Maimed Poems | Examples

Premium Member Hustled in and Hustled Out

a photo moment for the pretty blonde singer
she is hustled into a tent with soldiers who pretend to be happy
this is Viet Nam 1969
They have seen many young men killed and maimed
But at this moment they paste on smiles
pretending all is well
incase their loved ones see this photo
knowing it might be the last time they might see them in any photo
the pretty blonde singer stands sassily in her white gogo boots
knowing nothing of the horrors these men have seen
she is hustled out as fast as she was hustled in
a five-minute photo op
propaganda to try to pretend it was not as bad as it was

Premium Member Remnants

There is always something
unspeakable in what remains—
a fractured spectrum of what once was,
scattered in the leftover bits:
half-maimed, dismembered,
and quietly rejected,
in what we scrape into the compost bin.

Every spick and speck reeks
of the aftertaste of endings —
with our recycled grief and rejection
dissolving in the detritus
of what we could not finish.


Opposable thumbs

He walks alone through the hush of morning,
dew balancing like prayers on blades of grass.
above him, a red kite wheels as geometry drawn
and for a moment,he forgets what we’ve done.

the earth is still kind,still spills blossom from trees
we’ve maimed all that is good with our distain
let rivers write sermons through concrete and spillage.
yet even now,she forgives us, the mother can be kind.


As he stands beneath a birch that grows despite the plastic
coiled at its roots his hand touches the bark there’s warmth.
Its life refusing to retreat from it greatest enemy homoerectus
the weight and menace of opposable thumbs.

Premium Member Whirlwind of Untamed Fantasy

Written: June 18, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

Quote: "The lamps are different, but the Light is the same." By Rumi

        ********************

The shame I bear yearns to be set free,
Fantasies conceal what people must foresee. 
A whirlwind of visualization—eerie, untamed,
Imagination dares where rules are disclaimed.

How I savor the reverie of zeal embrace,
A peculiar whimsy in a captivating place.
And I must admit, my mayhem is deep,
I roamed in a dream no one could leap. 

I discuss virtue when the timing is right,
Hallucination sprouts in the depths of night.
Love and exhaustion long for glitter untamed,
I crave the superb, so easily maimed.

I remain anonymous to forestall disgrace,
My dignity is protected by historical lace. 
But truths linger, and mine stands confined, 
Ambition reveals the power of my mind.

Hearing apologies is beyond my reach,
Inwardly sustained as emotions beseech. 
Each buried object holds a mystery tale,
A single sail has recognized its scale.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Forest of Lost Dreams Felled

I wandered through the forest felled.
Its stumps arrayed as scars.
Its bird song larks forever quelled,
to axed-silent memoirs.

Remnants of trees are now a maze,
traced by entrails of mists.
Curling up as veils between leaves,
that once held memories.

The moon's face shunned, shamed.
The wind scurried all around,
the graves of trees blatantly maimed,
along paths no feet had ground.

The forest of trees, lost its leaves.
Lost its old trunks of dreams.
Lost all its shade and shadows cast,
to vast bright white clearings.

I saw the ancient remnant dells,
spared of incumbent trees,
get crowded out by death-neath spells,
of clearings, felled down to knees.
Form: Verse


Premium Member The Stars Have Stopped Shining

All of a sudden
The stars have stopped shining
Blimming sadness in Heaven
Too many babies are maimed and hurt
Too many infants are starving and suffering
Too many women are crying and mourning
And too many men are being sought
For summary executions
Where countless elders of the sad nations
Have disappeared without a trace
The pain is excruciating. What a disgrace!

All of a sudden
The sky has become extremely dark
Bloody chaos in Heaven
The cemetery is in the park
The buildings are bombed and bulldozed
For heaven’s sake, too many soldiers are overdosed
Where ships, vessels, yachts, boats and canoes are sunk
Somewhere is buried a dead skunk
Where everything is comatose and decomposed
No one can honestly envision a bright future
Where nobody can dry the tears of Mother Nature.

The stars have stopped shining
The moon is visibly absent
The sun is on strike and fasting 
And the weather is eerily aberrant.

Copyright © June 2025 Hébert Logerie, All rights reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of several books of poetry.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Along With The Thunder


The seamless sky called life shined with cloudless ecstasy,
as in the rhapsody of zephyr rippling with rhythm of love
floated my butterfly mind with the motif of my heart.
On its wings I painted in colors the lattice of my identity,
for flowers in my valley bloomed in all seasons for you.

The dawning horizon splashed the spectrum of rapture
to blossom the buds of dreams in my craving course to you,
where I flew on the fervent wings of butterfly with my heart.
Virtual euphoria took me to the realm of fathomless fantasy,
your charm entranced me, didn’t perceive what was coming.

Charcoal clouds turned the sky into a slate rampart 
that fell with fury when the thunder split the sky. 
Sparked by your betrayal I burst asunder in dire dejection,
as my dreams were demolished by the ripping rumble, 
releasing the pent-up anguish designed by the ruined time.

The flushing vale turned into rusted wreckage of torment,
the wilted flowers didn’t see the new sun rise with colors.
Torrent of tear drowned the past in the storm surge,
the maimed melody of the broken wings of the butterfly 
crashed at the brink of somber horizon along with the thunder.

Premium Member The Body Possession Horror

It started as a whisper, faint,  
A voice that slithered through my brain.  
Not my own, but just as clear,  
A presence lurking ever near.  

At first, a shudder down my spine,  
A fleeting thought that wasn’t mine.  
Hands that moved without command,  
Footsteps shifting in the sand.  

My mouth would form a stranger’s sound,  
Words escaping, unprofound.  
My mirror’s face, though still my own,  
Reflected something not alone.  

I fought with will, with endless dread,  
A war inside my weary head.  
Yet every day, it took its claim,  
My mind was dark, my soul felt maimed.  

And then one night, no battle came,  
No voice, no force, no phantom’s name.  
Just silence where the echo stayed—  
Was I the one who’d been betrayed?  

Had I fought, or had I fled?  
Was I me… or was I dead?
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Motorcyclists Terrify Me

Motorcyclists terrify me
I fear they will fly off the road
Who will stop to help?
Will we all keep whizzing by?

Every motorcyclist is someone’s baby
Someone’s grandchild, someone’s love
On the interstate where no one is careful, I cringe.
Terrified the rider is going to be maimed or killed

I say a prayer when I see a motorcyclist heading my way.
I try never to pass him or her.
Hoping not to see them again
Lying next to the road or worse.

tell them, tell them all

IRON MAIDEN - A MATTER OF LIFE AND DEATH:  
The Legacy [Gers / Harris]
-----------------------------------------------------
Tell my family
I am not coming back
I am sent off to war

I signed up for this
I am trained to fight
I fight nobody

Tell them truth
I am well off among
The dead and the dying

I can’t be maimed
I can’t be idle
I am trained to die

Tell them, I prayed
To give y’ll strength 
To bear my loss

For I am sent to war
To bear the cross of
Someone’s ego and lies

Tell my mother
Birth is cheap
Death is cheaper

Son of soil, they call me
I fight for soil, yet
I yearn for peace

Tell my brother
Fear not death
I die for other, just like the other

Tell my sister
Not to pray for me
But to pray for peace

Let peace be bought
Not by blood, not by money
But by His Divine Grace
war
Form: Tristich

Premium Member Life Is Precious

A person's mind, Life, body, is intended/
For the person it was given to/
Not to be messed with in any ways/
In sacred gifts, we find our own/
The mind and life, a body's throne/
By God's design, our vessel created for us alone/
To tarnish such, our souls are maimed/
Life is too precious to seize and bind/
Sadistic ploys, deceit so bare/
To harvest trust, a hollow snare/
Unmask the face, let truth alight/
Reveal the self in honesty/
Never play with heart's intent/
For actions hold divine lament/
On judgement day, our deeds unfold/
The weight of a black heart, it's story told/
Respect life, the love, the core/
For Paradise awaits/
Beyond the door/

My Darkness Remains

Eternal screams
I beg for peace
In my darkness I found silence
In my sleep I did preach
Under moon light I saw sorrow
With the dawn I was given light
Chained to shadows 
Only weeping
Maimed and beaten 
Only preaching
Through my darkness
I gained solace
In my solitude
I gained hope
Only darkness 
Led me deeper
Only absence
Let me free
Under the stars
I saw your shadow
Behind the rock
Your presence preserved me
In your darkness I found safety
Shine your face upon my spirit
Send me deeper into union
Unite my presence with your peace
Salvation given freely
In my darkness I saw your light

Premium Member Monkey Business

marauding foxes  
mutilating fruit
minutemen mischief-makers
marching upon us

pick our pockets
laugh at our loss
   
“No mangoes for sale”

maimed, mangled, mashed
sweetness shamed  
to death
ants and gnats feasting
off illicit mango chutney

sly scamps
evade 
like Bolt-pace
their intake 
of fruit sugars  
insufficient for catching  
robust diabetes
enfeebling the fiends
abducting limbs, or a pedactyl
soulful eyes stare with jeers
sailing
mimicking 
bold breezes 
through the trees
as I could never  
in the canopy of my Caribbean youth
under mother's God-eye 
girls outclimbed me
wearing puffy petticoats
and cumbersome cornrows 
to perpetrate petite thefts
          of mangoes

Premium Member Wars Folly

Wars Folly

Since you are there and I am here, 
have yourself an ice-cold beer. 
Raise your glass and sing with cheer, 
for all you love is standing near. 

This is not the way for me, 
I’m on a deck across the sea. 
The rolling deck as engines roar, 
as in the sky fighter’s soar. 

Barely adult’s young soldiers die, 
as their loved ones at home cry. 
On the land the sea or air, 
loved one’s bleeding over there. 

With hat in hand their families wait, 
for soldiers to come home they anticipate. 
The touch of their skin and smiling eyes, 
to give hope to their heart and spirits rise. 

This is not for all that go, 
say the crosses row on row. 
For at the point of a gun, 
dreams are destroyed and come undone. 

Hundreds dead or maimed for life, 
filled with sorrow, pain, and strife. 
Their mothers look at us and say, 
why do our children have to pay? 

It matters not to them we won, 
their lives are shattered and undone.

By 
Josehf Lloyd Murchison
Form: Ode

A Royal Tale

“There is a charm about the forbidden 
that makes it unspeakably desirable,” 
                                                           Mark Twain

Hark! 
does not the exclaim 
of pain reign 
the winds’ swallow? 
skyward clouds of rain 
are hollow. 
untrammel’d, is it heard 
promptly, 
by the maimed; 
airin’ of songman’s floggin’ 
for ne’er shalt again 
the Queen’s ear be tamed  
by lyrics of him, him who sing 
courtship ballads. 
nor thief nor baron 
opt for the Queen’s favor, 
in land of Holland, 
forbid by King’s order. 
erstwhile, 
uncouth poet claims 
her secret sorrow. 
and she? 
his verses so hearted 
of longin’

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