Monkey Business

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Quote taken from Monkeys - Barbados Pocket Guide: This unwanted interaction between man and monkey has been quite problematic on the island of Barbados as crops are consistently damaged as a result of the intervention of monkeys. As early as the 17th century, a monetary reward was temporarily enforced on green monkeys. In 1975, the population grew rapidly and as a result they were seen as menaces to society as they destroyed crops across the island in search of food. A $5 bounty was reinstituted for every tail that was brought into the Ministry of Agriculture. In an effort to safeguard the monkey, the Primate center offered $25 for every monkey that was captured alive and unharmed.

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Judged: April 30th, 2025

marauding foxes  
mutilating fruit
minutemen mischief-makers
marching upon us

pick our pockets
laugh at our loss
   
“No mangoes for sale”

maimed, mangled, mashed
sweetness shamed  
to death
ants and gnats feasting
off illicit mango chutney

sly scamps
evade 
like Bolt-pace
their intake 
of fruit sugars  
insufficient for catching  
robust diabetes
enfeebling the fiends
abducting limbs, or a pedactyl
soulful eyes stare with jeers
sailing
mimicking 
bold breezes 
through the trees
as I could never  
in the canopy of my Caribbean youth
under mother's God-eye 
girls outclimbed me
wearing puffy petticoats
and cumbersome cornrows 
to perpetrate petite thefts
          of mangoes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 1/26/2025 12:13:00 AM
LOL. Good one. I like the use of Bolt's name here. Like your use of alliteration as well
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