Her Hand She'D Offered

Her hand she'd offered
  Her heart he'd spurned  

Tears torched her pillow        
  as Equilibrium burned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:49 AM
This makes so much sense; and is sadly what happens more than we should ever know.
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Yes, it is one of the great untold stories of all time... :) gw
Hankins Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 6:09 PM
Wow, I'm astounded at the brevity of this poem, yet, at the same time, telling a complete story. Incredible job, gw.
Hankins Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 8:08 PM
Go for it!
Wolf Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 6:55 PM
Thanks for all of the kind words, Milt. I'll see if I can do it in three lines next. Why not? ~ Haiku Harry
Leffanta Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Aye, upsetting indeed!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Grandiose emotion in this one, Gershon!
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