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Alluring elegance of Simla, the queen of hills, Morning pleasant breeze, at night gives chills ! Snow clad mountains, silvery charming shine, Tall Deodar trees , dense forest , also few Pine, Aromatic flowers garnish nature's platter, vividly grow, Rivers run smooth , at times exhibit a turbulent flow ! Soulful scenic marvel, must artistry come alive, No artist or poet here can ever fail to thrive, Green valley on one side, hilly serpentine road, As summer sun peaks, it is my heavenly abode ! Written on 13/6/14 Contest- Hills are alive with poetry Sponsor- Scott thirty seven * Simla is the capital of state Himachal Pradesh ( Devbhumi Himachal meaning thereby Land of Gods ) in India. Ranked 5th Now for Andrea's contest- let's get technical Awarded HM

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Date: 7/29/2014 2:14:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:48:00 PM
Congrats on a beautiful win, Dear Doc.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:59:00 AM
Thnx dear Arlene !
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:58:00 AM
Date: 7/27/2014 4:16:00 PM
Great poem about your hills. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:57:00 AM
Thnx Joyce ! Appreciate ur visit !
Date: 7/27/2014 12:44:00 PM
Dr. Upma, it was not technically perfect but I really enjoyed your poem. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:56:00 AM
Thnx for liking n my placement Andrea despite techno errors ! Actually docs r more of logical n scientific people ,, don't ever get into English discipline more ,, so howsoever hard I may try,, I can't match any of great poets here !
Date: 7/23/2014 5:05:00 PM
thanks for the reply
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Date: 7/10/2014 2:12:00 AM
beautiful and enchanting
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Date: 7/10/2014 3:08:00 AM
Thnx dear!
Date: 7/9/2014 7:56:00 PM
I so enjoys this view of your country I wish I could visit the northern part of India where the Raj were! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 7/10/2014 3:08:00 AM
Thanks Debbie! If u wish so, may God grant ur wish ,,u r most welcome to visit ,, wud be an honour for me to take u around ! It's a natural heaven!
Date: 7/9/2014 3:49:00 PM
a heavenly WRITE! Congrats for your fine win, dear.
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Date: 7/10/2014 3:04:00 AM
Thnx Andrea for ur lovely comments!
Date: 7/8/2014 11:32:00 PM
Dr Upma,, the hills are alive with poetry, that's how it goes. Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda
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Date: 7/10/2014 3:02:00 AM
Thnx PD ! Love to hv ur comments always dear!
Date: 7/7/2014 8:06:00 PM
Congrats.. Informative piece. I enjoyed. BG
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:21:00 AM
Thnx Barbara ! Glad u enjoyed!
Date: 7/7/2014 7:58:00 PM
You paint a serene picture with these elegant words. Thank you for the glimpse you have given us of this beautiful place.
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:19:00 AM
Glad u liked Scott ,, thanks for my placement ,, it was a thought provoking contest!
Date: 7/7/2014 7:06:00 PM
I remember my all time favorite movie the 3 idiots:) love this one and ill make it one of my faves!!!! i love the picture in it :)
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:18:00 AM
Thanks dear Olive ! That was a fabulous movie! Watched it thrice!
Date: 7/7/2014 3:28:00 PM
Hi Upma! now, where did you buy that paint brush from?! Great scenic peauty that you managed to paint. Simla must be a great place to visit! Congratulations on a very deserved win. // paul
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:13:00 AM
Hello Paul ! Thanks for lovely comments ,, that brush was gifted to me by soupers ,, glad u liked ,, yes it's a great place ,, always welcome!
Date: 7/7/2014 11:14:00 AM
Beautiful scene, Upma. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:10:00 AM
Thnx Faye my dear friend!
Date: 7/7/2014 9:12:00 AM
Wonderful trip through this wondrous forest. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:09:00 AM
Thnx John !
Date: 6/15/2014 4:22:00 AM
Nicely written Dr. Upma. GL in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Verlena !
Date: 6/13/2014 9:44:00 AM
Yes, Dr. Upma, I can relate to the beauty of Simla,
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram ! U must hv been there I m sure !
Date: 6/13/2014 8:06:00 AM
Perfect ! What a great place that would be to see! I enjoyed this, I hope you do well in the contest for this is a winner :)
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Casarah for lovely comments n wishes !

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