Surely Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Surely this is heaven

I gaze up at night.
A million stars look back at me.
I am profoundly at peace.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Premium Member Surely you have heard of a Halloween Duck

I have never heard of such a thing I told my brother.
Don’t tease her any more warned my sainted mother.
Dad jumped on her side and said, oh yes Halloween ducks do exist.
This did not surprise me, he is always the side of my little sis.

Where is this Halloween duck? I asked. Will I find him on the pond?
The liars looked at each other and nodded. They have a total bond.
I ran down there and looked over at something weird looking at me.
It was a Halloween duck, swimming wild and free.

Premium Member Surely Can't Be My Mum

There I was enjoying life
in my mid-20s, job was good
loving my girlfriend now engaged
parents happy, puts me in good mood

Learning much about God's love
so I could put my trust in Him
reading the Bible always every day
feel God's joy up to the brim

Then, out of the blue, life changed
my dear Mum, whom I loved so dear
took a turn seemingly for the worse
her heart felt pain, now I'm in fear

I just thought, 'anything, but not this'
my Mum was taken to the hospital
the next 24 hours would be crucial
think now her life ebbs away little by little

At work next day came the sad news
my dear Mum has now passed away
words hard to find, surely can't be my Mum
but reality set in, tongue felt like clay

Well, we are all mortal
in reality, we are just here on loan
so my Mum has now gone
she adopted me as her own


Premium Member Surely this is the same shadow

My shadow was getting tired of same-oh, same-oh
Don’t you have any other ambitions? Dreams? Hobbies?
I listened with half an ear, and no mind, not caring really.
I wanted to do what I wanted to do.

By noon that persistent voice was getting snarly and gnarly.
I was sick of hearing her; and she was sick of me.
Was she still following me around? I turned and saw her on the walk.
Tried to outrun her, and she laughed.

She followed me uphill into my garden.
We should prune that bush, she said, in a persnickety way.
Since when had she turned into my mother?
I was getting worn out by her demands.

Has she always been this needy? Or have I never stopped to hear her?
I marvel that she is bothering me for the first time now.
Surely this is the same shadow I have always worn.
Right?

One Day You Will Surely Live Reality

One day, you will surely live reality;
Wake up to the glimpse of actuality-
Cool, staring at the blessings... 
Worries made up for dressings*
You always dream about in anxiety!

Premium Member Anne Surely

As a Smith and Wesson:
Weaponry;
Corralled and shooting out,
Every word to be;

She’s endowed,
With a round butt, and balcony;
So, harkens to hotness: 
Her Summer eave;

Her beauty, to me, existentially,
Is like nature,
Or a green gable,
Canopy –


Ghosts Surely Sing

Ghosts do sing too—
only their mouths
open too wide,
as if no commissure binds them,
like gates unlatched by silence.

They sing at the wake of each night,
while dreaming birds forget the sky;
when moonlight burns its brightest,
and the awoken owls can only howl.

Though they sing in graves of clay,
their melodies rise beyond the day;
they are melodious on heaven’s rim,
then blend with silence when the wind rolls on wheels.

Their songs are celestial fire—
angels their ecclesiastics, their choirmasters.

The notes are sonorous,
yet only danced to by
the flapping of their wings—
not by wriggling waists
nor kicking limbs;
for their legs no longer walk but float,
and motion keeps no memory—
a breath dissolved in thin air.

Their song—once mortal, once mundane—
now a chorus divinely condoned;
for they were composed
and filled with praise for the King of Glory—
the One who holds the crown alone,
who shares His glory with no one.

Premium Member A Story You'll Surely Adore


      ~ A Story You'll Surely Adore ~ 
              ('Suicide's a Pain')

     As I was about to enter the store
       I was smacked by a malfunctioning door
     Without so much as the slightest warning 
       or a perfunctory good morning 
     
     Astonished more than stunned
        I took off at a brisk run
     to inform the manager-on-duty
        of the door that had greeted me so rudely… 

     When I’d finished my story, to my utter surprise
        the manager muttered: “Lies, lies, nothing but lies”
      My jaw dropped and I exclaimed, “Why? Why? Why?”
        the manager replied, “We’ve an epidemic of spies”

     “Spies from our competitors,” he continued
         “that’s why we smacked you upside your head”
       In disbelief and rage, I said, “Well, I never” –
         pivoted right back into that door ~
                                      and keeled over dead

Premium Member Surely she was not the new boss

surely, she was not the new boss
our heads swiveled almost in unison
this woman was way too polished for this place
chic in her sophisticated oversized green hat with pink polka dots

Who wore something like that in the sixties?
Her suit was a combination of stripes and dots.
Also a big no no in the sixties.
a BIG no No.

Oh, my gosh, was she smoking a CIGAR?
Cigars are for men.
I turned my head to look at my friend.
Her mouth was hanging open like mine.

Is that a diamond earring? I wondered.
And on only one ear!
Who is this fabulous creature?
I could not wait to find out!

Surely strength?

No strength is so sure
Yet fleeting, as noble men
Who, cloaked in valor 

Do the things righteous 
Without anyone watching
Unseen by the crowds

Premium Member YOU WHOM I SURELY LOVE -

YOU WHOM I SURELY LOVE 

Colors are the parade
Different shades, of gray
Coal silken blacken wool
Hair that glistens in the moon
Such is as does
You whom I surely love

Moisten eyes tears you shed
Lofty pearls shines in crimson dark
Such a melody salvage lark
My heart and soul bled
Such is as does
You whom I surely love

Purposeful the façade
Music that’s made
I sing to you
Jubilee, I swoon
Can’t hear for the shouts
Bleeding of mine ears
All is abundantly now clear

Colors are the parade
Different shades, of gray
Coal silken blacken wool
Hair that glistens in the moon
Such is as does
It’s you whom I surely love

2/19/25
Written words & arranged music  by James Edward Lee Sr. 2025©

Premium Member I SURELY YOU YOU ARE-

I surely Love you are
My mind is combine so bliss
So just visions viewed in your chest
O’ how we caress hearts touching
Beating, lungs inhaling and exhaling
Love
~
Heartbeats explicit
Surely smoothing Illicit 
Holy purest kisses
O’ how we caress hearts touching
Love
I surely Love you are




12/18/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©

Love Slowly But Surely

Is being fit for each other is love? 
Love as far as I see 
Is gradual and lackadaisical
It is accumulated day by day
It grows slowly but surely
It's not a rapid move
But a slow process 
I guess I can't completely define it
Before I look back at the end of my life.

Premium Member HER I ATUNE I LISTEN SURELY-

She speaks to me bout her past and problem
Attentively I listen arrantly division ears and heart
My body coherent ever reverence numb
She calls to me beloved daughter of God seed plot

Humans come forth from heaven through mothers

Attentively I listen arrantly division ears and heart
Humans come forth from heaven through mothers
She calls to me beloved daughter of God seed plot
My body coherent ever reverence numb

Humans come forth from heaven through mothers
My body coherent ever reverence numb
Humans come forth from heaven through mothers
She speaks to me bout her past and problem



6/14/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©

Premium Member HE SURELY CARES-

God my Lord cares 
He awakens us every new day dawn

My Lord my God cares 
My Father, my guide always by my side
This is every day got 
He got ne always 
Always here ever present 
Even in my slumber 
As I Lay horizontal 
He alive in me 
In Him I'm free
He's Within Me

God my Lord cares 
He awakens us every new day dawn
God my Lord cares 
He awakens us every new day dawn
God my Lord cares 
He awakens us every new day dawn
Hallelujah Hallelujah 
My God is with me always


6/13/24
Written words & arranged music by James Edward Lee Sr 2924

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