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A Poet's Heaven

Among the classic poets of fine rhyme - are balladeers who weave with lines a tale, the satirists and bards of the sublime, and troubadours who sing a light rondel. I close my eyes, imagining I'd dwell among them all - a poetess in bliss. Could heaven be as wonderful as this? With modern poets too I would commune; With friends I'd known on earth I'd reminisce . . . and poetry would flow - celestial boon! A Dizain with rhyme scheme: a. b. a. b. b. c. c. d. c. d

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Date: 4/15/2018 2:28:00 PM
Sweet poem, Andrea.
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Date: 1/29/2017 1:11:00 PM
What a lovely daydream! Heavenly poem, Andrea.
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/22/2015 12:10:00 PM
Well done, you are go good at all these different forms . I sure have lots of work to do learning some of them. I tend to do certain types and should really spread my wings. love phyl
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Date: 2/26/2015 3:25:00 PM
It sweetly flows, growing, glowing, and then to heaven's space where I must wait for more.
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:43:00 AM
Andrea ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:04:00 AM
Andrea, you are an impressive poet yourself and I was intrigued with your deep and vivid poem. I am fascinated by the poets of old, love looking at old and tattered poetry books and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/11/2015 9:16:00 PM
Well done Andrea. I've been away from the site for awhile but I see your skill and ability has only improved. Congrats on your well deserved win. Lee
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:13:00 PM
nice presentation,Great write...Kudos to you..Congrats on your win...
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Date: 2/5/2015 5:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea! Grace
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Date: 2/5/2015 12:02:00 AM
wowowowow Andie.... :)! I'm seeing also myself in this poem.. :)! I never thought that I'll have some beautiful friends here in soup that are wow in poetry and more.. :)! BIG KUDOS!!/olive eloisa.. :)! a fave!
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:33:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:40:00 PM
Very nicely written, Andrea. A poet's soul can sometimes experience heaven while creating. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:53:00 PM
lLovely, just lovely. Congrats. BG
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:25:00 AM
poetic heaven, lovely take Andrea. Congrats for top win. Mohan
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:58:00 AM
Congrats on the win Andrea, a great poem. love shane xxx
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:21:00 AM
Congrats on win Andrea Darling>rajat
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful especially the last line... congrats Andrea... a well deserving win... hugs,nad!
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Date: 2/3/2015 6:28:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:17:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:29:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Andrea:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 10:19:00 AM
Not many can write as well as you my fair lady. This is lovely! I hope to see it high up on the winner's list where it belongs.
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Date: 1/29/2015 9:16:00 AM
Very well done -JT
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:55:00 AM
a lovely write and definitely a piece of heaven for sure but now you got me thinking so I have to ask you to write a poem called a poets hell just to indulge my curiosity
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:03:00 PM
beautifully crafted excellent pen andrea
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