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HAUNTED




Tiptoeing inside an entrance that held 
closed mysteries of a slain clan,
the draped photographs yielded not 
to candelabras of a shadowed night.
I ran up the steps while timbre of my heels
echoed like a thunder roll... the moon shook
and  trees quivered like ghouls;
the windows banged!

And the door reeked of odor around a wall,
sipping the marrow of rancid air and hindering
my exit into yet another  darker room,
squeaking heavily beside my falling knees.

Interior bleakness brought more freeze
as the tendrils of cobwebs plucked red moulds
dripping like spurts of blood...
I turned to leave: my skirt rushing away
from the ancient house and its macabre view.

While glancing at the ruined structure 
from a fading distance, tall grasses 
seemed to blink: my disheveled hair
running with rakes of forbidden clouds
meshed by leaves as I pant, dash, escape

into the thick fog without a candle in the mist.
 



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  1. Date: 9/15/2014 8:57:00 PM

    Ha! This is so good Nette.. Kind of gives me the creeps!
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 3:45:00 PM

    oh I feel chilled reading this Nette - an awesome write:-) hugs Jan xxx
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 12:48:00 PM

    All the elements of classic suspense woven together. Impressive work, Words! Perfect ending, Nette, hauntingly creepy.
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 12:08:00 PM

    This poem really shows your skill. I am suddenly on edge. :) Have a great day and God bless!
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 11:51:00 AM

    - Chilling reading ..... you need a hand to hold, dear Nette ! - Enjoy reading ....... exciting - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 11:06:00 AM

    O Creepy feel..... Spine chilling imagery. Vivid description spooky....
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 10:47:00 AM

    Heart-pumping scenes here which make my jaw drop. Terrific poem, Nette, and glad to see I got your nod in the florette contest. Thank you!
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 10:10:00 AM

    Very scary write, nette, giving thrills while reading. Is it for a contest?
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 6:31:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this one today..It reads like a very scary place..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visits ..Sara
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 9:51:00 PM

    Excellent!!!!
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 9:34:00 PM

    Freakingly excellent. I'm beginning to like how you play with this genre. Wow, Nette.
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 8:39:00 PM

    I could feel your fright as I read. That is magic in the reading my friend!!! Bravo!!!!!

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