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MELANCHOLIC GAZE



Awakened from a mid-sleep tingle of the wind ,your absent body drifts gently like a formless cloud into night’s minutes: a holy air which smells of musk, weaving through a quiet stillness of tender love’s fervor. Just there, graced calm lingers mildly in our own space: this yearning embrace of your as foggy arms cuddles my entire spirit… and this gentle evening turns warm, remembering your life has reached its final time: the pain melts like colored mist as loops of distance widens, your beautiful shadow slowly, slowly evaporating… I return to this one and only dream-like visit with a question and melancholic gaze… “ Dad, why did you have to leave us so suddenly?” Nayda Ivette Negron’s Melancholy Contest 9/26/2016 -------- * My Dad passed on alone in his death bed; we were all requested to go home for a while after spending hours in the ICU of a military hospital.

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  1. Date: 9/27/2016 1:04:00 AM

    Well done great poem x
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 11:59:00 PM

    Beauty even in such tragic moments. May your father rest in peace.
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 10:39:00 PM

    Ah, I am so sorry to hear of your dad's passing, my deep condolences dearest friend, xxx
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 6:25:00 PM

    nette, I'm so sorry you lost your Father. A gallant and heroic man indeed and I wish I could have known him. Our thoughts are with you and your family. Glad you enjoyed the Bacon, Biscuit, Bean write - best to you - bob
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 3:57:00 PM

    Thanks for posting this gem my friend. Good luck in the contest...........A.M.
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 1:57:00 PM

    This is really sad... I watched my father die over 5 days... I had never cried since a child and did not stop for 5 days.. have not shed a tear since he passed away... this was an emotional write..
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 1:18:00 PM

    I watched my grandfather pass over. I can relate to everything you have wrote and you wrote it with love. Blessings Carl
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 11:51:00 AM

    I can relate too Nette we were called to get to the hospice but got there 15 minutes too late - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 11:13:00 AM

    at least you were there and close...mom passed and I was so far away ... took a while for me to get over that depression... such a beautiful and touching write :)
  1. Date: 9/26/2016 10:52:00 AM

    This brings back memories of my dad's passing Nette. So bittersweet! I can easily relate. beautifully penned!

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