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Miracle Divine

In the midst of great turmoil and strife, There is a force manifestly to be heard…seen….touched A voice—ever so soft… yet loud enough to break mountains at their base It can make a grown man cry—can distort the finest face Lead the mother eagle back to its nest… Run its hands against a tumultuous sea to rest… Shedding tears of empathy when the woman, With child, is seen- alone…sore. . . distressed With mind enduring beyond mortal endurance With arms stretching across the universe of opportunities and darkness With eyes blossoming like those crazy sunflowers reaching to the sky… Suddenly… you will feel its yellow fires It is the very storm that knocks us down To the depths of humility...patiently waiting for the perfect time to strike, It comes like an earthquake and tremors the very soul into action... It is the war of mercy that will devour to create and rejuvenate! It tells the geese to fly south, whispering them in the right direction... It is the soft growl of the lion that wakes its babe to safety... Like music, it can soothe, or agitate, Its rhythms changeable…forgivable… When you take a wrong turn, a dissonant chord harsh as lightning will expel Suspended in the air—colors more mysterious than hell And when you love—oh how sweet love carries cherished lips cosmically…. A smile of the most precious melodies ring New colors—see it, new colors shall spring What this light truly means is to be revealed Only for the precious few who listen and truly feel Wrapped in the soft ribbons of love beyond all mortality Beyond space and reality Beyond the very tip of the mountain, That never had to be touched to be brought to its knees….. Not once did this force ever have to take the woman by the hand And say with conviction… “everything will be okay….” Because phenomenally… she would simply hear it in melody, Inspired by the blazing sun of a newly dawned day- Freshly caught tears of joy priding the lonely spider’s web For Justin Bordner’s Divine Intervention Contest Thank you, with love, Laura

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Date: 10/4/2014 9:59:00 AM
Enjoyed reading nice.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/4/2014 12:02:00 PM
I'm very glad : ) Thanks for reading..~Laura
Date: 10/3/2014 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautifully penned poem, written so passionately showing the depth of your faith Laura.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/4/2014 12:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Brenda. : ) ~Laura
Date: 10/2/2014 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. The style you use here is my favorite kind of poetry. Although it is free verse is has a light poetry feel to it. Which again is my favorite form when correctly applied. I love this poem...this child of yours. I will add it to my favs.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/2/2014 8:30:00 PM
Maurice, thank you. I am honored...~Laura
Date: 10/2/2014 4:38:00 PM
What a lovely person you are an excellent expression of your faith. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/2/2014 8:32:00 PM
How sweet of you Debbie...thank you so much! I thank Justin and all that's around me for the inspiration. I had a awesome time. ~Laura
Date: 10/2/2014 12:29:00 PM
Beautifully expressed! It flows strongly from the depths of your passionate emotions. This is called poetry. Congratulations on a deserved win, Laura!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/2/2014 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul...this poem was a true delight to write...~Laura
Date: 10/2/2014 10:17:00 AM
Absolutely incredible Laura many congrats on your podium place hugs jan xxx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/2/2014 3:37:00 PM
That's very sweet, Jan. Many thanks!! ~Laura
Date: 10/2/2014 7:45:00 AM
your first three lines caught me already and so the succeeding lines..... indeed God's Divine Intervention is seen in variety not only directed to us humans but to all His creations.. :) Making this my fave as it touched me.. :) you make me feel Blessed, thankful and wonderful.. :) A TRULY DESERVING WINNER..!!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/2/2014 3:38:00 PM
Olive, I just got done reading your poem. What a beautiful piece you crafted! Your lines are truly memorable... and thank you so much! You are a sweetheart. I am ecstatic that this poem had this effect on you... ~Laura
Date: 10/2/2014 7:44:00 AM
Excellent writing skills.Absolutely Awesome Laura...Congratulations on The Huge Winning Moment.I would say You definitely Earned this One.....You capture a Divine Intervention to the Tee.I absolutely love this One so I Favorited You New Friend...Love-Char
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/4/2014 12:07:00 PM
How sweet of you to say that, and thank you..I appreciate your words and I am glad you love it! ~Laura
Date: 10/2/2014 5:22:00 AM
Nicely crafted poem on divine intervention, Laura. congrats
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Date: 9/26/2014 5:25:00 PM
stunning piece of writing
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/26/2014 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Liam (: Means a lot. ~Laura
Date: 9/25/2014 8:56:00 PM
Oh my this is beautiful. You take me and wrap me up in your words and leave me breathless on the floor of my desire. It is like an earthquake an tremors my very soul. Thank you Laura you have made my world alive again.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/26/2014 12:08:00 AM
This is the sweetest comment... thank you, Stephen. I am so glad you can get something out of the poem. Your poetry is beautiful, raw... rare. Sending you lots of love and care ~Laura
Date: 9/22/2014 2:27:00 AM
Laura, what a gem you have here. I love the divinity it brings. This is superlatively written. GL in the contest... Verlena
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/23/2014 5:49:00 AM
(ever known for that matter ) :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/23/2014 5:47:00 AM
Thanks a million Verlena. It was amazing to get into this mindset and really search deep for words that just seemed to spurt out. I am delighted you enjoyed the poem - I give much credit to Justin for inspiring this work. To be sure, he is the greatest poet I have ever read. ~Laura
Date: 9/20/2014 7:47:00 PM
Oh Laura, keep giving me that love! Super Wow! Holy...Shut Your Mouth! This is a divine masterpiece woman, you've got the touch! So far there are many superb entries in the Contest, this composition is a serious competitor!!! I admire how you return with such grace to the mountain metaphor. Your examples of intervention are precious and powerful, the omnipotence is beautiful. The whole poem should be quoted, remarkable Laura, just miraculous...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/20/2014 10:26:00 PM
Your comment made my day! Thank you! Can't wait to read the other poems on this fine subject! ~Laura

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