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Surely this is heaven

I gaze up at night.
A million stars look back at me.
I am profoundly at peace.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 4:46 PM
I feel the same way when I gaze skyward at night.
Gauthier Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 2:59 AM
The universe is amazing ~
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 3:20 PM
Something about those stars!
Gauthier Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 4:23 PM
I think we feel a deep primal call from them ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 2:49 PM
oh what tranquility. Nicely penned
Gauthier Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 4:22 PM
Thanks, Sara ~ much appreciated
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