Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Rhyme

In Life Do Raise Your Word

The flame ignites and burns
and for life the breath yearns
All the words cease to leak
what would deflate the mystique

The soul would seek sight
powers remain finite
Life would ever teach 
the core of truths to reach

The path to take fits a choice
though against an inner voice
Mind and heart deeply descend 
from ashes of pain wisely ascend

So much in Life we learn
the merit built we earn
Let the soul shine in beauty
as a bright crystal ruby

An admired butterfly
on wings of Hope would fly 
Faith the root of content
leave no room for lament

Blessings take not for granted
gratitude for what is handed
Faith would quieten the pain
dwelling on what gone is vain

If caught by the light of flame
Would you be the one to blame
Or just the call of fate
Led you to take the bait

In Life do raise your word
and keep the flame in your world
Think not of any end
In now have a carving hand

May 3rd, 2022

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Bill Baker September 14, 2023 at 4:15 PM Beautiful poetry, Besma, your flame burns brightly and ignites many other flames to light the unknown. Your words of wisdom touch us and your love flows on through us to others as you inspire our poetic offerings. I'm blessed to have met you and now be a part of a friendship of spirits. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Robert Lindley September 5, 2022 at 8:14 PM In the path , ahead awaits the bounty of life, the flames of love, the passion to thrive and truly live! Truly a jewel and powerful message delivered superbly my dear friend! A grat pleasure to read and as well be in awe of. A fav.. God bless... Besma Riabi Dziri September 16, 2022 at 12:03 PM Your graceful presence and your wonderful and kind words are highly appreciated and cherished.. thank you so much for such an honour, Robert.. God bless you. My deepest regards.

Christuraj Alex August 20, 2022 at 4:33 AM What a great thought! A very powerful message to the world. In fact, I was missing your poems. Kindly post many. Thanking you in anticipation. Besma Riabi Dziri August 20, 2022 at 4:48 AM You are always so kind to my humble soul and so supportive to my humble poetry, Christuraj.. I'm so grateful to you for your appreciative feedback.. I'm so much pleased you like and enjoy reading my words.. an honour deeply cherishes.. Looking forward to reading you.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Harry Horsman August 18, 2022 at 5:46 PM Oh the message so powerful, Besma, the poetry so beautiful. So glad your back...Hope you are well. Harry Besma Riabi Dziri August 20, 2022 at 4:43 AM Such flow of care, kindness and Love a power that stirs my humble soul and pen to meet so beautiful souls and great poets I always look up to.. Truly deeply humbled and grateful to you, Harry for such a heart touching compliment and a so rewarding feedback! How can I meet such beauty and humility! Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart. My deepest regards and blessings.

Mystic Rose Rose August 18, 2022 at 10:44 AM and keep the flame in your world. I BELIEVE YOUR FLAME IS A BONFIRE DEAR FRIEND, how precious your mind is, how luck I am to read your works, thank you :) Besma Riabi Dziri August 20, 2022 at 4:34 AM And how beautiful you are and how wonderful are your words dear Rose! So much obliged to you for the ripples of joy you have flowed into my heart! The honour and great delight are all mine! Thank you so much! Love and hugs. My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet August 14, 2022 at 12:38 PM Besma, you have been greatly missed, and your return is both a relief and a source of tremendous comfort. I pray that life is treating you and your loved ones well. Your poetry is insightful and inspiring, and the words you've selected are replete with useful guidance. Everything you utter resounds with the sophistication of your argument. Dear Besma, this poem shows a lot of consideration. Besma Riabi Dziri August 17, 2022 at 9:49 AM How can I respond to such kindness, beauty and humility! Reading your so touching words and sincere welcome has filled my soul with an immense delight and deep gratitude.. Thank you so much Lassad for your great support and gift.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Susan Lawrence August 9, 2022 at 5:09 PM Poignant and soulful with so many wonderful passages of wisdom dear Besma . So happy to see you back again . A gift as always . Hugs and blessings, Susan :) Besma Riabi Dziri August 17, 2022 at 9:42 AM And so thrilled I am to see you and read your so caring and generous words dearest friend Susan! So much obliged to you for reaching out for me and pouring your true feelings and deep joy into my soul.. thank you so much for your precious presence and reliving kindness.. Love and hugs. My deepest regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham August 7, 2022 at 11:31 AM A very thought provoking verse Besma, nice to see you back, I hope you are keeping well. Tom Besma Riabi Dziri August 17, 2022 at 9:36 AM Always an immense delight and honour to be here on PS receiving so kind and rewarding feedback and encouragement to my humble poetry.. thank you heaps Tom for the honour and joy of your visit.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit August 7, 2022 at 8:25 AM Insightful and inspirational words dwelling in wisdom, Besma. Your graceful message resonates in every line. A thoughtful write my friend. Besma Riabi Dziri August 17, 2022 at 9:34 AM So much pleased by your wonderful feedback and deeply humbled by your words of praise and appreciation dear Vijay.. thank you so much for always being here to read and support my humble words.. My deepest regards and blessings.