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What are some signs of the times Q and A

Q  Is it Saudi Arabia  and France that are spearheading the 'two state solution' 
     between Palestine and Israel 'in yet another failed land for peace negotiation'?

A  Yes

Q...

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Categories: revised, 10th grade, 11th grade, 12th grade, 6th
Form: Prose


Poem Revised Memorial Day May 30th, 2022 At 1500 Hours

Poem revised Memorial Day May 30th, 2022 at 1500 hours

Flagrante delict adulterous sordid behavior 
automatically linkedin with Lothario;
an unscrupulous seducer of women, 
based upon a character 
in The Impertinent Curious Man, 
a story within a...

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Categories: revised, absence, abuse, adventure, anger, black african american,
Form: Rhyme

Poems About Poems Vi

Poems about Poems VI

The Board
by Michael R. Burch

Accessible rhyme is never good.
The penalty is understood?
soft titters from dark board rooms where
the businessmen paste on their hair
and, Walter Mitties, woo the Muse
with reprimands of Dr. Seuss.

The...

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Categories: revised, extended metaphor, heaven, muse, passion, poems, poetry,
Form: Rhyme

Juvenilia: Early Poems Xi

Juvenilia: Early Poems XI

Myth
by Michael R. Burch

after the sprung rhythm of Dylan Thomas

Here the recalcitrant wind
sighs with grievance and remorse
over fields of wayward gorse
and thistle-throttled lanes.

And she is the myth of the scythed wheat
hewn and...

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Categories: revised, boy, poems, poetry, student, teen, teenage, writing,
Form: Rhyme

Radiance, For Dylan Thomas

Radiance
by Michael R. Burch

for Dylan Thomas

The poet delves earth’s detritus—hard toil—
for raw-edged nouns, barbed verbs, vowels’ lush bouquet;
each syllable his pen excretes—dense soil,
dark images impacted, rooted clay.

The poet sees the sea but feels its meaning—
the...

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Categories: revised, earth, light, love, poems, poetry, poets, words,
Form: Sonnet


Poems About Dylan Thomas

These are poems about Dylan Thomas, as well as poems "for" and "after" Dylan Thomas. Dylan Thomas was one of my favorite poets from my early teens and has remained so over the years. I...

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Categories: revised, poems, poetry, poets, romantic, words, write, writing,
Form: Rhyme

Free Verse Iii

Salve
by Michael R. Burch

for the victims and survivors of 9-11

The world is unsalvageable ...
but as we lie here
in bed
stricken to the heart by love
despite war’s
flickering images,

sometimes we still touch,

laughing, amazed,
that our flesh
does not despair
of love
as...

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Categories: revised, body, desire, kiss, love, together, war, world,
Form: Free verse
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Jean Lapresle: the Solitary Oak On Mount Kremlin Bicetre

 A French ‘Indianist’ Doctor: A Tribute to a Die-hard Humanist
                         ...

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© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: revised, celebrity, endurance, french, loss, solitude, tribute,
Form: Elegy
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Poems: I Didn'T Say Poem

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© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: revised, poetry,
Form: Free verse
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Where Do We Come In

Where do we come in
					in medias res  not knowing nor caring when
doesn’t everybody pine being number one we leave behind our lives in pages  pictures  or else make for images of what...

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© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: revised, caregiving, character, humanity, leadership, people, rights, sports,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
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Tail Spin, Revised

This page shows my writing process and is part of Poetrysoup's first workshop.  The workshop's intent is to reveal how revision strengthens a poem. Constructive feedback can be a gift.  Should any journal...

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Categories: revised, courage, fear, love hurts,
Form: Free verse
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Back Door Side Door Front Door : Which Door Might a Confucian Take

Back Door Side Door Front Door : Which door might a Confucian take
 
..................for René ETIEMBLE (Jan. 26, 1909 – Jan. 7, 2002)*

In homage - dedicated to the Chair Professor of Comparative Literature
.................at the prestigious...

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© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: revised, books, eulogy, french, poems, son, tribute,
Form: Elegy
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No Part of the World

NO PART OF THE WORLD (Part 1)


Have you read Jesus words at John 17:16?

Referring to his disciples he said
"They are no part of THE WORLD, just as I am no part of THE WORLD"

What could...

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Categories: revised, bible, christian, god, gospel, hate, humanity, truth,
Form: Didactic
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Geese, Goslings and the Bridge

Geese, Goslings and the Bridge

Sometimes, when you least expect it, Mother Nature makes a u-turn and draws you into the ridiculous.  Such was the time recently as I was returning from a friend’s home...

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Categories: revised, bird, family,
Form: Metrical Tale

Juvenilia: Early Poems Xii

Juvenilia: Early Poems XII

Because You Came to Me
by Michael R. Burch

for Beth

Because you came to me with sweet compassion
and kissed my furrowed brow and smoothed my hair,
I do not love you after any fashion,
but wildly,...

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Categories: revised, boy, child, childhood, poems, student, teen, teenage,
Form: Rhyme
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Easter Origins

"Worship in spirit and truth"

With Easter approaching, many people Christian and non-Christian are exposed to this celebration and may have questions concerning the various teachings, rites, rituals and traditions that are promulgated by public worship...

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Categories: revised, bible, christian, easter, god, gospel, jewish,
Form: Didactic
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A Journey Through Time Final Part Revised

Now as the years passed by everyone became so tired
the heaps of things scattered around became too much to bear
some benevolence was certainly grand but this was too much
the two felt unable to undertake ...

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Categories: revised, journey, symbolism, visionary,
Form: Epic

Goodbye Six Pack Hello Poetry Scribes

Goodbye six pack hello* poetry scribes

My poetic side COSMOFUNNEL
wordsmith thanks tumblr in his noggin
ofttimes triggering babbling brook 
to swell after deluge
becoming stream of consciousness runnel
carving, gouging, and liquidating topography 
qua zee mow toe natural formed...

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Categories: revised, adventure, angst, april, body, father, hair, love,
Form: Rhyme
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War and Peace: That Midst Nations and Nationals

War and Peace: That Midst Nations And Nationals

War and Peace, a classical fiction by Leo Tolstoy, first published as Voyna I Mir in 1865–69. This picturesque reflection of early 19th-century Russian culture saw as its...

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© Hilo Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: revised, allegory, angst, life, marriage, war,
Form: Dramatic Verse

June 12th 2017 Transition Revisited and Revised Today 4 2 2021

June 12th 2017 TRANSITION revisited and revised today 4/2/2021

While scrolling over outdated docs
(i.e. namely OpenOffice documents)
derrière seated upon hard backed chair,
yours truly came upon following poem
to share with anonymous readers,
whereby slight modifications 
got made to...

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Categories: revised, adventure, angel, anxiety, blessing, conflict, husband, july,
Form: Rhyme
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The Armless Ambidextrian

I. The Love of Minds

The volume on the desk,
The one not claimed by dust or burned
By light, will follow her to bed tonight.
Its pages will be turned and smothered,
Each in turn, so as not to...

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Categories: revised, conflict, death, depression, desire, fear, life,
Form: Free verse

Guisachan Park

Condensed Spoken Word Piece:

Here's a condensed version of the script, focusing on the key themes and emotions:

"(Sighs) I walked out of that interview, feeling like I'd wasted my time.

They didn't care, they weren't listening, they...

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Categories: revised, analogy, angst, spoken word, voice,
Form: Spoken Word

Introspectively

Understanding myself, and towards developing  introvertedly 
The parameters of today, yet most lay dormant inside of me
Questioning the how, as in such, the extended inner faculty 
Fractured as then, it's an opposing end, and...

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Categories: revised, depression, faith, fear, feelings, forgiveness, growth,
Form: Acrostic
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Old and New Halloween Poems

No Halloween Candy

I can't get no Halloween candy.
I can't get no Halloween candy.
But I try, and I try, and I try, and I try.
I can't get no.  I can't get no.

Well I'm walking door...

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Categories: revised, fear, halloween,
Form: Rhyme
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Week 2 - Stages By Herman Hesse - a Second Translation Revised

As ev’ry flower wilts and ev’ry youngster				11
Must age, so manifests each stage of living,				11
All wisdom blossoms too and ev’ry virtue				11
Enjoys its time, and cannot last forever.				11
At ev’ry call of life, the heart of man should,				11
(Without...

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Categories: revised, journey, life, poetry, writing,
Form: Verse
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