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NYMPHS ON MIDDAY PROTEST Crystal nymphs frolic at day-spring Unto puffs, upon hush of blossom breast sliding and gliding like dangling strings Chilling the fever of midday protest soft-sweet rest as all sleeps at their nest ___________________________________________________ Sponsor Sara Kendrick Contest Name Five Lines/ Metaphors And Simile ++Placed 1st++ O.E. Guillermo 9:20 pm, June 22, 2015

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Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/2/2015 8:47:00 PM

Congratulations on a fine win Olive. Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2015 12:26:00 AM

Thank you Verlena...

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/1/2015 9:47:00 PM

Dear Olive, congrats on this top of the line win! Beautiful! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2015 12:18:00 AM

Thank you Pandita..

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2015 10:50:00 PM

Olive, Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/6/2015 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Skat.. hugs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2015 8:13:00 AM

I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Congrats on your win …Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 3:48:00 AM

thank you Sara.. =)! God bless..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 10:23:00 PM

Congratulations on this gem, Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 3:01:00 AM

thanks much Andie.. =)!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/29/2015 6:45:00 PM

Olive, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thank you Eve... =) COngratz too.. =)

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/26/2015 1:18:00 AM

Lovely metaphors in this quintain, Olive. Yes, pinay!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/30/2015 10:37:00 PM

Thanks much Kim.. :D! Appear!!! :D!

James Fraser

Date: 6/25/2015 2:18:00 PM

A little Gem by the little One, nice Quintain Olive. Hope your free to write a collab soon, hugs//James xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/30/2015 8:39:00 AM

:D!! Yes let's do soon James.. Tell me the theme.. And let me get my muse working and digesting.. :P! thanks much ..

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/24/2015 4:31:00 AM

Hello Olive!! This Quintain is very beautiful indeed. I really like your choice of "Crystal Nymphs" for this poem. The imagery and the "ababb" rhyming sequence are perfect!! A "7" and I will FAV this since I really like nymphs, fairies, and leprechauns!! Best Always, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/30/2015 8:30:00 AM

HI Gary thank you for your kind generous comments..=) dewdrops fascinate me and so are fairies.. they remind me of youth and freshness... =)~ Olive Eloisa

Paul Callus

Date: 6/23/2015 9:13:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi:) You might not have been writing much lately, but you have lost none of your poetic touch! Five delightful lines! gl in contest. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/30/2015 8:27:00 AM

Ho Paul thank you for reading and leaving a comment.. =) these just the times I am having much more time... I got so many thoughts and so i just type them in and they are waiting to be finished.. :D! hugs back!