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Premium Member A Few Lines: Offered to Thay of Plum Village

By Phan Tan Hai

Writing a few lines of calligraphy,
praising the Blessed One—
the ink spreads like tears,
soaking gratitude deep into the soul.

Writing a few lines of calligraphy,
an offering to Thay of Plum Village;
lifting my head, I hear a crane’s cry
calling someone’s name across the sky.

From these few lines of calligraphy,
the strokes turn into a forest of flowers,
fragrancing each verse with sweetness—
the whole sky singing Dharma songs.

--- Dedication to Thay Nhat Hanh

The Night You Offered Your Wing

Since the night you offered your wing
You have held the gold key to my soul
you have buried me into your spirit
you have blessed me with righteous hands
you have poured your goodness onto my heart
like olive oil from a jar of stone
and provided me with comfort and rest
from all of my heart aches and afflictions
like a bed without springs
since the night you offered your wing

Premium Member Offered my respects

what could i do
but stop and let pass
the funeral procession
for a beloved horse 
who lived a life
fraught with nobility



AP: Honorable Mention 2025


Premium Member no proof offered

It has come to this that there’s nothing save bliss, 
with divine magnetism humming day and night,
compelling us to plunge into the abyss,
wherein we see our true self as living light,
in time dissolved peace where nothing is amiss,
the afterglow making our auric field bright.
We share this truth readily with one and all,
although we cannot prove these sights we recall.

Premium Member Oscar Lee is Offered Oatmeal

Olivia offered oatmeal to her obstinate dragon Oscar Lee.
He stared at her, wondering “is she trying to kill me?”
“Do not want it,” he told her. “it does not look tasty.”
“I put maple syrup on it, she said, very pleasantly.

So oatmeal was imbibed by the dragon Oscar Lee.
Who now asks for it with syrup almost daily.
Moral of the story is to taste new foods pleasantly.
You also might find a new favorite that is pretty tasty.

Premium Member Blessed Offered Offerings-

O' so fine so fairest ever true
 IN His presence 
You're His Blessings, offering and in HIM
In you He birth good things so true
Blessed are those Offered Offerings 
From our Father to you 

5/20/23
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2023


Premium Member I Was Livid the Day They Offered Me the Nobel Prize

This letter arrived this morning..
"Dear Sir, it is with great honour to inform you
That with the perspicuity of realistic narrative art 
And the diversity and universality of myth 
Your work illuminates the human condition in the world of today 
You have therefore been awarded the Nobel Prize for Literature 
Cheers, you're the man."

What audacity 
To disturb this idiosyncratic taste bubble
This stun and cut bluestocking

My 35 second play
My mango tango d drops
My surgical quality

I ain't getting on a horizontal float wheel
Stockholm can screw themselves
When reprobate blackguards are inferring

I'll stay here  
If there's a need for shooting to start
I'll start shooting

Fun bags and polluted cities
Round off my morning, honey
Time for a tea 

Medieval queens used to drink pints
I'll 'ave two for breakfast
I am not for sale Stockholm

Captain Hook went to Eton
I've got my bachelors 
Leave this knack mental giant alone by-blows

In This Dark World I Have the Light That God Offered Me

In this obscure world,
I am the light he gave me...
That's why I look for the sun
that feeds me
from darkness...
In the face of unhealthy silence,
I attempt to talk to my soul...
even if my selves
become saddened
i search happiness
with harmony...
I abandoned intrigues
and I signed the agreement...
I walk hand in hand now
with poetry...
I'm no longer helpless,
I'm most... nothing sad
 further content,
I'm a poet!

Premium Member Her Hand She'D Offered

Her hand she'd offered
  Her heart he'd spurned  

Tears torched her pillow        
  as Equilibrium burned

Last Poem Offered By a Poet

Gold poet verses
     Shine  poetry paradise
        leave poems offers

Offered Money and No Any Fees

Offered money and no any fees,
 Plus a profitable, tempting term!
 They are scammers, be a stern,
 Banks never did the things like this.

As Love Is Nicely Offered

I-nspiring
M-essage
E-xcellently
E-mploys

B-irthday
A-s
L-ove
I-s
N-icely
O-ffered

Topic: Birthday of Imee C. Balino (November 13) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Premium Member Letting Go

Letting Go
By David J Walker 

Somewhere in the distance
Angry hounds with my scent
Are baying at words I cannot 
Take back

My nerves fray in the fires
Of things I regret 

Words that were never meant
as actions 
Yet hurt as if a thrown fist

Words I cannot entirely forget
And have not been forgiven 
Nor forgotten

I have often offered 
my sins to Jesus
and yet cannot quite 
let them go

Is it me or He who is the 
More skeptical in the 
Transaction 

Sleep, once natural anywhere
Is now an expensive cross
That I publicly bare 
Searching for the right bed
Knowing that the peace I seek
Will only find comfort
 within the confines of my head

Premium Member GOD'S OFFERED RELATIONSHIP

Love divine, sovereign in directive
Compassion leads from carnal perspective.

Reaching-out midst life-building goal
Transforming toward faithful service-pole. 

Indeed sublime, working for forgiveness gain
Sanctifying heart, suffering with guilt-gripped pain.

Reproving sweetness in the guise of care
Uplifting through blessings to share.

Blissful around God’s secured fellowship*
I thank Him for His offered eternal relationship. 

*1Corinthians 1:9 God is faithful, by whom ye were called unto the fellowship of his Son Jesus Christ our Lord. 

July 19, 2020
Honorable Mention, "STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (11)any theme any form" Poetry Contest; Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 7/19/2020.

Once Salvation Is Offered

G-od
U-ses
I-mmeasurable
L-ove
L-etting
E-veryone's
R-ighteous
M-ind
O-pen

O-nce
S-alvation
I-s
O-ffered

Topic: Birthday of Bro. Guillermo Osio, Jr (July 24) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

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