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BEAUTIFULLY BOLD The purple angel facing the sun, so fair to look upon has a tenacious grip on the moors; it roots secured. With its head held high, it sways at ease in the breeze; yet for puncturing thorns, surely, it will be scorned. Never trained for battles, its winter seed pods rattle defying each foe, flowering even in spring's white snow. Its sharp spines bring tears, pricks equals to a sharp spear to Scotia a dauntless brave, for their land was saved! Like a woman defending her virtue, to any, she is bold to face, yet, the angel as a lion-heart. Her words full of art, bloom despite the pain, a greater beauty she attains. Where ever she may live, this heavenly thistle will thrive. This humble weed will prosper in the rich faithful soil she seeds before the sun she and Royal Scotland have plighted their troth __________________________________________________________________ ***Inspired by the painting Thistle in a Field, by Fidelia Bridges 1875 __Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__ January 19, 2015 ~~This a late post because I have no internet connection for almost 5 days...

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Date: 2/5/2016 5:11:00 AM
You paint a very beautiful image that I can see right before and tell its story with such grace and style...
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:49:00 PM
Aye, the Scottish or European Thistle scribed with aplomb through your words Olive ~ hugs//James xx
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Date: 2/1/2016 11:20:00 AM
I like this picture, and I also like the poem that it inspired! This humble weed reminds me of a humble girl who will prosper wherever she may go, because she is strong in character and full of faith! ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/31/2016 4:50:00 AM
Beautifully written.As an old Scottish said: "Lang may yer lum reek". Have a long life and best career to enchanting us.
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Date: 1/30/2016 5:01:00 PM
I love the the pic your write depicts. A very excellent piece........A.M.
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Date: 1/29/2016 12:49:00 PM
wow, this is deliriously good, eloi.. i feel the beauty of a wild-weed flowing through you and me with your striking images!... thanks for enjoying my entry for you.. nakakataba ng puso!.. love and huggs
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Date: 1/29/2016 7:52:00 AM
Ingenous, who would have thought a painting of a weed could be expressed so beautifully. A7
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Date: 1/29/2016 6:01:00 AM
- A great poem, Olive! - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2016 5:59:00 AM
Each verse is a humble weed using as soil our soul. Best wishes.Congrat.
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:28:00 AM
Thanks much Ovidiu!!!=`)

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