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Sympathic Moon --- Tritina

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As midnight comes, moon tiptoes in to wait, to soothe her gently with a tender smile. Expectation is haloed on the wall Moon angles his light, around every wall, where mobiles dangle, and butterflies wait, to charm baby's eyes, and wrangle her smiles The clocks keep ticking, and the moon must wait. Someone is kicking inside belly's wall. She cringes in pain, ...but then bravely smiles. Dawn waits to smile, ...until she climbs that wall
_____________________________________________ For the Tritina "Baby" Contest: Sponsored by Craig Cornish 7/23/14

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  1. Date: 7/24/2014 8:44:00 PM

    Oh wow, I can feel the expectant Mother's emotion.. This is just classic good Carrie. Exceptional poem!
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 2:29:00 PM

    Dear Carrie, This is such a beautiful poem. Craig is sure to love it as much as I do. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Best wishes in Craig's contest. Love, Carolyn
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 1:14:00 PM

    well done Carrie, I found this to be an interesting poem from a point of view only a woman would know
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 11:33:00 AM

    I love the personification of the moon, rather like a first-time grandparent who just can't wait. Well-done best of luck in Craig's challenge.
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 10:43:00 AM

    Just lovely, Carrie, has a lullaby feel and such beautiful imagery of an expectant mother. Love it.
  1. Date: 7/23/2014 9:42:00 PM

    This is beautiful, Carrie...An expectant mother...I love that the baby hasn't arrived yet, and you take us to how the mother feels her first contractions. Lovely! The moon adds a magical dimension. Sweet

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