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Take The Bait

Falling into a cavern,
My patterns hold me down,
Drowning in the currents,
I'm taken from my consent,
Deeper and deeper I went,
Finding comfort in torment,
Learning to implement the tools,
Losing my way over and over,
Choosing to grow older,
My heart grows colder,
Another boulder to move,
Proving i move mountains,
A fountain of possibilities,
Springs up before me,
Seeing another way home,
Roaming the dark corridors,
Hidden within my core,
Revealing many more,
Unexplored patterns inside,
Slipping on pride,
I slide into another experience,
The interference has me shaking,
I'm making hasty decisions,
My vision over ridden by fear,
I peer passed my present,
Resenting what could've been,
If I hadn't fallen again,
In the dark I sit and wait,
For my patterns to take the bait.

Lindo

Oscar was from Argentina,
Buenos Aires city:
his “go to” word was “lindo, lindo”:
Spanish word for ‘pretty’.

‘Lindo’ if you use big words,
‘lindo’ if you cuss:
´lindo’ is the garden gate,
‘lindo’ is the bus.

Oscar went to buy a pet,
to keep him company:
he walked into the poodle shop –
“how much for a bee?”

“One moment please. We don’t sell bees.”
The clerk heard Oscar speaking.
Perhaps his English needs some help
to get the pet he’s seeking.

“Chihuahuas, dachshunds, corgis too:
simply place an order:
we’ll get a husky, if you want:
we’ve friends across the border.”

But Oscar didn’t take the bait.
He didn’t want a puppy,
or marmoset or guinea-pig,
or parakeet or guppy.

“I’ve seen the bee that’s just for me:
he’s lindo, lindo, lindo:
here’s my money – get it done –
he’s right there, in the window!”

Insomniac Island

This entropy, it's endless.
I'm captive in your void of sleep.
My eyes are strung open,
My hands clung to you
But I'm drifting off,
I'm drifting far away,
Away from here, and as hard as I grasp onto you,
I know I won't be back.

Every time it happens.
I can't think straight,
I am so far off,
And if I can't be me,
I can't even stand to be you.
Dormant. Defenceless.
So I hold you by your neck and scream, but
It won't come through.
It never comes through.
And how could it if I can't freaking move?
And how could it if you never wanted a defence

While I'm thrashing and crying
And my throat is burning
With all the hatred,
For every time this happens,
For every night you betray me.
Repeating.
You always take the bait.
We always lay dead in the trap.

And you're leaving me.
You're bleeding out.
Like that, gone for good, without a last chance to bid farewell.
And I can't help but think that,
I'll either live without you
Or die without you
And I can never think what's worse.
So if you can't even see this...
If I can't just breathe with this...
If I don't just kill myself first...


Premium Member It's Too Easy To Hate

It’s too easy to hate 
It’s going through the motions to tolerate 
Screw tolerance 
Get off your ass and communicate 
Won’t agree on everything 
We were stronger when we chose to relate
When did we fall prey to fools and take the bait?
It’s too easy to hate

Premium Member Close to the Sun

As Earth turns
And Sun burns
Humans in our infinite hubris
Carry on the great tradition of Icarus
Fly fly fly
Right to the edge
Saber rattling as we go
Daring the other
To take the bait
Take to the air
And fly fly fly
Ever closer to the sun

(8/6/24)

Premium Member accidentally teaching by example

One person cannot make a difference the naysayer argues.
But I do not take the bait, for I have learned.
Naysayers do not have a stopping point.

I could prove it to him.
If he followed me to any function.
Where a dynamo walked in.

For dynamos change the attitude and altitude of the room instantly.
I have seen this happen over and over.
I do not care enough to teach him.

I have so little time.
I jump into a room
And let a party begin

Uplifting people
The naysayer has followed me.
He gives me a hate look.
I guess now he knows.


Where The Problem Lies

I should never have loved in inequality.
I should never have allowed 
my heart to take the bait
of loving someone as beautiful as you.

But damn it, love is blind!
I suppose it’s by design
for, had I to do it all over again
I must admit 
I would love you
all over again
knowing…
that you can’t be loved.

Premium Member Cancel Culture

When Cancel Culture comes to town
What more is there to do?
Do you fight, or just give in?
It’s always up to you.

But if we bow before the woke
Our heads will surely roll
As they demand their pound of flesh
And so collect the toll.

And if we rise and take the bait
We’ll lose again as well
It’s just the way the game is rigged
As history does tell.

So fare thee well I say to you
Who cancel all in fear,
While I retreat into the hills
And keep my powder near.

For one day soon as dawn does come
You’ll wake up with a start
To realize all you did and said 
Was nothing but a fart.

(8/31/22, originally published in my 6th book, OUT OF TIME OUT OF MIND, 2022)

Premium Member Gone Fishing

I love to go fishing,
And I love to date.
I was just wishing,
You would take the bait.

Out on a clear lake,
We were feeling fine.
But my big mistake,
I used an old line.

Was the same line heard,
More than once before.
With her final word,
We don't fish no more.

Now that I look back,
Don't know what to say.
She wouldn't cut me slack,
The one that got away.

Premium Member Avoiding Peer Pressure

blazing hot like cayenne pepper,
especially in adolescent years,
malleable youths
bend and capitulate
to peer pressure;
 grown folks take the bait, too.
it could be a simple
"try this like the rest of us cool kids!"
or just an effortless nudge of
"you're missing out!"
to descend
an impressionable youngster

down
          down
                     down

the rabbit hole 
of insidious seduction.
the benefits of peer pressure are there,
though few and far between.
It's challenging for a lone hold-out
to resist the temptation 
of wading in deep into 
the muddy waters of coercion
when all his "cool kids" buddies
have crossed over 
to the dark side.
no matter your relationship
with anyone forcing you to try 
or do anything that goes against 
your belief system,
your moral code, say no
if you feel even a tad uncomfortable!
refuse to go down
the primrose path of uncertainty.
don't allow yourself to be
handcuffed, or guilt-tripped
into walking down the road to regret.
It's best to abandon ship, 
or better yet, don't board
if any proposition feels false.



Date written: 11/20/2022

In Life Do Raise Your Word

The flame ignites and burns
and for life the breath yearns
All the words cease to leak
what would deflate the mystique

The soul would seek sight
powers remain finite
Life would ever teach 
the core of truths to reach

The path to take fits a choice
though against an inner voice
Mind and heart deeply descend 
from ashes of pain wisely ascend

So much in Life we learn
the merit built we earn
Let the soul shine in beauty
as a bright crystal ruby

An admired butterfly
on wings of Hope would fly 
Faith the root of content
leave no room for lament

Blessings take not for granted
gratitude for what is handed
Faith would quieten the pain
dwelling on what gone is vain

If caught by the light of flame
Would you be the one to blame
Or just the call of fate
Led you to take the bait

In Life do raise your word
and keep the flame in your world
Think not of any end
In now have a carving hand

May 3rd, 2022

So-Called Aid

Whenever a country in poverty 
but rich in natural resources
is in dire strait 
whatever is done by wealthy countries 
is only for it to take the bait

Premium Member Triolet

Thought tryst in lines just eight
Twirling repeat lines score
Tempts us to take the bait
Till muse tears flow no more
Teasing rhymes, easy gait
Tailored message encore
Tempest wild, touch sedate

19-January-2022
Pleiades in rhyme

7 lines @ 6 syllables each 
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Premium Member Soul View

‘Show me God’, said the atheist
‘Here, in the now’, he did insist
‘Else admit, randomness of fate’
Taking the gauntlet, here’s the gist

Desires entice, we take the bait
It’s a rat race, so who’ll wait
Bemused, we ask not, who we are
Far cry it seems, is heaven’s gate

Looking back at life, lived so far
With fears and desires, we did spar
Joy and suffering, both fleeting
Permanent joy, too high a bar

We see form debilitating
Life fleeting and time’s a wasting
So resting thought, enter silence
Exhausted of thus oscillating 

Arousing inner sentience
Rekindling innate innocence 
We’re charged with bliss throbs in fullness 
Revealing soul’s luminescence 

One with oneness, in blissfulness 
In continuum of stillness 
Ego shorn, we become twice born
Transmuted is our awareness

Hark in our heart, the soundless horn
God in-dwells form that we adorn
God alone is, love His essence 
Truth’s tong, plucks out ignorance thorn

17-November-2021

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Premium Member Waking Up From the Dream

Myriad objects manifest in dreams
We know not the source, that makes them so stream
If all one, why do we feel separate
Clear light dawns, when we cease to take the bait
Then Gods glow gleams, spiritual heart beams

22-July-2021

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