav-ing this one, my friend ... I have come back to it four times, (I rarely do that). :-) <3

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gregory, for your very uplifting and positive comments and for fav-ing my poem! I appreciate it so much. Sandra :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/29/2018 7:59:00 PM

I adore your writing, Sandra, from start-to-finish, and this charming, whimsical, and hopeful creation is no different ... just gorgeous, my friend, and so deserving! Blessings, Dear Poet! (The ermine boas of snow - such imaginative imagery and metaphor, Sandra, and that's what I LIVE for!) :-) <3

Francis J Grasso

Date: 1/29/2018 6:46:00 PM

Beautiful, Sandra! Congratulations on your win! ...Fran

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Francis! Sandra :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/29/2018 4:29:00 PM

love your poem, Sandra, congratulations on your win :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/29/2018 4:27:00 PM

Superb imagery. Congrats, Sandra, for your fab win.

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:21:00 PM

Thank you once again, Line! Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/29/2018 3:15:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this WINNING poem, Sandra! Janice

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/29/2018 2:30:00 PM

Amazing piece Sandra, congratulations...

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thank you very much, Charlie! Sandra :)

Skat A

Date: 1/29/2018 2:22:00 PM

Sandra, Congratulations on your win. With Lots Of Love *SKAT*

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:19:00 PM

Hi Skat, a belated thank you for another fine contest and for my awesome placement! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/21/2017 8:26:00 PM

FABULOUS POEM ! I particularly love your line about feathers escaping from pillow-heaven. Paints a beautiful picture.

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/22/2017 5:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line, for reading my poem that was posted so long ago. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and I thank you for your nice comments. Sandra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 10:37:00 PM

anytime...PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:23:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/11/2015 9:36:00 PM

Hi Linda, thank you so much! No nice of you to stop by with your encouraging comment. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2015 9:37:00 AM

This is both a lovely and clever take on this seasonal topic, Sandra! Great imagery and expressive adjectives. a 7 rating for you! Congrats on a high flying result! // paul

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/7/2015 7:05:00 PM

Hi Paul, thank you once again for your encouraging comments, congrats, and support! I so much appreciate your taking the time, and I always look forward reading your comments. Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/6/2015 1:53:00 AM

Wow a lovely descript Sandra! congrats on huge win!

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/6/2015 7:27:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma, for your nice comment and congratulations. So nice of you to stop by. Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/6/2015 12:07:00 AM

A fave for me!!! :)! I love each stanza esp your first three lines from each!! :)! Your picture goes well with this.. :)! I wonder how you put such picture.. :)! I have some pics too but I don't know how to post them as they are my inspiration.. :)! BEAUTIFUL WINTER!!!! KUDOS!! ..... olive eloisa thanking you for the drop bys.. :)!

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/6/2015 7:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Olive, for your positive comments. I get a lot of pictures online at google.com, and then click "images." You can copy the hyperlink from a picture you select and then paste it in the picture and note area under the part where you post your poem. I really appreciate your stopping by, and thanks again. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2015 10:58:00 PM

I adore this one!!! Congrats and a FAVE for your unique imagery.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/6/2015 7:34:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. I appreciate your nice comments and support! Hugs, Sandra

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/5/2015 9:14:00 PM

Amazing write on winter, congrats on the win, Sandra

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/6/2015 7:35:00 PM

Hi Dr. Ram, thank you so much for your nice comment and congratulations. Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/5/2015 2:05:00 PM

I love how you painted this one repeating Snow falling. Beautiful imagery "sleek ermine boas" is so perfect. Congratulations on your top win.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/5/2015 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Maurice. I always appreciate your comments. Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/5/2015 12:08:00 PM

With such natural seasonal beauty, no wonder this is a top winner! The imagery is outstanding and I have a beautiful vision of "snow falling!" Congratulations, dear Sandra and best wishes. Pandita.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/5/2015 4:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pandita, for your kind, positive comments and congrats. I really appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/5/2015 10:17:00 AM

Oh my !! What a marvelous poem !! It drifted down the page in white beauty ... taking all it found into hibernation... Love it !! Congrats on your win !! Really enjoyed this !!

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/5/2015 10:54:00 AM

Hi Debra, thank you so much for your lovely comments and congrats. I really appreciate your stopping by with your support. Hugs, Sandra