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- a Most Beautiful Symphony of Love -

Rhythmic tones form a most beautiful symphony of love A shining star as nature's splendor reflects Heaven’s light It’s my destiny to learn a passion and purpose to use now Even for a moment, I would not change for you’re my love And love is a blessing, an eternal gift that keeps on giving Take your wish, shattered dreams—leave this world behind And we shall seek and find a togetherness with lullabies pure For each new emotion my heart shall always find you dearest Sending warm golden stirring echoes dancing into your dreams Softly lips whispering so gently in the air as a loving tune sings As the warm sun lights up our footsteps treading on golden sands Perfect maiden you’re the siren ringing bells for midnight chimes True precious bride inside the heart you have keys to all the doors Walk with me hand in hand as the soul breathes and butterflies sigh Ocean waves crash—kissing salt of the earth as windows flutter free Safely sitting on the throne as the crown graces a fair maiden queen Our special music reflects the precious nature of our love dearest As we share enchanted moments with each other so real and pure When I take your hand in mine, I feel the magic warmth of passion When I gaze into your eyes, I sense the depth of our love forever The delight I share with you dear one defies all human description And so my love—enjoy the oneness we share as two souls together As we bask in God’s own heavenly light and music in His Universe Our hearts unite as one in forming a most beautiful symphony of love Anne-Lise Andresen, Liam McDaid, and Gary Bateman © A Collaborated Poem – June 22, 2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 7/8/2015 5:40:00 AM
Truly wonderful serenade, I could feel your heart pumping with words of love so beautifully written, thanks for the read. cheers Kev
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/8/2015 6:13:00 AM
- I'm glad you enjoy it, Kevin :) - thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 12:24:00 PM
An excellent collab my lovely lovely friend on rhythmic silent orchestral tones of the natural hearts from the beautiful symphony of love. Loved always,bl
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:30:00 PM
- I'm glad you enjoy it, dear friend Bl - thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/3/2015 3:56:00 AM
Anne Lise, I will not elaborate it much but I'lll just fave this for it touched me!~Olive Eloisa =)!
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Date: 7/3/2015 5:14:00 AM
- Gary, Liam and me really appreciate your "fav." - I thank you, dear Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/28/2015 9:47:00 AM
I love this a lot! Hugging this great masterpiece tightly. Thank you so much to the three of you my very dear friend, Anne Lise! I extremely love it! Have a great weekend t you all! Thank you, thank you, thank you. love lots and many hugs, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 11:49:00 AM
- Dear Leonora, I'm glad you enjoy it :) - I thank you for the nice visit and comment, really a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/24/2015 7:31:00 PM
Thanks for penning this beautiful, original love poem! Uplifted me--wonderful expression!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/25/2015 4:34:00 AM
- Thomas, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :
Date: 6/24/2015 9:34:00 AM
Anne- Lise, this is a beautiful sight to see this morning. You all work fantastic together! Excellent job. 7:)Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/25/2015 4:32:00 AM
- Alexis, I'm glad you enjoy it - thanks for the visit a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/23/2015 12:56:00 PM
still greeat on second reading, anne.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2015 1:57:00 PM
- Thank you for the second time reading, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/23/2015 8:59:00 AM
A symphonic trilogy of romantic lines. The fair queen bathes in the mellow love that surrounds her. Well done all three of you! A delight to read. #7 // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2015 11:27:00 AM
- Paul, I'm glad you enjoy it - thanks for the visit a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/23/2015 7:25:00 AM
Beautiful Anne, You give me good reason to stay into poetry. Thank you for your lovely inspiration. GOD BLESS.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2015 8:03:00 AM
- It is a pleasure to inspire and encourage, thank you for the beautiful words Milton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/23/2015 2:50:00 AM
So beautiful and lovely........A.M.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2015 2:58:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 9:29:00 PM
What a wonderful collaboration!
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Date: 6/23/2015 2:57:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 5:39:00 PM
Anne-Lise, this is outstanding, a wonderful 7, you all did beautiful writing for this seamless write and thanks for visiting my poem, three grey cats
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Date: 6/23/2015 2:56:00 AM
- I'm glad you enjoy it - thanks for the visit a 7 and comments, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 2:24:00 PM
Let the music keep playing, Beautiful, Thank you Anne-lise for your kind comments, I hold my faith tight,
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:38:00 PM
- Diane, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :
Date: 6/22/2015 1:23:00 PM
all encompassing beauty of love at its best flowing decotion, dear anne.. a fine trio's work.. take a bow!.. have a great monday!.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 1:51:00 PM
- Three hearts share many beautiful emotions - Thanks for visiting and comments, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 1:23:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise Liam n' Gary!Another very beautiful and captivating love poem filled with very wonderful hopes and dreams penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.Great imagery!A very magical most beautiful collaboration between the three of you.I just love it.Just awesome!A very sweet romantic beautiful piece to keep very close to my heart.smiling.A 7+++to each.A fav.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A real gem!I enjoyed it a lot.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 6/22/2015 1:48:00 PM
- When a new poem "being born" .... it's always exciting to view the result - I'm glad you enjoy it - thanks for the visit a 7 and comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 7:07:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise Dear One!! I really enjoyed our three-way collaboration on creating and writing this most wonderful poem (between you, Liam, and me). What can I say?? This free verse write delivers a most hopeful message about the power and hope of love between two people and the symphony created when their hearts unite. What a great message -- but I think I'm a little biased too!! (HA! HA!) And thanks too for Kim, Darlene, Shane, our "Leprechaun" colleague: "Liam"!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 1:42:00 PM
- Always a pleasure to work with you, Gary my dear friend :) - Thank you for this beautiful poem :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 6:09:00 AM
Indeed, love is a blessing, as this poem is, my dear friends. Congratulations, once again on this wonderful collab. A 7 and a fav. Hugs! Kim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 6:32:00 AM
- I thank you for the nice visit + fav. on our last co- write, really a pleasure and honor dear friend Kim! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 6:07:00 AM
anne lise this piece just dances beautiful in my mind like a gentle waltz you pen shone golden as did gary's thank you dearest friends such a pleasure writing with you both wishing you both a magical week filled with sunshine smiles also thank you darlene and shane for the heartfelt beautiful comments v
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 6:17:00 AM
- My dear friend and accomplished co-worker, Liam :) - Thank you for this beautiful poem, an honor to be part of "this glowing red rubin" - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 4:58:00 AM
A moving love poem. I enjoyed it. ~~~Darlene
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Date: 6/22/2015 6:18:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2015 3:32:00 AM
Anne-Lise this is a truly beautiful write, it is so soft, so gentle. I feel every word and it makes me think of what true love really means. You and your collaboraters have created a masterpiece. I shall give this poem pride of place in my favourites. Magnificent. love Shane xxx
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:41:00 AM
- It is a pleasure to share with you Shane :) - A poem that I really am proud of - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - And especially thank you for "fav." it - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)

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