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Stalking Death

I rummaged through the ancient ruins and scoured the carnage of our times; I searched the scorching expanse of the arid deserts, I peeked into the crevices of the broken hearts, and probed the dark realm of the deranged minds; I looked in the dead ashes of the funeral pyre, I ransacked every nook and cranny of the cemeteries And forayed into the desolate womb of the barren woman -- But did not find death! I then looked at the first flush of spring-- The blossoming flowers, The fluttering butterflies The humming bees, The rising robust sun; And found the hand of death. I found death in the unyielding faith of the trusting hearts, In the ardent prayers of the desperate souls, And in the unbridled passion of the heart; Even in birth and in the sprouting seed I found the omnipresence of death. yeah, I found death in life! ~'Death Shadow' contest by Justin Bordner

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Date: 7/7/2015 1:41:00 PM
What a righteous poem of transcendence, without the beauty of life death means naught! jill
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Date: 1/5/2015 3:25:00 AM
Lovely poem, beautifully written, congrats.
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:44:00 PM
WELL DESETVED WIN!!! congratulations!!! a fav!
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:06:00 PM
ABDUL, congratulations ON YOUR TOP WIN. LUV LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2014 7:53:00 AM
Undoubtedly a super-poetry on death. Well deserved win Abdul. Love-rajat
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Date: 12/25/2014 4:47:00 PM
Excellent write congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 12/25/2014 4:47:00 PM
Happy Holidays to you and yours!
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Date: 12/25/2014 7:54:00 AM
Brilliant piece, I am impressed. Congratulations and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/25/2014 6:08:00 AM
We are born to die and afterwards the judgment..Enjoyed your winning work..Way to go..It is very expressive and descriptive..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/24/2014 10:57:00 AM
Outstanding !! Congratulations on an amazing, and gripping poem!
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:39:00 AM
Abdul, congratulations on your wonderful win in this contest. The twist mid-way in your poem was stunning with the realization that there truly is so much death in life. 7+ Fav, Sandra
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/24/2014 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/24/2014 8:28:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/24/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, if I 'May'?!
Date: 12/24/2014 2:14:00 AM
many congrats on your win :-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:30:00 AM
Very creative with interesting thoughts on death, Abdul
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