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The Halo Of Her Heart

When you laid your hands upon my naked heart
feeling the flex of it's fire, accessing the innocent desire,
holding the form of a new need, I swear, that's when love did start,
your touch became my tradition, the wine of your wisdom my lovely teacher,

From the fine feathers of your soft steel wings
I write poetry of storms in paradise and of love in your eyes,
sympathizing with my sage solitude, yet subduing the sadness it brings
you offer me everything an angel owns, halo and bloodroots, and together we rise -

J.A.B.

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  1. Date: 8/30/2015 8:39:00 AM

    Your writing is the distillation of desire!
  1. Date: 8/29/2015 10:09:00 AM

    A seductive write Justin, you penned this with passion of love. the description of this wonderful write is eloquent,great and excellence and she is indeed a great; her angelic hands have filled a lot of people with bliss through you......... A 7! And a fav.. love...................A.M.
  1. Date: 8/28/2015 9:14:00 PM

    Justin, I enjoyed reading this write. It so full of love,passion,admiration and appreciation. I could go on and on about this well written piece. Excellent job! I'm glad I stopped by to view this amazing poem.:-)Alexis 7
  1. Date: 8/28/2015 12:50:00 PM

    Justin, this is a beautiful angel poem -gossamer , a 7 and thanks for visiting my hushed pen poem
  1. Date: 8/26/2015 9:15:00 PM

    This angel must have given you the gift of writing and the inspirational muse to continue with it... I enjoyed reading your tender poem, Justin. Beautifully penned!
  1. Date: 8/22/2015 9:33:00 AM

    I'm back to just enjoy this again, and I have also read your thoughts in your replies to others. Kim
  1. Date: 8/20/2015 5:34:00 AM

    Angels are my weakness, just dropped in with a hello, been away for a few days and it did me a world of good, came back to your comment, life is good, thank you, you're a friend of great substance, xxx love you xxx
  1. Date: 8/16/2015 3:52:00 PM

    I've missed your poetry, Justin. It is so beautiful and so full of sweet honesty. I wish you happiness....
  1. Date: 8/15/2015 12:36:00 PM

    Very beautiful poem <3
  1. Date: 8/5/2015 3:57:00 PM

    Justin, this is very touching and a profound description of a relationship. I also like to read people's comments, and it seems you have had a very positive impact on poets in this space. I am extremely happy that you are able to do this and hope that you will continue your excellent work and influence. Sir, be well.
  1. Date: 8/5/2015 2:42:00 AM

    Justin, the finesse in your words,, the increasing intensity of the effect of your phrases! I like much your first stanza.. =')! Stunning verse always!~Olive Eloisa
  1. Date: 8/3/2015 10:45:00 PM

    I love when you are inspired like this, sweet poet! I can picture such a magnificent ascension, rising higher with every pump of the heart, every bolt strike of the soul's joyous awakening..Always, Laura
  1. Date: 8/3/2015 10:43:00 PM

    Breathtaking, dear Justin...the amount of love and gratefulness in this poem is inspirational, wondrous, and humbling. I love your line, "your touch became my tradition, the wine of your wisdom my lovely teacher" -the first stanza is very touching. I can tell your heart is engaged deeply in this piece as you provide such personal parts of you in it, highlighting the angelic presence of your love who provides sustainable strength for your growth and hers together.
  1. Date: 8/3/2015 1:48:00 PM

    Justin, this is a deep and beautifully penned poem full of love
  1. Date: 8/3/2015 12:54:00 PM

    I swear you never run out of nice things to write, you're a fountain of inspiration Justin, please splash some of it my way and invigorate me won't ya, an old friend, xxx
  1. Date: 8/2/2015 8:40:00 PM

    You have a new post! I'm not sure but from those I've read, this is by far the shortest. Regardless, the brevity does not affect the intensity of the message. Loved the line "I write poetry of storms in paradise and of love in your eyes". It tells of the complex nature of the subject. I would like to delve longer on "soft steel wings" though. Will have to return to this later at a more relaxed moment, Justin. As with your other writes, a 7 and fav. hugs!

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