Unseeking Seeker Poet Pleiades

Notes About The Poem

Triolet

Thought tryst in lines just eight
Twirling repeat lines score
Tempts us to take the bait
Till muse tears flow no more
Teasing rhymes, easy gait
Tailored message encore
Tempest wild, touch sedate

19-January-2022
Pleiades in rhyme

7 lines @ 6 syllables each 
PS syllable counter

Write About a Form Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 1:53 PM Congratulations on your win. A fun write/picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................. Unseeking Seeker February 25, 2022 at 6:21 PM Thank you, dear Paula!

Christuraj Alex February 20, 2022 at 3:44 AM Great description on Triolet. Congratulations! Unseeking Seeker February 20, 2022 at 5:02 AM So happy you like it, Chris!

Anna Marie Kaianah February 19, 2022 at 9:43 PM Wonderful write. Congrats on your win! ~Anna Unseeking Seeker February 19, 2022 at 10:13 PM Thank you, Anna!

Janice Canerdy February 19, 2022 at 5:15 PM So descriptive, Seeker. CONGRATS! Janice Unseeking Seeker February 19, 2022 at 8:57 PM Thank you, Janice!

Connie Marcum Wong February 19, 2022 at 5:11 PM Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win! Blessings xxoo Unseeking Seeker February 19, 2022 at 8:56 PM Thanks Connie!

Joseph May February 19, 2022 at 3:43 PM Veruy nicely done, Congrats on your win Unseeking Seeker February 19, 2022 at 8:56 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Paulette Calasibetta January 19, 2022 at 4:00 PM Fabulous! A very hard form to express in so few words! Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette Unseeking Seeker January 19, 2022 at 5:47 PM Thanks Paulette! I wanted to attempt something other than merely defining the form, with a touch of alliteration and rhyme sequence to boot