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Whirlwind of Untamed Fantasy

Written: June 18, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Quote: "The lamps are different, but the Light is the same." By Rumi ******************** The shame I bear yearns to be set free, Fantasies conceal what people must foresee. A whirlwind of visualization—eerie, untamed, Imagination dares where rules are disclaimed. How I savor the reverie of zeal embrace, A peculiar whimsy in a captivating place. And I must admit, my mayhem is deep, I roamed in a dream no one could leap. I discuss virtue when the timing is right, Hallucination sprouts in the depths of night. Love and exhaustion long for glitter untamed, I crave the superb, so easily maimed. I remain anonymous to forestall disgrace, My dignity is protected by historical lace. But truths linger, and mine stands confined, Ambition reveals the power of my mind. Hearing apologies is beyond my reach, Inwardly sustained as emotions beseech. Each buried object holds a mystery tale, A single sail has recognized its scale.

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Date: 6/29/2025 6:00:00 AM
Dear gifted friend, I am once more back to your poem with hearty Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 6/27/2025 11:46:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful/creative "Whirlwind of Untamed Fantasy" write again. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Date: 6/26/2025 10:53:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win in Constance`s contest with an excellent poem on frenzies of fancy, which, however, conceal a lot or reality from a superb mind and pen as can be gleaned from: "But truths linger, and mine stands confined, Ambition reveals the power of my mind." Wish you a wonderful day.
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Date: 6/26/2025 10:52:00 PM
Congrats Sotto. Beautiful honest earthy expression expressing fantasy vocabulary. Lovely, enjoyed this heart opening read today. Blessings. x.
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Date: 6/22/2025 10:21:00 PM
"Imagination dares where rules are disclaimed." Your poem is classical and the title itself is so captivating. Roaming into the hidden recesses of imagination and fantasy is thrilling. It defies all boundaries and rules. The mind is capable of undertaking such an odyssey any time. All the Best dear Lasaad.
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Date: 6/20/2025 10:42:00 AM
Isn't it fun to let your imagination roam and visit places that the mind conjures up and as it has the ability to do this, perhaps it is therapeutic for us to indulge in fantasy sometimes. Great write, I'm with you 100 percent of the way my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/19/2025 1:58:00 AM
Your imagination runs riot. A clever poem that should rate high.
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Date: 6/19/2025 1:57:00 AM
- A wonderful poem with your imagination, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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Date: 6/18/2025 5:42:00 PM
A whirlwind of visualization—eerie, untamed, Imagination dares where rules are disclaimed...
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Date: 6/18/2025 5:36:00 PM
What a poem, as yours always are- it's bare and beautiful
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Date: 6/18/2025 1:52:00 PM
What a creative write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" I found it took extra time/thought with these words but it was a fun write. Have a lovely day writing away...............
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