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YOU AND ONLY YOU Strewn pebbles after a tide ballet for a pause So am I when still you are not by my side but God is good that even those pebbles when slowly gathered-- spell a good use... Pieces of me I consider blues and black Gladly, you constellate: creating a mosaic no longer you settled as a friend that consoles but you built something even rusts can't corrode --------------------------------------------------------------------- Vous et nul autre, Vous et nul autre, You and only you... From smile of sunrise to weeping break of night my love, you and only you I long to have and hold I want our eyes spark then lock on same shine I want your arms' warmth wrap around mine Vous et nul autre, Vous et nul autre, You and only you... Sensing strongly tonic trembles 'neath my fingertips I wonder what God was thinking when He created you for meeting you plays a life spring in crown of trees. To commitments said with kisses drawing life's game, Vous et nul autre, Vous et nul autre, You and only you... You and only you, I want to walk with forevermore. To your eyes, your nose and then to your lips, each kiss a speech of my love and thanks for thee, my Darling this I promise to do through eternity. ___________________________________________________ ***vous et nul autre (French) - You and nobody else but I reword it to --- You and only you. ***"I wonder what God was thinking when He created you" is a line from the song WHEN GOD MADE YOU by Natalie Grant and NEW SONG*** Music to my ears poetry contest - Poetry Contest Sponsor Name - Silent One Olive ELoisa Guillermo 9:58 pm, July 31, 2015

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Justin Bordner

Date: 8/10/2015 2:01:00 AM

God must have thought that your heart is prepared for total love...do the pebbles spell love, I wonder Olive. A very beautiful pairing of imagery and intellect of love with the beach pebble metaphor and a nervous yet clear heart. The vision of you in love, yet alone, spelling truth and desire on a wild beach with the pebbles of hope is gorgeous Olive...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/28/2015 7:38:00 AM

thanks much Justin nailing again so easily my poem of what am trying to convey.. thanks for you generous comment always.. =`)~Olive eloisa

James Inman

Date: 8/6/2015 11:24:00 AM

Olive, beautiful write, sweet and emotional. Lucky guy.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 3:49:00 AM

thanks much James.. :D we are both blessed.. :D

Paul Callus

Date: 8/3/2015 4:08:00 PM

Well done Olive_eloi! Beautiful romantic lyrics with a perfect refrain. God's plans are well prepared; your faith will be rewarded! ~ Congratulations on yet another win:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 3:34:00 AM

Thanks much Paul..=`) I am so glad you like it.. =`)

James Fraser

Date: 8/1/2015 6:13:00 PM

Poetry is gifted to you Olive, and you sure know how to make use of it. This poem is crying out to be a song. Lets visit it soon to assemble for resemble, and sing it to write. Blessed weekend to you, hugs//James....

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/6/2015 7:51:00 AM

let's try why not.. =')!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/1/2015 12:53:00 AM

What a melody Olive! Finest poem u hv come up with on a sweet song, congrats on big win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 12:57:00 AM

Dr. Upma, I thank you for your wonderful comment.. =')~

Skat A

Date: 8/1/2015 12:04:00 AM

congratulations... SK

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/3/2015 4:08:00 AM

thanks much! =')

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/31/2015 11:34:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your win. nice to see this contest by Silent One.... Always ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/3/2015 4:08:00 AM

thanks much Lollie Linda.. =')!weeeeeeeeeeeee hugs!

Len Gasun

Date: 7/31/2015 10:21:00 PM

Another stunning write my very dear, Amiga! Many Huge Congrats on your win as well! Ang galing! Mabuhay ang mga talentadong Pinoy! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/3/2015 4:06:00 AM

thanks much Leonora.. =')! weeeeee hugs and cheers too!yey!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2015 9:18:00 PM

gosh, Olive. you went all out on this one. It is so pretty and looks like it could be sung as a romantic song. BIG congrats on the winners' list. (also you formatted it SO well, even putting the inspirational line in bold print!)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/3/2015 4:03:00 AM

thank you so much ANdie.. to think that, I was confused where I'll put the two first stanzas.. then I settled as like this thinking that if this is sang the first two stanzas be narrated.. while one sings! I was inspired when my eye catch that phrase!then without hesitation I just write my thoughts!!! I think this one of the poems I made in just few minutes =')~OLive ELoisa

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2015 6:01:00 PM

This is so odd Olive - i commented on this poem this morning - the first line simply blew me away ! my congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/1/2015 8:40:00 AM

thank you so much Jan.. =') Im glad you like it and hugs back.. =")!

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/31/2015 10:51:00 AM

Hello Olive Eloisa!! What can I say . . . such passion, such feeling, and such beauty. This one Dear One in my book is both a "7" + FAV. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Gary Bateman
Date: 8/1/2015 9:27:00 AM

Olive, Congrats too on your Win!! Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/31/2015 10:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Gary.. =') I'm glad you like it but more you adding it to your fave.. =')~Olive Eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/31/2015 9:27:00 PM

Hugs Kim, thanks much!! I just rite this one.. =')

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/31/2015 10:33:00 AM

So lovely, Olive. You created a new song. Can it be sang in the melody which inspired you? It must be...there's a real beat to it. Best wishes in the contest, Olive. hugs!

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/31/2015 9:52:00 AM

people think they know Love but they never get deep....Love is a struggle through which we will weep....sometimes in joy, sometimes in pain....it all stems from the heart so its hard to complain....;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/31/2015 8:34:00 PM

Well, I thought love should not only stem from the heart but along it the brain must also work on.... Feelings sometimes deceives.. when we are immersed and caught in the web of feelings alone sometimes our thinking is affected... but love after all is a risk, a gamble so hence one should be ready to win or lose...