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The Gift To God, I Gave To Give -

To myself to I, to God I asked
what nature of sample shall I give,

the tribute must be something, already possessed
and not a thing to be acquired or easily accessed,
what type of treasure, what placid pleasure,
what measure of scintillating success should be expressed,

many feelings, dealings, winnings and blessings I have
like the menificent merchant of an ageless & melancholy market,
however I am disinterested in the buying & selling of impressive items,
something of my core should be present, priceless, respirative,

multitudes give Deity thick thanks in pompous prayers
or grim graveling of worship,
others offer animal immolation or coin from shallow pocket,

as does everyone I experience the panic of pain,
that terrible teacher of no remorse whose curriculum 
makes carion of cowards,
but as a student of Life and thus a pupil of pain
I realised that my mind can be a calm cistern,
my heart a coffer of adversity's copious rewards,

the determination is made,
my proudest possession, enlightenment derived from pain,
enchanting and admonishing like the howls hungry beasts,
a gift of character, a jewel of dreams manifest,
God accepted and said,
" Someone, somewhere, somehow is suffering to better feats" -

J.A.B.

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:08:00 PM

    As a student of life I get the very deep meanings. I know that painful experiences can set us on the path of attaining our better self as we discover our most important purpose. Love the messages here :)
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:55:00 PM

    Excellent message Justin. It's always very rewarding reading your work. "Enlightement derived from pain" --yeah, I believe pain and tribulation build character and stregthen us. There's much to discover how far we can go and God knows what we can handle. I like how this poem seems to revolve around God. To allow your mind to be a "calm cistern" through it all can be a difficult task. I admire your words. Nice avatar! Take care, Justin and have a great summer. (: Always, Laura
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Without the pain within the struggle, triumph wouldn't be as rewarding... Blood, sweat, and tears afford the bill. It holds more value than something acquired from coins! Loved it poet!
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:37:00 PM

    Hello Justin, wow... I understand the end perfectly. You have always amazed me with your poems and insight powerful thoughts. In my perception, we have no gift greater then ourselves. Every good and perfect gift we offer, will find a reward somehow. I'm glad God is not a material God who likes changing like shifting shadows. The nature of the example of gifts you seek to offer are excellent tips and tricks for designing a better feats and traits. In which will find the right gift through your heart, you have great determination my poet friend. I love God's answer at the end of your poem. I've always thought of him as selfish... yikes did I say that out loud... super enjoyed... xox~ LINDA
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:22:00 PM

    - A deep and very well written poem Justin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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