Her Hand She'D Offered

Her hand she'd offered Her heart he'd spurned Tears torched her pillow as Equilibrium burned

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/7/2021 3:49:00 AM

This makes so much sense; and is sadly what happens more than we should ever know.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/8/2021 8:11:00 PM

Yes, it is one of the great untold stories of all time... :) gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/5/2021 6:09:00 PM

Wow, I'm astounded at the brevity of this poem, yet, at the same time, telling a complete story. Incredible job, gw.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/5/2021 8:08:00 PM

Go for it!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/5/2021 6:55:00 PM

Thanks for all of the kind words, Milt. I'll see if I can do it in three lines next. Why not? ~ Haiku Harry

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/5/2021 11:42:00 AM

Aye, upsetting indeed!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2021 5:48:00 AM

Grandiose emotion in this one, Gershon!