Loa Poems | Examples


O NATIVE LAND

O Sierra Loa, the mountain of lions
A land of thy free, O native land.
A symbol of God's majestic hand
A nation so small yet peaceful and grand.

Beneath your ever clear sky
Merry mountains and gay valleys lie.
Home to air that touches hearts far and wide.
For you my song and hymns will always bide.

Your rivers, your vast and wide seas
As blue as the eyes of lion mountains
Flow like the taps of royal fountains.
The beauty of you my eyes will always see.

Oh native land, my home, my heart
In you I found the courage since the very start
To wave through the storms of our gloomy past.
The love in you, o native land, all my worries I cast.
Form: Lyric

Premium Member Pearl Of The Orient

A place of 7000 islands
and natural beauty,
know as
Pearl of the Orient.

Images lovely to behold,
a rich and diverse history,
of pearl diving and much more.
History tells of, 
The Pearl of Loa Tzu,
and his discovery of 
a huge pearl from a 
fourteen pound clam !
Over 1000 years old !
Oh, sublime the many sunny beaches, 
divine the flavorful food,
colorful the vibrant festivals,
beautiful in spirit the people,
so rich the culture.

Crossroads of the Pacific Ocean
and the South Asia Sea,
the Philippines is a place,
where dreams can come true !


Premium Member A Rift Zone

*Neighboring Mauna Kea has been sleeping for centuries, but notice the red flows popping and flowing in the gray areas below Mauna Loa's actual summit. Those are rift zones that pave through gray areas untouched, then pop out further downhill wiping out whole communities. BEWARE OF RIFT ZONE--which has been ongoing now.

Mauna Loa created Kilauea Iki, Pu'u O'o, Halemaumau, and Loihi Seamount (the underwater volcano).

*Image of The Big Island Rift Zones by UHH

A Rift Zone

Our fatigued town of Hilo by the bay,
woke late Sunday and watched black turn to gold.
Midnight's oil peters ere dawn the next day,
seen three lava streamed, some people unsold.

Volcanologists call it, a rift zone,
where red skies mock as magma glows on top
while forcing lava tubes neath, treks unknown.
O'er a hundred quakes daily, stresses swap.

Slams of earth's crust formed Everest's complete,
Mauna Loa was churned out from the ground up.
Twenty-nine faced thirty-three thousand feet,
shows this volcano's peaks, win the gold cup.

Confidence of sight, conscious bets clearly,
ignorants deal with escape plans dearly.

2022 December 01
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Aa To Zz 1 To Infinity - , Eureka's;: Why--'Visualize the Question Mark Si Vous Plez'

A to Z 1 to Infinity - , Eureka's;:  N O   M O?

VOILA!

Being kicked to the curb
while skipping to the loo
my friends.
Now back to my shake and bake,
small town of Hilo,
that sits on the bay
below erupting
Mauna Loa &
the 100+ tremors
daily since it began
this past Sunday late at night.

Aloha Hilo Poet William

If Only We Could

IF   ONLY   WE   COULD


If only we could hold the steady  
Pulses of time through the earth,
So likely to stop at any moment.

We’d calmly plant marigold and pansy beds, 
Even find time to learn the piano,
If only we could. 

If only we could visit again
Bali’s nail-biting thrumble of dormant 
Volcanoes less reliable than Mauna Loa.

We just don’t want to visit you here, 
Between cold stones and cut flowers ;
But to stay home with your pansies and you, 
If only we could.

..........................................................................

Written 27 March  2021
For contest called   "Mother"
Sponsored by Constance La France


Premium Member Oh Deer, You Again

Oh DEER, You again….


At the crack of dawn
Outside my bedroom window
Unexpected noise?   Chewy, crunchy, crumbly
……I’m trying to sleep

Oh dear!  deer is staring at me 
     fearlessly

Uninvited guest crackling my succulent plants 
for breakfast

Astonishing red, orange and pink sky at sunset
Oh dear,   You again……
And you even brought a friend!

Sipping heavenly rainwater in Bromeliad’s central reservoir

Oh dear, dinner menu upgraded to  
cabbage-like 
                                  Mauna Loa succulents
large flat leaves frilled at burgundy 
   edges.  But pink showy flowers
                                    wavy, ruffled, bumpy 
                                      thick foliage leaves
- absolutely your favorite

Dark in late evening
Two yellow dots shinning in mystic hill

Oh dear,   You again……

Parasitic

Let's give a big shout out to all those parasites out there 

vile and creepy 
full of doom 
entering at night 
by the light of the moon 

slyly scoot across the room 
nails click on floor 
a malicious tune 
clicking clicking be there soon 

invading bodies 
while they sleep 
parasitic ones 
you go too deep 

traversing thru body 
thru heart getting fed 
undulating darkly 
they bloody our beds 

they cant live without us 
they'll breed till were dead 

inside our bodies 
swimming thru veins 
parasitic ones eating up our brains 
till finally we're crazy 
completely deranged 

Vandellia cirrhosa 
Loa Loa too 
these deadly parasites 
got nothing on you 

you leave when your done 
you search for another 
what is your deadly name 

we all call you FATHER
Form: Rhyme

Kyd My Cat

Kyd my cat played hooky from giddy-up to whoa
                              I had to send him to the land of Mauna Loa
                                    He changed from bad to worse
                                           By debits to my purse
                                 "Papa","I am Cavity the cat boana boa"












                             KYD MY CAT/Limerick/fun/humor/nonsense/cat/
                                  Copyright© RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
                                                      11/20/2014
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Thank You For Comments About Carol Brown's Contest "what's Your Pleasure"

Dear Soup Members,

Carol's list of winners is much too long for me to comment on individually, but I am 
reading each of your winning poems I may have missed and I want to congratulate all 
of you on your winning poems! Carol really had her hands full with this contest because 
of all of these amazing entries. You are to be commended for all your effort Carol. You 
did a wonderful job in choosing the winners and I am honored to be among them. 

I want to thank everyone for your sweet congrats on my poem being included. 
Mahalo Nui Loa! (Hawaiian for Thank you very much) Aloha, Connie

Premium Member Egungun Festival Togo, Africa

Long have me feet walked..bare upon de earth of mother Afreeca.
Days, passing in a flow’r chain round de brow of de morn.
De sacred drum calls wid de heart beattin of de Hougan’s soul
Afreeca’s soul ...

Long, long, de walkin from village mounta’n citie 
to the hounfour ... de temple of de people. 
We walk joy’us, and penit’nt and pleadin‘.

Mama carries de food gift fer Ogou Balanjo on her head,
corn meal she ‘as ground fine. "Ah, de poor sick child"
De glass beads aroun‘ Mama’s neck shine
like her tears in de sun an de sweat on her skin. 
We ‘ear de rattlin‘ and de drummin.
Dust of de many feet rises.

'undreds and thousands of worshipers pack de square
in front of de temple and dance red, gold, orange swirl 
honorin‘ our parents and der parents.

Long, long, we dance, we dance, and de Loa arrive ...
Mama falls possessed by Ogou Balanjo ... 
De white robes of de pure at heart, and does wid de white faces
dance de prayers, de priests returns from de sacred grove
white rock, egg white of wealth and happiness

de year will be good ... de sick child will heal ...

Long, long, the world has spun in a daisy chain
Around de sun............

Loa

”... Seven dimes placed and a penny in my shoe…”
The law of attraction works really quite well
Undeniable secrets of long ago
Modern understandings prove to know
Better mixed up what the Bookie was to show.
”....Times a changin’... so hear we go….”

Bajillions of people for how many years?
Focused on stories of love or fear?
Looking inward to see it’s clear
A motion of Soul, returns the great gear.
Grounding of a pole in copper fields
SixtyNine lines minus one Reveals….
88 constellations on a primary wheel
Five toes on One, very delicate heal…
Five decks a glass shoe, forged of steal
”.... forgive me Lord, A pearl in the snow…”

Seven coins traced eight lines to know.

Loa?

The law of attraction is a fraction of truth
Magnetic motion ensues a sleuth to view
LOA is only part way to the joy within You
Detecting inflection is the kitten's clue and
Relaying the play for your color of Blues...?
Is a Lion wearing Pink, on Her jogging shoes.

Premium Member Thank You

I want to say thank you
In some of the languages of the world
To all the soup members
For you have helped my heart to twirl
You've add bits of humor, rhythm, and definitely some rhyme
From writings on many topics when you have the time

Thank you (English)
Muchas gracias (Spanish)
Danke schoon (German) Suppose to have two dots on top of the schoon but I don't 
know how to do that
Merci beaucoup (French)
Arigato gozaimasu (Japanese)
Grazie (Italian)
Topadh leibh (Scottish Gaelic)
Toda raba (Hebrew)
Mamnoon (Farsi (Persian))
Spasibo (Russian)
Liels paldies (Latvian)
Efharisto poli (Greek)
Toa chie or Xie Xie (Chinese)
Shukran gazilan (Arabic)
Obrigado (Portugese)
Mahalo nui loa (Hawaiian)

In a round about way this came from the internet. If any are wrong correct me . If 
you can add some put it in the comments box.  Everything we learn helps us to 
grow.

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